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29 Posts

October 05 2012 05:44 GMT

Chairman Ray

United States11903 Posts

October 05 2012 05:56 GMT

Wow, that's actually a really beautiful song. Good job! I played music for about 9 years and I still have no idea how to compose or write music.

Sonic Boom

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October 05 2012 06:00 GMT

BadgKat

United States156 Posts

October 05 2012 06:16 GMT

It's a good song. I like your guitar playing. It's a very open shimmering style. You have a pretty good voice. Where are you from? Your english sounds accented. Not bad, I'm just interested. A lot of your lyrics feel forced and the melody seems a bit haphazard. Like it's forced onto the composition. Good job over all.

Sonic Boom

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October 05 2012 06:40 GMT

Powerpill

United States1693 Posts

October 05 2012 19:10 GMT

I liked the layered guitars, reminded me a bit of 90's light Brit Alternative, "Let down" by Radiohead for example. You have a great natural voice and clear tone, but I did notice some pitch fluttering and some lisping (hissy s's), both easily fixed with some mild practice. Good track, keep composing sir. ^_^ (Been planning on doing a week at the studio for the past 2 years myself, but seem to always put it off, drives me nuts having so many songs written and not produced ><).

Sonic Boom

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October 05 2012 21:19 GMT

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