This is great! There's so many terrible comedians, even on TV. While you weren't very professional in that clip (losing your thread of thought sometimes), the material surely beats many other comedians I've heard.

The funny coincidence is that I just started watching the Seinfeld TV series (planning on watching all episodes). I think he's a great example of a 'clean' comedian. Maybe a bit boring for some people but I like him alot.

Nitrogen

United States5345 Posts

March 25 2010 01:24 GMT

#43

that was good, but the part that made me laugh hardest was when you said like "readheads have lots of..." then some guy in the audience just yells out DICKS

Leath

Canada1724 Posts

March 25 2010 01:44 GMT

#44

I have seen a lot of stand ups, and most are very weak.

Yours was pretty nice. I enjoyed it a lot.
The only thing that bothered me is how you lose the flow at times. But it's no biggie, it was funny. Good material, not too forceful. Made me laugh ^_^

zulu_nation8

China26351 Posts

March 25 2010 01:48 GMT

#45

I like it, very nice. I like the way you involve the crowd

mOnion

United States5657 Posts

March 25 2010 20:37 GMT

#46

you guys are awesome, i'm really hoping the other three (3), at least, people on TL that I know are comedians get this good of a response ^_^

i didnt mean for this to be a "look how awesome I am thread", but its definitely making me feel good! especially with how hard internet nerds are to please lol

I love your jokes, and the way you deliver them, but your voice is aarrgghhh >_<

haha, my eternal struggle dude. trust me, i know @_@

SCC-Faust

United States3736 Posts

March 25 2010 20:53 GMT

#47

This was hilarious. And I don't think your voice matters. Any tone would have had the same hilarity.

Except monotone people. Stand-up just won't work if you are monotone.

Raydog

United States632 Posts

March 25 2010 21:33 GMT

#48

mOnion you remind me of Kyle Cease, have you seen his standup?

One of my favorite comedians.

mOnion

United States5657 Posts

March 25 2010 21:38 GMT

#49

On March 26 2010 06:33 Raydog wrote:
mOnion you remind me of Kyle Cease, have you seen his standup?

One of my favorite comedians.

ya he's fantastic, ima HUGE fan of his. my top 5 for sure. love his random style

Day[9]

United States7366 Posts

March 25 2010 21:39 GMT

#50

Falling

Canada11439 Posts

March 25 2010 21:46 GMT

#51

This is pretty good. As for the whole clean vs dirty comics. Personally I find dirty comic humour rather juvenile- as in heehee, he said a bad word. Except that that sort of language is rather common anyways, so I don't see why it would be shocking. Maybe there's some good humour within dirty humour, but I really think people are reacting to the 'bad' words rather than the humour behind the bad words. (Sorry for sweeping generalizations, but that's my thoughts on the matter.)

For that reason Brian Regan and Jim Gaffigan will always be my favourite comics and political parody, my favourite form of humour. (aka Jon Stewart.)

Oh, and I'm really liking day9's contribution.