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[Fanfic] The Arrangement

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OpticalShot
Profile Blog Joined October 2009
Canada6330 Posts
Last Edited: 2012-05-07 20:55:20
May 04 2012 18:59 GMT
#1
Inspiration

Yet, another inspiration strikes during a semi-busy workday.

+ Show Spoiler [Inspiration] +
<10:11:05> "Kamille": Yo Op
<10:11:11> "Kamille": Time to write another fanfic
<10:11:27> "Kamille": Verz's mom setting him up with real estate agent's daughter
<10:11:44> "Kamille": Here's the kicker
<10:11:49> "Kamille": She looks like Genghis Khan
<10:11:51> "Abenson": lol
<10:11:53> "OpticalShot": LMAO
<10:11:55> "Nitty": hahaha
<10:11:55> "OpticalShot": wait
<10:11:59> "OpticalShot": WHERE did u get all this juicy info
<10:12:18> "Kamille": Verz told us
<10:12:21> "Neos": from the man himself


Seems like I can't make a continuation out of my last fanfic, The Airport Scene. I mean, how do you go from an epic airport scene with a happy ending to something as ridiculous as an arranged marriage (okay the marriage might be a little too far) with Genghis Khan?

This is probably better suited as one of the earlier episodes, possibly in the same drama as the airport scene one, except that I need Shine here... okay I'll make it make sense later.

Characters and Setting

Bisu as "Verz" infinitestory
SKT Coach Park as Bisu's mother (yes I said mother)
Shine as real estate agent's daughter that looks like Genghis Khan
Khan Coach January as the real estate agent
Stork as Stork, a true son of Aiur, friends with Bisu
OSL Booth Girl Yeonji as... herself. AHHH SO QT
OSL Booth Girl Euneh as herself, because I couldn't let Stork be lonely
Roro as Roro, bit of a douchebag, friends with Bisu



Episode 6

Things to note from earlier episodes: Bisu is a nice boy, and is friends with Yeonji, possibly the cutest chick in the entire campus. Dam.

Scene 1: Campus, sunny day, two nerds in the brightly-sunlight-lit library. Bisu has his laptop out, and is furiously apm-ing away. Opposite of him is Roro, who is spamming 5sh6sh7sh8sh 1a2a3a4a.

Game ends.

Roro: Hahaha!
Bisu: Gee Gee man -.-;;
Roro: Hude you're so bad I don't get how people lose to you.
Bisu: I don't get it either, why are you so good at ZvP?
Roro: I'm not good, you're just bad. I mean, all I did was make tons of hydras and snipe down some corsairs.
Bisu: Shut up man I'm still higher rank than you!
Roro: Loser~ your rank is bogus man, look how bad- pauses

Slow-motion scene: Yeonji walks into the library. 'nuff said?

Roro: Ho-holy shit, dat ass-
Bisu: Oh her? Yeah, she is pretty.
Roro: Just pretty? Dude how I'd tap those hot buns you don't even know!
Bisu: Haha really, let me see you try. to Yeonji Hey Yeonji!
Yeonji: Hey Bisu~ Slacking off as usual, I see! ^^
Bisu: Heh, just teaching my D- noob friend how to play.
Roro: WHAT dude you motherf- ah, hello, nice to meet you Yeonji. I'm Roro.
Yeonji: Hello~ reaches out a hand for a handshake
Roro: accepts the handshake Dam you fine girl, not the shy type huh.
Bisu: That's very polite... anyway Yeonji, what's up?
Yeonji: Wahaha~ your friend is so shy~ want to grab something to eat? I'm so hungry >_<;
Bisu: Uhhh, sure. Should we bring *nudge* him along?
Yeonji: If he's okay with it... let's go!

