Good / Bad ?
my first time building one so any advice or critic plz do
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
Good / Bad ? my first time building one so any advice or critic plz do | ||
Bruceling
United States392 Posts
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ReTr0[p.S]
Argentina1590 Posts
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
of course its not a "Html" website what should i call it then? | ||
Ethenielle
Norway1006 Posts
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Tadzio
3340 Posts
1) The font you chose isn't friendly at all. Not fun to read. In webdesign Clarity > Cool-factor everyday of the week. 2) I assume based on the design that you wanted the template to fit snuggly into a browser (no scrolling), but it doesn't. Even when I hide my browser's toolbars, I still need to scroll to see the whole page. You could stand to lose some of the pit-o-darkness at the top. Just delete a few < p > tags and you'll be fine here. 3) What's with the animated buttons? Very distracting. Very unpleasant. They make the font choice even worse. Lose them for something that looks like it belongs. 4) I know the on-mouseover and on click thing is fun, but ask yourself if it really helps draw your visitors into the site. Those tricks take download time, so you risk alienating 56kers. Is it worth the extra download time? This is much less an issue than it was a few years ago, but it's still something to think about. 5) Many novices like to use a lot of theme colors on their webpages, but you seem to have a handle on how many you're allowed. Any more than 3 theme colors (in your case, blue, black and white) can be offensive to the eye. You done good with limiting yourself. However, dark blue and black are poor colors to match together. In less than ideal lighting, with glare on the monitor, or because of a users graphix card/settings, these colors can start to lose their distinctness. Consider choosing different colors. Seriously consider making the background a light color (some shade of off-white)... black backgrounds-- despite being ultra sexy-- are very hard to pull off. 6) I'm sure you realize this, but it's really the most important part of a website: YOU HAVE NO CONTENT! Get some! Stat! lol Nice first effort. Best of luck! | ||
Chill
Calgary25939 Posts
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
mostly Fireworks/Flash then dreamweaver for ftp well i stole some stuff from this site i was messing with But i built it also. you can see the buttons/top/bottom banner. | ||
KrAzYfoOL
Australia3037 Posts
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Alborz
Canada1551 Posts
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Klogon
MURICA15980 Posts
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Mascherano
Argentina1726 Posts
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skyglow1
New Zealand3962 Posts
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ToKoreaWithLove
Norway10161 Posts
Buttons are horrible, take them away. Make a better background. Align the site completely to the left without the border. Maybe make it a bit lighter, and also make the text easier to read, perhaps by adding a bit more contrast. Don't use moving things unless you can do it in a nice and not disturbing manner. My experience includes working for a professional web design firm at the age of 15, and making tons of web pages in my spare time for 5-6 years. | ||
MaGnIfIcA
Norway2312 Posts
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to miss the mark
Bosnia-Herzegovina1381 Posts
on (rollOver) {gotoAndPlay(1); on (rollOut) {gotoAndPlay(24); } } :-D | ||
WhatisProtoss
Korea (South)2324 Posts
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DarK]N[exuS
China1441 Posts
Also go easy guys, he's not making his site for a company or something, I mean it's hosted on a free server | ||
Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
On November 07 2006 12:07 DarK]N[exuS wrote: I agree it's a little too flashy. Don't overdo it, I know a lot of first time designers do that. Also go easy guys, he's not making his site for a company or something, I mean it's hosted on a free server heh thanks for the back and everyone else thanks for your critic trust me i learn alot from you guys. keep it coming. and yeah i didnt go into this with a "professional" mindset of course i know the difference between what is Properly presentable and what is extreme. i did this purely to learn / have fun. i think that explains the hostile buttons. | ||
mel_ee
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