[Commentary] Mantoss vs Justin

Seraphim

United States4467 Posts

June 01 2007 11:26 GMT

[url blocked]

http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=8905462142194838457

Thanks so much for the feedback that I received in my previous commentary!

I hope you enjoy this one, I think it's a lot better than the last one.

P.S. Even though Klaz posted the same commentary game before this post, I swear I did NOT watch his and get ideas from him. This is purely my material. Thanks again.

Seraphim

United States4467 Posts

June 01 2007 11:26 GMT

double

GongKyuckTerran

Croatia1096 Posts

June 01 2007 11:55 GMT

ahahaha
eeee iii ahh fffffffffffffff
u need more commentary training
sorry i didnt like it,hope u did next thing really good

MoNKeYSpanKeR

United States2869 Posts

June 01 2007 12:05 GMT

Your cute, try not to get so flustered hunny <3

SpiritoftheTunA

United States20903 Posts

June 01 2007 12:08 GMT

NO NO NO NO NO NO DONT DIE

ehehehehe :3

it's good, though try to state less of the obvious and theorycraft a bit more, though.

Raithed

China7078 Posts

June 01 2007 12:08 GMT

you need to try and do more, its good, i like your voice, very clear and loud but you are missing the excitement.

OctoPuSs

Canada5279 Posts

June 01 2007 12:20 GMT

You don't have anything interesting to say.

evanthebouncy!

United States12796 Posts

June 01 2007 12:37 GMT

DOnt's stutter man! :D
Otherwise it's okay, You tried to sound exciting, "Ooooh Dragoon is doing alot of damage" but you stuttered and by the time you said that half the draggons are dead already :p

Sosha

United States749 Posts

June 01 2007 12:56 GMT

Definately a good game to watch, and u have average commentary skills. You get hung up on the play-by-play and should work on that - but it was a nice touch to bring up passed games like Pusan's 'spirit' style or the game of Nal_rA v Fisheye - since it had relativity in that game. At least ure trying and u want to get better though - so i'm looking forward to ur next project ^ ^

Gj posting video on google too! much easier to view that way than worrying about DL

DreamScaR

Canada2127 Posts

June 02 2007 09:19 GMT

#10

If you'd like any advice on shoutcasting.. or I guess now because it's all through Youtube.. Commentary advice, just give your ol' pal Micro a shout. It may have been a while since I shoutcasted for people to here, but I'm far from done.

FusionCutter

Canada974 Posts

June 02 2007 09:40 GMT

#11

Where's the background soudn?

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