Scene 2: Campus, grass fields, sunset

Yeonji: Haw~ Such beautiful sunset~
Roro: Yeah, whatever.
Yeonji: Why, you don't like it? D=
Bisu: Don't mind him, he's a bit of a douchebag.
Roro: At least I don't hide it! Anyway, I don't feel like eating right now, you guys go ahead. breaks off from the group

Bisu's phone rings. Annoyed, Bisu picks it up

Bisu: Yes, mom?
Coach Park: Son! You must get home right now!
Bisu: Uhhh, but I errr kind of want to eat dinner with-
Coach Park: I SAID HOME
Bisu: Yes mother T_T I'll be right there. hangs up Well you heard it... sorry Yeonji.
Yeonji: It's okay~ I'll just go eat alone T_T;; or actually, shouts Hey Roro!
Roro: What is it now?
Yeonji: Well, Bisu has to go home to see his mom. So I have nobody to eat with!
Roro: How unfortunate.
Yeonji: THAT'S IT? o_O
Roro: You some real needy girl. Bah, alright, fine. Bisu owes me one.
Yeonji: Yay~ ^^
Bisu: Well, that's settled then. Bye you two!

Yeonji, happy that she won't be lonely for dinner, instantly locks onto Roro's arm, and starts talking about girl stuff that Roro doesn't give shit about. Bisu, hurrying to the subway station, catches the last glimpse of them before they disappear into the last moments of the sunset.

Scene 2: In front of Bisu's house

Bisu: rings doorbell, *ding dong* Mom~
Coach Park: GOOD oh my boy oh my sweety hugs I have a surprise for you! Let's go eat at the OSL Sushi!
Bisu: But that place tastes horrible!
Coach Park: IT TASTES FINE okay let's hurry, we're going to be late!
Bisu: Uhhh, late for what?
Coach Park: *smacks Bisu* Get. In. The. Car.

Bisu obeys.

Scene 3: at OSL Sushi

Stork: Hello~ Welcome to OSL Sushi. Oh, hey Bisu!
Bisu: Dude whaaaat? You work here?
Stork: Shit man I applied to that airport job, haven't heard from them for like a month. Might as well earn some cash here.
Bisu: Man that's too bad, hope you get that job eventually! Anyway, table for two-
Coach Park: Oh, that won't be necessary, dear. We're here with looks around, then points them!
Stork: Ah, I see. Well then, I will be serving you shortly.
Bisu: Mom, what's going on?

The two join a pair already sitting, mother and daughter.

January: Ah, coach park! Finally here!
Coach Park: Sorry we're late~ hello Shine, you're as pretty as ever! Bisu, meet January, she's the real estate agent around our neighbourhood.
Bisu: not very enthusiastic Hello, nice to meet you.
Coach Park: And, this is Shine, her daughter!
Shine: seductively haaaaaaaaaaay Bisu <3
Bisu: Ugh. Hi.
Coach Park: Oh, you two are already so friendly already!
January: Alright, so Coach Park, how have you been...

Screen zones out, with Coach Park and January exchanging a bunch of motherly gossips and housing prices and stuff. Bisu is obviously bored, and a little scared at the girl - actually, hardly a girl by visual standards - and just focused on twiddling about on his phone. Shine, however, is intensely focused into Bisu, and continuously sending him naughty looks at every chance.

January: Okay, so we're ready.
Bisu: But I haven't even looked at the menu!
Coach Park: No worries dear, I already told her what you usually get.
January: Hey you there!
Stork: Yes ma'am. Ready to order?

When Stork finishes taking the orders, he gives Bisu a nudge. Bisu, alerted, looks at Stork. Stork rolls his eyes around twice to point at Shine, makes a terribly disgusted face, then cracks a devilish smirk as he points at Bisu and makes a thrusting motion. What a troll, Bisu thought. Stork hurries off before he's detected by others.

Dinner proceeds as usual, Bisu doesn't really touch his food. Instead, he tries really hard to break his 1.5M score on Temple Run (phone app).

Coach Park: *smacks bisu* Hey you, finish your food!
Bisu: I'm not hungry!
January: He's a picky one, eh?
Coach Park: Oh no way, he's just a sweetheart but he wasn't feeling well today.
Bisu: I'm fine, mom. Bah, okay, there I'll finish that piece. gobble
Coach Park: ANYWAY, so January and I have decided that you two are perfect match for each other!
Bisu: immediately spits out half-chewed sushi, majority of the projectiles landing on Shine's face WHAT
Coach Park: Oh, how rude! I'm terribly sorry dear, let me help you clean up-
Shine: It's okay, ma'am. I can handle this.

