Hi. I call this map fire! The symbol in the middle of the map is chinese for fire so that's why its called fire lolz.
QuietIdiot helped me out a ton so its thanks to him too!!
(Just making this a blog so that I don't make a fool out of myself again).

The Edited One: I changed the positioning of the minerals in the starting locations and I tried to close up the third expansion a little more so that zerg will have an easier time. I'm also finding ways to redo the island expos so this isn't the final version yet. Hope to hear more criticism

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I brought Smiley back too if you didn't notice :D:D:D

BuGzlToOnl

United States5918 Posts

November 25 2008 17:04 GMT

I like this one actually its better than the other one.

Chill

Calgary25996 Posts

November 25 2008 17:07 GMT

Looks okay

My first concern is that Zerg will have problems against Protoss with the location of the third base.

Zoler

Sweden6339 Posts

November 25 2008 17:14 GMT

PvT heaven imo (im T)

Edit: lol I wrote wrong, I meant this map is good for PvT ^^

village_idiot

2436 Posts

November 25 2008 17:18 GMT

Looks pretty ugly though

Frits

11782 Posts

November 25 2008 17:31 GMT

On November 26 2008 02:14 Zoler wrote:
TvP heaven imo (im T)

If anything this is PvT favored. (im a better T)

Frits

11782 Posts

November 25 2008 17:32 GMT

On November 26 2008 02:18 village_idiot wrote:
Looks pretty ugly though

it does?

looks like plenty of doodads and stuff to me

clazziquai

6685 Posts

November 25 2008 17:34 GMT

Wow it looks SO much better. good job!

hixhix

1156 Posts

November 25 2008 17:53 GMT

where are the smile faces.... bring them back please

Xeofreestyler

Belgium6774 Posts

November 25 2008 17:55 GMT

#10

On November 26 2008 02:14 Zoler wrote:
TvP heaven imo (im T)

IzzyCraft

United States4487 Posts

November 25 2008 18:15 GMT

#11

Are those mins up against the edge of the map thats always a no no need to leave space at edge of map Also id consider making the island like expo more island instead of a point where you float a building and tank it so ez or goon harass it. Also need to do something about the size of the extra expos they are very open it's alright if it's just a few but all of them encourages taking bases far form your main

Much better job not that i can map make lol

Avidkeystamper

United States8556 Posts

November 25 2008 18:23 GMT

#12

Does this remind anybody else of Andromeda?

SayaSP

Laos5494 Posts

November 25 2008 18:31 GMT

#13

i can see what youre seeing but.. no

Fontong

United States6454 Posts

November 25 2008 18:46 GMT

#14

Looks really good. One tip is to try and make the terrain colors at least a little asymmetrical(pretty sure this is what they do on the Korean maps). I think it would make it look pretty professional and polished.

cgrinker

United States3824 Posts

November 25 2008 18:50 GMT

#15

Seems like it would be pretty standard macro map going on as there is so much room in the main to set up your buildings and it's impossible to drop the mains. Looks nice though GJ.

DeadVessel

United States6269 Posts

November 25 2008 19:05 GMT

#16

2nd maps a bit nicer than the first, but, the 3rd base is going to be death for zerg. It's really undefendable =/

Nytefish

United Kingdom4282 Posts

November 25 2008 19:23 GMT

#17

On November 26 2008 04:05 DeadVessel wrote:
2nd maps a bit nicer than the first, but, the 3rd base is going to be death for zerg. It's really undefendable =/

Seems easier than on maps like Othello.

BanZu

United States3329 Posts

November 25 2008 19:45 GMT

#18

On November 26 2008 02:18 village_idiot wrote:
Looks pretty ugly though

Yea, not very aesthetically pleasing IMO.

Not_Computer

Canada2277 Posts

November 25 2008 21:15 GMT

#19

okay, that's it, i'm gonna start making maps again

... hmm, i should be doing homework though

Archaic

United States4024 Posts

November 25 2008 21:22 GMT

#20

Interesting map, but I think it could be improved. Maybe the next map should be called water, a better looking element imo. Earth looks ugly... Air would be too hard.