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2primenumbers United States144 Posts June 17 2014 22:07 GMT #1 O_O This here is my the first track of my debut EP. I am really excited about the way this track came together. help me give you an answer ask me anything. This is horror trap 1 - TER - SOUL WELL Prod AVThaProducer - TERROR EP Best Regards, 2primenumbers

DarkPlasmaBall United States45217 Posts June 17 2014 22:26 GMT #2 Cool! One critique: I feel like your voice sounds a little robotic, as-you-tend-to-pro-nounce-ev-'ry-syll-a-ble-ex-act-ly-the-same-and-at-the-same-pace. ("This-is-the-new-sta-tus-quo.") As an aside, which two prime numbers? Your post count is currently 38, so I'm running with 2 and 19 until you post again (3 and 13!) or say otherwise ^^

sob3k United States7572 Posts June 17 2014 22:29 GMT #3 flow needs a lot of work.

itsjustatank Hong Kong9165 Posts June 18 2014 01:08 GMT #4 yeah if i were relying on them for going off the block you would have hell to pay

docvoc United States5491 Posts June 18 2014 04:32 GMT #5 I'll be honest here man. Your beat, good. Your rap to accompany it was completely off and it didn't feel like it meshed at all. I think that your robotic style could be cool if it were paired with a different speed of music and if your vocals were louder to standout more against the beat. I also think that this kind of music really (REALLY REALLY) needs to have a seriously creative tone to it. You aren't playing an instrument, you aren't doing anything that I can't do with a computer, so you have to show me why you're Kanye and I'm not. Otherwise nicely done man.

2primenumbers United States144 Posts June 18 2014 15:46 GMT #6 Thank you everyone, here's track 2/5 2 - TER - 420 Prophet prod InaiksBeats - TERROR EP - DEBUT

DarkPlasmaBall United States45217 Posts June 18 2014 17:55 GMT #7 So... 13 and 3 now?

icydergosu 528 Posts June 18 2014 20:45 GMT #8 Sorry but that sounds like total crap.

ThomasjServo 15244 Posts June 18 2014 21:55 GMT #9 You do need to work on the audio quality, it is very distracting. You want a new model for freestyle, I recommend Eyedea

2primenumbers United States144 Posts June 19 2014 15:34 GMT #10 3 - TER - Digits Prod Shado - Rock - TERROR EP - DEBUT - REAL FREESTYLE 3/5 ^^

2primenumbers United States144 Posts June 20 2014 19:23 GMT #11 5/5 5 - TER - So Nigga prod by Straf - TERROR EP - DEBUT - REAL FREESTYLE Today's releases are two brand new tracks TER - The Dot prod JCP Beats Stuck in the Trap I appreciate your feedback and take a close look at all of it Best Regards, 2primenumbers

Nahmu Korea (South)14 Posts June 21 2014 12:06 GMT #12 In the first video your voice sounds like it's really quiet in comparison to the rest of the beat.

2primenumbers United States144 Posts June 25 2014 19:16 GMT #13 Thanks Nahmu. I still have a lot to learn in terms of mastering and improving the way vocals pop over the track. Right now I am massively 'homebrew' lol. I released a new EP called THE FUZZ Trippy prod $yrup

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