EPTVery well written, this feels like reading a short story. 10/10 so far!
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Krowser
Canada788 Posts
Very well written, this feels like reading a short story. 10/10 so far! | ||
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ZBiR
Poland1092 Posts
The story itself is awesome, and you really can write  One thing I didn't like was that whole "if it were a movie" but overall very good work, keep it up | ||
GHOSTCLAW
United States17042 Posts
On August 08 2008 11:45 JeeJee wrote: We require additional updates! Agreed. I must know the ending :0 | ||
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bustaBust
Canada469 Posts
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brian
United States9629 Posts
On August 09 2008 01:52 bustaBust wrote: I skimmed for the first 15%, way to long for tl to read. yeah, so long as you ignore the 40+ that have read it. looking at all the pages of encouragement, i think i made a gross underestimate. | ||
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GinNtoniC
Sweden2945 Posts
Now I finally understand how children felt about waiting a year for the next chapter of Harry Potter. Crap, this is good stuff for real! | ||
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imperfect
Canada1652 Posts
On August 09 2008 03:06 GinNtoniC wrote: This story makes me do silly things. I find myself coming back to this thread twice a day just to check if it's been updated. Now I finally understand how children felt about waiting a year for the next chapter of Harry Potter. Crap, this is good stuff for real! qft. | ||
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Krowser
Canada788 Posts
My thoughts exactly And as Johnny Depp once said while impersonating Raoul Duke: FINISH the fucking story!!! | ||
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ulszz
Jamaica1787 Posts
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Nikk
United States63 Posts
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Klive5ive
United Kingdom6056 Posts
Now I know what it must've felt like to be a fan of Charles Dickens. (Isn't that a better comparison than Harry Potter?!) | ||
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The_Protagonist_
United States40 Posts
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fredd
Estonia256 Posts
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BaDayOri
Korea (South)469 Posts
EDIT: I cant ever imagine myself being drunk enough to take a shit in front of everyone and wipe my ass with a dog.. hows that even possible LOL | ||
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Butigroove
Seychelles2061 Posts
On August 09 2008 01:52 bustaBust wrote: I skimmed for the first 15%, way to long for tl to read.  Anyways, I looooovee the story so far. I bookmarked it and have been checking 2-3 times a day for updates lol. | ||
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EGMachine
United States1643 Posts
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Spenguin
Australia3316 Posts
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Sze-Yuen
Canada23 Posts
 i WANT TO KNOW.. KEEP GOING !!! | ||
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Aerox
Malaysia1213 Posts
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brian
United States9629 Posts
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