EPTTL Comedians Thread - Page 2
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KwarK
United States44181 Posts
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Chupacabra(UCSD)
Mexico225 Posts
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Lefnui
United States753 Posts
You shouldn't restrict yourself by a meaningless distinction between "clean" and "dirty" comedy. I see absolutely no reason for it. Do you have some moral opposition to it? Do you believe you will find a niche with your approach, perhaps a Christian audience? You said that it improves your writing, but how? You have a strange energy about you in the performance. It seems like nervousness or insecurity. I think that has a very negative effect on the delivery of material. | ||
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mOnion
United States5657 Posts
On March 25 2010 05:40 AltaiR_ wrote: that was nice but, it seemed like there were points where you were trying to be forcingly funny with mainstream jokes like blondes and you dont have a girlfriend, be creative man. sometimes you just gotta go with bland old shit to get laughs outta these bar crowds man :/ i dun like it, i'd rather do my OMG SUPER CREATIVE shit, but funny's is funny's ty for all the good comments everyone btw ^_^ | ||
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mOnion
United States5657 Posts
On March 25 2010 05:55 Lefnui wrote: I thought it was really awful but I have sympathy for you because it's well known how difficult stand-up is. I'm sure I would fail miserably at it also and I'm no expert on the matter. Having said that, there are a few things I'm certain of: You shouldn't restrict yourself by a meaningless distinction between "clean" and "dirty" comedy. I see absolutely no reason for it. Do you have some moral opposition to it? Do you believe you will find a niche with your approach, perhaps a Christian audience? You said that it improves your writing, but how? You have a strange energy about you in the performance. It seems like nervousness or insecurity. I think that has a very negative effect on the delivery of material. BUMMER dont worry though I'm hilarious :D its an old show, i was kinda nervous, the distinction's not meaningless cuz it adds flavor to your set. yup yup yup i gotta find my new shit..... is your name m. onion as in monsieur onion or is it pronounced like your last name? the capital O throws me off, but monsieur onion is a sweet name i originally wanted my ID to be Onion as in Onion Knights from the final fantasy's (the strongest class) but it was always taken, so i realized my last name is Munyon, which rhymes with Onion, so i just made it mOnion ^_^ and yes i have become increasingly more aware of urbandictionary's vulgar definition T_T | ||
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mikeymoo
Canada7170 Posts
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mOnion
United States5657 Posts
On March 25 2010 06:49 mikeymoo wrote: Didn't Day[9] have a video of his stand-up a couple years back? Hopefully he shows up in this thread. yeh if he doesnt post it soon i'm going to for him lol i have his set that he did for his HS graduation. SO GOOD >_< | ||
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mikeymoo
Canada7170 Posts
On March 25 2010 06:51 mOnion wrote: yeh if he doesnt post it soon i'm going to for him lol i have his set that he did for his HS graduation. SO GOOD >_< Yeah that's the one I'm thinking of. | ||
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dyren
United States260 Posts
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Pure.Freedom
United States114 Posts
"... doesnt make you a nerd, ok, that makes you my ex-girlfriend" "im just kidding he doesnt call me a dissapointment, he totally beats me" I also liked the math joke... but i hope you stick with it and have the desire to keep coming up with new material, this was pretty legit | ||
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Chupacabra(UCSD)
Mexico225 Posts
On March 25 2010 06:48 mOnion wrote: BUMMER dont worry though I'm hilarious :D its an old show, i was kinda nervous, the distinction's not meaningless cuz it adds flavor to your set. yup yup yup i gotta find my new shit..... i originally wanted my ID to be Onion as in Onion Knights from the final fantasy's (the strongest class) but it was always taken, so i realized my last name is Munyon, which rhymes with Onion, so i just made it mOnion ^_^ and yes i have become increasingly more aware of urbandictionary's vulgar definition T_T I don't know why... but when you said yup yup yup I had this depressing flashback from Duckie in Little Foot... I think my eyes watered up a bit. | ||
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HazMat
United States17077 Posts
http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=80032 | ||
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CharlieMurphy
United States22895 Posts
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MiniRoman
Canada3953 Posts
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Warrior Madness
Canada3791 Posts
My favourite line was: "I shed a single tear, it hit the floor and a flower bloomed." I don't know why but that made me laugh hard. | ||
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love1another
United States1844 Posts
Each of your jokes, however, I liked A LOT! | ||
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Chrispy
Canada5878 Posts
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love1another
United States1844 Posts
On March 25 2010 10:00 Chrispy wrote: Ahh man Day[9]'s video is soooo good. What can't Sean do? Fly. | ||
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Archaic
United States4024 Posts
That's what Bear Semen™ is for. | ||
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LuMiX
China5757 Posts
On March 25 2010 09:13 Chupacabra(UCSD) wrote: I don't know why... but when you said yup yup yup I had this depressing flashback from Duckie in Little Foot... I think my eyes watered up a bit. don't you mean A Land Before Time? | ||
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