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EchOne
Profile Blog Joined January 2008
United States2906 Posts
Last Edited: 2009-06-11 03:13:56
June 11 2009 03:12 GMT
#1
I just submitted this. The 600 word limit was somewhat annoying since the final draft was ~770 words. I'm sure you can imagine why the latter half is so terse. Anyways, please enjoy. I'll try not to be too hostile to criticism.


Parched earth rumbled and belched forth a legion of lithe Zerg fiends, heralding a clattering stampede that might as well have shook Korhal itself, given Robin's terrified quavering. Father's arm tightened around her as he muttered, “Don't let go, even if you faint.”

Robin clenched her tiny hands into Father's ballistic leather jacket just before the Vulture whipped around like tar spiraling down a drain. The hollow whizzing of a grenade was overwhelmed by a dozen carnal roars. Before Robin's brain even told her hands to clench tighter, the Vulture launched away from the Zerg, splashing grit and pebbles at the furious creatures.

The hoverbike was old, though, older than Robin herself, and as soon as she lifted her face from her father's chest, her eyes were filled with the slavering maw of a Zergling in the hunt.

Robin's insignificant scream mixed with a mêlée of sounds, filling her ears with a whirlwind of thruster, claw, and grenade music with a few of Father's choice curses mixed in. A brief shift in pressure informed Robin of her miraculous survival, but not before Father spun the wheel violently, once more transforming the Vulture into a grenade spewing dervish.

Robin knew not how long she spent at the eye of the tornado, but eventually the Vulture was placidly cruising along, like one of the cirrus clouds people said once seemed to race across Korhal's skies.

“Father!” Robin exclaimed, “You're a hero! No wonder they call you the Tornado! You-”

“No, Robin,” Father shook his head, “The Tornado is a murderer, not a hero. He left his own son behind.”



“With all due respect, Commander,” Robin hissed into her Banshee's intercom, the sweat on her brow as much from the Korhal sun as from frustration, “Raiders or no, these positions you want destroyed are purely Terran. I urge you-”

“Don't give me this bullshit, Lieutenant.” The Commander retorted, “I trust you've studied the Fall of Augustgrad? Terran or no, any military that dares test the Dominion on Korhal must be dealt with. Now go deal with them.”

The signal was cut before Robin could even utter formalities. After encryption scrambling, Robin signaled her squad.

“Execute plan Omega.”

The Banshees split apart like grenade fragments. Idling behind clouds, Robin's squad circled the Terran camp like carrion birds. Points of data suddenly filled her vicinity map as orbital command's relay arrived.

“Swoop.”

Within seconds, each mourning spirit spewed a torrent of fire on the Vikings that were too conveniently unmanned.

“Reform.”

Banshees converged and then overwhelmed a nearby turret in cluster rocket fire. Robin's eyes darted. 10 rounds left. Another cascade of rockets wrecked a nearby turret when Robin's HUD showed: missile lock.

“Disperse,” She ordered, activating her cloaking unit.

Missiles from over the next dune barely missed her Banshee as its shimmering profile hugged the sand. Robin's exhale of relief was interrupted by a missile from her blindside.

Impossible. There was no lock!

All systems immediately terminated, sending her tobogganing across the sand. After ejection, desert gales buffeted Robin about, until she finally drifted into... the arms of an enemy soldier.

“Your uniform suggests you commanded this sortie.” A masked voice uttered.

Robin looked up to find that the man was a ghost.

“Tell me, Robin. Why target obvious decoys and unmanned turrets?”

“I... didn't think desert raiders would play such hands.”

He removed his headgear.

“We aren't mere raiders,” Robin's brother explained, “We are Raynor's Raiders. Tell me, Robin. What have you been fighting for?”



***
面白くない世の中, 面白くすればいいさ
Faronel
Profile Blog Joined July 2008
United States658 Posts
June 11 2009 03:18 GMT
#2
Well it leaves me wanting more...
So I guess that's a good thing since I got drawn into the story.
C'est la vie...
Superiorwolf
Profile Blog Joined March 2007
United States5509 Posts
June 11 2009 03:34 GMT
#3
Wow, suspenseful! I am really impressed and can't wait for the rest, keep it up :D
Check out my stream at www.teamliquid.net/forum/viewmessage.php?topic_id=315053 and follow me on Twitter @EGSuppy! :)
AoN.DimSum
Profile Blog Joined September 2008
United States2983 Posts
June 11 2009 03:44 GMT
#4
are these sc2 units?
by my idol krokkis : "U better hope Finland wont have WCG next year and that I wont gain shitloads of skill, cause then I will wash ur mouth with soap, little man."
EchOne
Profile Blog Joined January 2008
United States2906 Posts
June 11 2009 04:15 GMT
#5
Banshee and Viking are SC2 units. I prefer Wraiths and Vultures (flipping out and harassing every damn thing is so good), but I had to accommodate the passage of time.
面白くない世の中, 面白くすればいいさ
Raithed
Profile Blog Joined May 2007
China7078 Posts
June 11 2009 05:32 GMT
#6
a lot of dialogue.
t_co
Profile Blog Joined July 2007
United States702 Posts
June 11 2009 19:24 GMT
#7
hey can you help me upload my piece please?
"Look, don't congratulate us when we buy a company, congratulate us when we sell it. Because any fool can overpay and buy a company, so long as there is money to buy it." --Henry Kravis
t_co
Profile Blog Joined July 2007
United States702 Posts
June 11 2009 19:25 GMT
#8
it's in my blog. thanks!
"Look, don't congratulate us when we buy a company, congratulate us when we sell it. Because any fool can overpay and buy a company, so long as there is money to buy it." --Henry Kravis
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