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I'm not much of a critic, but the last few lines have me confused.. why would you switch to "one's fingers" when the entire time you've been using first-person plural -"we,us..." I don't like this change, it was quite sharp.
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I'm confused what you are trying to get across. Usually a poem is pushing a message, something that the author wants the reader to get in his/her own way and understanding. Whatever message that reader gets is great of course, but usually the author has something in mind. I can't tell what you were trying to tell me here.
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