While cleaning up the mess on her face, Shine catches a moment (camera zoom) and seductively licks a small clump of rice off the upper lips, rolls it on the tip of her tongue, then slooooooowly puts it in her mouth, finishing with a sexually satisfied look.

Bisu spits out the remainder of his sushi onto his plate.

January: Oh dear, he is indeed not feeling well tonight. Perhaps we should continue another day?
Coach Park: That won't be necessary, Bisu is fine~ he must have choked on something.
Bisu: Excuse me, but may I go to the washroom?
Coach Park: Absolutely not until we finish the topic. So, Bisu, we're thinking of having you two marry. I mean, look at her, she's absolutely adorable, and I know how well January educates her children.
January: Of course, Shine here is well-disciplined and she seems to like you, Bisu.
Shine: *blushing* Awww mom~ Don't say that~
Coach Park: It'll take a bit of time to get used to each other, but I'm certain that it'll work out. I already gave her your number, so you two can have some 'private' meetings later this week!
Bisu: But- What- Seriously-
Shine: I'll call you Bisu! You better pick up! *^^*
Coach Park: Aw, and she even takes the initiative!

Chatter continues, lively and happy, excluding Bisu.

Bisu: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
(Press for Dramatic Effect)

Scene 4: Campus, student lounge

Bisu: *Yawn* what a boring day-
Stork: Yeah -_- wanna play a game? I promise I'll go easy on you.
Bisu: Shut up man, I'm not in the mood for games right now.
Stork: Is it because you're in the mood for GETTING MARRIED? *trollface.jpg*
Bisu: FFFFUUUUUU

Roro and Yeonji enter, hand-in-hand.

Roro: GUESS WHAT
Stork: Oh dayum, what's up you two?
Yeonji: Wahaha~ We're going out~ *^^*
Stork: Grats!
Roro: Yeah man, she so fine I had to give her a chance. You cool, Bisu?
Bisu: Yeah, uhhh, grats I guess.
Roro: Dude, grats to you too. Getting married soon eh? I didn't know you had a thing for chicks that looked like old Mongolian warriors! HUEHUEHUE
Bisu: How'd you know-
Stork: I took a picture of your table and sent it to EVERYONE! HUEHUEHUE
Roro: HUEHUEHUE
Bisu: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
(again, (Press for Dramatic Effect))

Yeonji: Don't be so sad bisu~ It'll all be fine~ Wahaha~ XD
Bisu: You trolls. All of you. Trolls.
Roro: Anyway, Yeonji and I are going to go watch a movie together, and we don't mind you guys tagging along.
Stork: Sure thing, but man, I don't want to be the lonely third wheel.
Yeonji: Don't worry, that's why - turns around Euneh!

A cute girl from a couple tables away gets up, then joins the crowd.

Euneh: Hey guys, mind if I come along?
Yeonji: She's my best friend, we work together~ Plus, she wanted to learn how to play Protoss!
Stork: Well well, *flexes his lean sexy muscles* I believe I am the right man. 2v2 after the movie? Erm, actually, Bisu, uhhh
Bisu: Don't worry about me, I have some readings to do.
Roro: About marri-
Bisu: NOT about marriage. Leave me alone -_-;;
Stork: Aite man, we'll chill later.
Yeonji: Bye Bisu! =)

the crowd leaves, all happy

Bisu - alone, "talking inside his head"

Bisu: What is wrong with my life? I mean, I can't even beat a bunch of scrub Zergs when it matters, I get friendzoned by all the cute girls in campus, my mom wants me to marry a hideous troll, *sigh*

Mystery girl enters

-----: E-excuse me, is someone sitting there?
Bisu: *snaps off his daydream mode* Oh, hello, nope, go right ahead.
-----: Thanks! =)
Bisu: No problem, my friends actually ditched me a couple minute ago and I don't mind new company.
-----: Awww, that's so mean! Well, I have to do a lot of studying so I'm afraid I can't talk to you too much.
Bisu: That's fine, I need to get my work done too. By the way, I'm Bisu.

Kiett: Nice to meet you, I'm Kiett.



Want to know what happens 14 episodes later? Read The Airport Scene!

