Helo! My name is Tor LIndberg i am 19 years old i live in Umeå whits is in the north of Sweden and i studdy naturscience on the Gynasium (hige school) and i throw diskus on a quit hige national level. That is me in a nutshell. So why am i here and writing this to you? Becuas i whant to get famus om Youtube and the internet, i love games in general and would like to have that as a bigger part of my life than just for fun. So how will i succsed in doing so? Play games and uppload it on youtube, stream games and hopfulle it will eventually get me famus. I have watch sc2 siens 2010 and TL was the begining of my intrest in competetiv gaming, watching youtube, steams and Esports. So i fugurd that this would be a good plas to start. This part will be wary clishe but i have a dream that one day my frinds will find me on youtube and go like "WTF is that you Tor!?1?" and i will be abel to say "Yes it is". So sienc my start for the real us of the internet was here on TL i hope that it is hear that my potensial internet carear will also start. I will not sacrefise everything for this dream i will still finish scholl and get a jobbb or whatever but i hope that my dream comes true. So i was thinking that i put upp a blog here ones a week or so talking about my progres in this dream and so i hope that you whant to follow me on my journey and i hope that you will like my contet and suport me. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCvkJOFgGUw_36Pg5e_SatdA this is the link to my youtube where it will hapen hope to se you there and if there is sonthing you think that i could improv plz let me know!
On October 31 2014 03:15 ZiNKO wrote: Helo! My name is Tor LIndberg i am 19 years old i live in Umeå whits is in the north of Sweden and i studdy naturscience on the Gynasium (hige school) and i throw diskus on a quit hige national level. That is me in a nutshell. So why am i hear and writing this to you? Becuas i whant to get famus om Youtube and the internet, i love games in general and would like to have that as a bigger part of my life than just for fun. So how will i succsed in doing so? Play games and uppload it on youtube, stream games and hopfulle it will eventually get me famus. I have watch sc2 siens 2010 and TL was the begining of my intrest in competetiv gaming, watching youtube, steams and Esports. So i fugurd that this would be a good plas to start. This part will be wary clishe but i have a dream that one day my frinds will find me on youtube and go like "WTF is that you Tor!?1?" and i will be abel to say "Yes it is". So siens my start for the real us of the internet was hear on TL i hope that it is hear that my potensial internet carear will also start. I will not sacrefise everything for this dream i will still finish scholl and get a jobbb or whatever but i hope that my dream comes true. So i was thinking that i put upp a blog hear ones a week or so talking about my progres in this dream and so i hope that you whant to follow me on my journey and i hope that you will like my contet and suport me. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCvkJOFgGUw_36Pg5e_SatdA this is the link to my youtube where it will hapen hope to se you there and if there is sonthing you think that i could improv plz let me know!
On October 31 2014 03:15 ZiNKO wrote: Helo! My name is Tor LIndberg i am 19 years old i live in Umeå whits is in the north of Sweden and i studdy naturscience on the Gynasium (hige school) and i throw diskus on a quit hige national level. That is me in a nutshell. So why am i hear and writing this to you? Becuas i whant to get famus om Youtube and the internet, i love games in general and would like to have that as a bigger part of my life than just for fun. So how will i succsed in doing so? Play games and uppload it on youtube, stream games and hopfulle it will eventually get me famus. I have watch sc2 siens 2010 and TL was the begining of my intrest in competetiv gaming, watching youtube, steams and Esports. So i fugurd that this would be a good plas to start. This part will be wary clishe but i have a dream that one day my frinds will find me on youtube and go like "WTF is that you Tor!?1?" and i will be abel to say "Yes it is". So siens my start for the real us of the internet was hear on TL i hope that it is hear that my potensial internet carear will also start. I will not sacrefise everything for this dream i will still finish scholl and get a jobbb or whatever but i hope that my dream comes true. So i was thinking that i put upp a blog hear ones a week or so talking about my progres in this dream and so i hope that you whant to follow me on my journey and i hope that you will like my contet and suport me. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCvkJOFgGUw_36Pg5e_SatdA this is the link to my youtube where it will hapen hope to se you there and if there is sonthing you think that i could improv plz let me know!
Tor Lindberg
I can't think of anything you could improve on.
I think I know what you mean. Just by reading through a bit, I can see the problem...
You need to a whole space for paragraphs! There should be a gap for easier reading!
On October 31 2014 07:51 micronesia wrote: I edited the thread title to be a bit more readable.
I lol'd
It is amazing though how much using proper spelling and punctuation can change how much people respect you.
I know, it's like if you present yourself in a certain manner, people will perceive you to be a certain way based on that manner. I wonder what might happen if we all started wearing nice clothes as well. There'd be no stopping us.
Thank you so much for making my text more easy to read :D This is somthing that i will do my best to improve so that it will be easier to read them I know for a fact that this problem is only whit writing in English since i allways get good grades on my speaking in school
On October 31 2014 07:51 micronesia wrote: I edited the thread title to be a bit more readable.
I lol'd
It is amazing though how much using proper spelling and punctuation can change how much people respect you.
I know, it's like if you present yourself in a certain manner, people will perceive you to be a certain way based on that manner. I wonder what might happen if we all started wearing nice clothes as well. There'd be no stopping us.
you just wanna dress in nazi outfits but you're afraid of doing so
I thought that Scandinavian people had always fluent English but maybe that's because you're still a youngster. No point in making fun of him guys, I felt the same when I was at his age but actually I had a better spelling :D
On October 31 2014 18:39 739 wrote: I thought that Scandinavian people had always fluent English but maybe that's because you're still a youngster. No point in making fun of him guys, I felt the same when I was at his age but actually I had a better spelling :D
He's nineteen. He's had mandatory English for at least 10 years now.
One thing that i did not mention is that i have been diagnosed whit Dyslexia so that is a big part as to why i am speling lika a 5 year old, but like i said i have commpletly fluent English when it comes to speaking
EPT
then i shall take your advise and improv on it 
