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QuanticHawk
Profile Blog Joined May 2007
United States32130 Posts
July 23 2008 14:48 GMT
#21
On July 23 2008 16:00 Gene wrote:
telling us what the article is about is absolutely not enough information to say whether or not we'd read it. the way the article is written is what it is all about. they could right a good piece on watching sap fall off trees. If the writer sucks, the writing sucks. the opposite will also be true.


This is 100% true. A good writer can turn a shit story into something interesting.

Also, aside from the being there for 24 hours part, you don't explain the whole angle besides that. It could be a piece highlighting the shitty treatment of their employees, it could be something about shitty customer service you get from chain places, it could be something about why mom & pop stores are better than chain megastores and how they are losing out because they can't keep up. It could just be a simple as 'how I lived in walmart for 24 hours off gummy worms'.

Honestly, there's a lot of different angles posible. I'd definitely read at least the first 1/4 of the article out of curiosity. You can tell by then whether it's worth reading on or not.
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Falcynn
Profile Blog Joined June 2005
United States3597 Posts
July 23 2008 15:44 GMT
#22
You wouldn't happen to still have a copy you could scan for us would you?

Anyways, this actually could make a decent story as long as (as everyone has said) the author is an awesome writer. Judging from your post though, that didn't seem to be the case.
ahrara_
Profile Blog Joined February 2008
Afghanistan1715 Posts
July 23 2008 18:25 GMT
#23
Honestly, there's a lot of different angles posible. I'd definitely read at least the first 1/4 of the article out of curiosity. You can tell by then whether it's worth reading on or not.

I did mention it was pretty terribly written. Let me see if I can find the PDFs online... no i couldn't, but you can download last semester's edition here: http://www.ohlonemidnight.com/index.html

As somebody who's been writing for a while, I do understand what you guys are saying about the angle. But there wasn't an angle. It was simply "24 hours at walmart". IIRC, the piece read like that too. Just 24 hours at walmart -- first we did this, then we did that, then we met this guy.
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QuanticHawk
Profile Blog Joined May 2007
United States32130 Posts
July 23 2008 18:49 GMT
#24
Oh, it's certainly possible it sucked. It's a college paper lol. I'm just saying it could've potentially been good in the right hands.
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Tropics
Profile Joined August 2007
United Kingdom1132 Posts
Last Edited: 2008-07-23 21:58:03
July 23 2008 21:57 GMT
#25
I actually read something on this on the internet a few years ago and it was a really good read.
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