Credits

infinitestory for the inspiration
Neos and Kamille for letting me know about the inspiration

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MiKTeX
Profile Blog Joined October 2010
United States234 Posts
May 04 2012 22:33 GMT
#2
OMG dat ending
chaosTheory_14cc
Profile Blog Joined December 2010
Canada1270 Posts
May 05 2012 01:15 GMT
#3
I'd like to believe that progamers actual social encounters occur in a similar fashion to the ones in your fics.
Mobius_1
Profile Blog Joined April 2011
United Kingdom2763 Posts
May 05 2012 02:16 GMT
#4
Let me guess, Kiett was pursued by a Mongolian prince, whom she didn't like. The prince even slayed Kiante, Kiett's best friend, in order to impress her. However, after another long day of dodging Mongolians she ends up, exhausted, walking into a campus cafe.

There, she laid her eyes on the most beautiful man ever.

Soon, the Mongolian prince, now named Zamnal, enters. Seeing Kiett and Bisu chatting about life and love's difficulties and making a real connection, is angered and threatens violence.

As Z continues to spam Hydras during the Lovematch and is knocking down Bisu's front door, a hulking figure walks in. Zamnal is distracted by the heavy footsteps and looks up.

It's Shine. And he is the most Mongolian Beautiful Woman he has ever seen. Without a GG, he walks up and proposes love for all eternity, and many wrestler Mongolian babies.
Starleague Forever. RIP KT Violet~
Sawamura
Profile Blog Joined August 2010
Malaysia7602 Posts
May 05 2012 04:27 GMT
#5
man optical shot you genius lol 5/5 from me.
BW/KT Forever R.I.P KT.Violet dearly missed ..
OpticalShot
Profile Blog Joined October 2009
Canada6330 Posts
May 05 2012 04:45 GMT
#6
On May 05 2012 11:16 Mobius_1 wrote:
Let me guess, Kiett was pursued by a Mongolian prince, whom she didn't like. The prince even slayed Kiante, Kiett's best friend, in order to impress her. However, after another long day of dodging Mongolians she ends up, exhausted, walking into a campus cafe.

There, she laid her eyes on the most beautiful man ever.

Soon, the Mongolian prince, now named Zamnal, enters. Seeing Kiett and Bisu chatting about life and love's difficulties and making a real connection, is angered and threatens violence.

As Z continues to spam Hydras during the Lovematch and is knocking down Bisu's front door, a hulking figure walks in. Zamnal is distracted by the heavy footsteps and looks up.

It's Shine. And he is the most Mongolian Beautiful Woman he has ever seen. Without a GG, he walks up and proposes love for all eternity, and many wrestler Mongolian babies.

Some ideas will be implemented on the next day I feel bored at work.
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infinitestory
Profile Blog Joined April 2010
United States4053 Posts
May 07 2012 01:23 GMT
#7
you guys have way too much fucking time on your hands

5/5
Translator:3
Dodgin
Profile Blog Joined July 2011
Canada39254 Posts
May 07 2012 02:00 GMT
#8
While cleaning up the mess on her face, Shine catches a moment (camera zoom) and seductively licks a small clump of rice off the upper lips, rolls it on the tip of her tongue, then slooooooowly puts it in her mouth, finishing with a sexually satisfied look.

Bisu spits out the remainder of his sushi onto his place.


LOL

this is so ridiculous, amazing though.
OpticalShot
Profile Blog Joined October 2009
Canada6330 Posts
May 07 2012 20:56 GMT
#9
On May 07 2012 11:00 Dodgin wrote:
Show nested quote +
While cleaning up the mess on her face, Shine catches a moment (camera zoom) and seductively licks a small clump of rice off the upper lips, rolls it on the tip of her tongue, then slooooooowly puts it in her mouth, finishing with a sexually satisfied look.

Bisu spits out the remainder of his sushi onto his place.


LOL

this is so ridiculous, amazing though.

Bah. Plate. remainder of his sushi onto his plate. Sorry.

Yes, I do have a lot of time on my hands. Isn't it ironic it's "infinitestory" that feeds me inspirations for more... stories? =)

Also, be assured that I have thought of every scene and line in my head and played it out thoroughly, full image and sound and stuff, before typing it out.
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