Look into my eyes my scary debut

2primenumbers

United States144 Posts

June 17 2014 22:07 GMT

O_O

This here is my the first track of my debut EP. I am really excited about the way this track came together.

help me give you an answer ask me anything.

This is horror trap

1 - TER - SOUL WELL Prod AVThaProducer - TERROR EP

Best Regards,
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DarkPlasmaBall

United States44264 Posts

June 17 2014 22:26 GMT

Cool! One critique:

I feel like your voice sounds a little robotic, as-you-tend-to-pro-nounce-ev-'ry-syll-a-ble-ex-act-ly-the-same-and-at-the-same-pace. ("This-is-the-new-sta-tus-quo.")

As an aside, which two prime numbers? Your post count is currently 38, so I'm running with 2 and 19 until you post again (3 and 13!) or say otherwise ^^

sob3k

United States7572 Posts

June 17 2014 22:29 GMT

flow needs a lot of work.

itsjustatank

Hong Kong9153 Posts

June 18 2014 01:08 GMT

yeah if i were relying on them for going off the block you would have hell to pay

docvoc

United States5491 Posts

June 18 2014 04:32 GMT

I'll be honest here man. Your beat, good. Your rap to accompany it was completely off and it didn't feel like it meshed at all. I think that your robotic style could be cool if it were paired with a different speed of music and if your vocals were louder to standout more against the beat. I also think that this kind of music really (REALLY REALLY) needs to have a seriously creative tone to it. You aren't playing an instrument, you aren't doing anything that I can't do with a computer, so you have to show me why you're Kanye and I'm not. Otherwise nicely done man.

2primenumbers

United States144 Posts

June 18 2014 15:46 GMT

Thank you everyone, here's track 2/5
2 - TER - 420 Prophet prod InaiksBeats - TERROR EP - DEBUT

DarkPlasmaBall

United States44264 Posts

June 18 2014 17:55 GMT

So... 13 and 3 now?

icydergosu

528 Posts

June 18 2014 20:45 GMT

Sorry but that sounds like total crap.

ThomasjServo

15244 Posts

June 18 2014 21:55 GMT

You do need to work on the audio quality, it is very distracting. You want a new model for freestyle, I recommend Eyedea

2primenumbers

United States144 Posts

June 19 2014 15:34 GMT

#10

3 - TER - Digits Prod Shado - Rock - TERROR EP - DEBUT - REAL FREESTYLE

3/5 ^^

2primenumbers

United States144 Posts

June 20 2014 19:23 GMT

#11

5/5
5 - TER - So Nigga prod by Straf - TERROR EP - DEBUT - REAL FREESTYLE

Today's releases are two brand new tracks

TER - The Dot prod JCP Beats Stuck in the Trap

I appreciate your feedback and take a close look at all of it

Best Regards,
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Nahmu

Korea (South)14 Posts

June 21 2014 12:06 GMT

#12

In the first video your voice sounds like it's really quiet in comparison to the rest of the beat.

2primenumbers

United States144 Posts

June 25 2014 19:16 GMT

#13

Thanks Nahmu. I still have a lot to learn in terms of mastering and improving the way vocals pop over the track. Right now I am massively 'homebrew' lol.

I released a new EP called THE FUZZ

Trippy prod $yrup

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