VG's comics!!~ +art - Page 3

On December 07 2008 21:15 relaxxl wrote:
The art is very good, but they stories and dialogue are a bit clumsy. For instance, in the second comic, you left allied vision on which makes no sense, the protoss would see the mines. Also in the 3rd one its kind of hard to tell what's going on until you read the tiny little "grab" by her butt. And the first one goes on too long and the premise just isn't funny.

On October 26 2009 07:46 Spartan wrote:
New comic strip out today:
http://vilegaming.com/comics.x/7

On October 26 2009 09:50 IntoTheWow wrote:
I was also the one that PM'd you the idea for this one :p

On October 26 2009 10:20 AcrossFiveJulys wrote:
The comics are great visually, but the punchlines seem forced and badly executed. For example, in issue #4, the idea is decent, but unfortunately stim packs do exactly the opposite of what's depicted in the comic: they increase aggression and adrenaline for the marines, rather than make them see enemies as cute playful creatures. You can't just go against what the lore is commonly known to be in order to fit a funny idea. All in all, I feel like the amount of effort being put into the storyline and captions is like 1% of the effort being put into the drawings, and this ruins them for me.