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A blog about a girl... Part 4

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-KarmA
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
United States353 Posts
March 03 2011 04:10 GMT
#1
Previously on Lost...

Kidding. (That was for you annul)

From where i left off last night i had just gotten done talking to Ashley. We had talked about how hectic both of our lives are, our favorite music, our (both) terrible past relationships. (She really didnt have to say much lol) What we wanted out of life, What we wanted out of the other sex. She also informed me that she was "The princess" and enjoyed the finer things in life. One of the joys of being an only child i assume. (I was one at one point) It felt kind of like a job interview.

Needless to say i couldnt sleep much that night. I was so excited to take her out to dinner and get to know her. With my previous relationships the first date was always a cause of dread for me, the pit in my stomach would grow bigger and bigger as the night went on, knowing that this isnt going to work out at all, Or at the very least end with some heartbreak, collateral damage, or incineration of personal belongings

(Yes that has all happened TO ME)

I laid in bed that night staring at the lights shining through my window or passing cars. Playing it over and over and over in my mind of that day and night. It was like something out of a gushy romance story, Boy meets girl, Boy is crazy over girl, Marriage, happily ever after.

And i was in the middle of it

I had come to terms with my feelings that night. These feelings of a racing heart, sweating, nervousness... These were the early signs of love. Or possibly a heart attack, Trust me i looked it up.

I figured i passed out around 4:30 in the morning, she was in every inch of my dream, every thought i had. I awoke 4 hours later holding my pillow tightly. I must have assumed it was her when i was dreaming. I was seriously crazy over this woman and we hadnt even been out once!

It was a Saturday morning. And i was preparing myself for work. During the conversation last night she had given me her number and a rough idea of her work and school schedule. So going by what she told me i figured she should just about now be waking up. I quickly popped out my phone and frantically typed at the tiny keyboard

"Hope you have a good day, princess. Feel free to text me if you need something"

Send

My phone chimed a few minutes later

From : Ashley
xxx-xxx-xxxx

I hope you have a good day too! Thanks for brightening mine, i didnt sleep too well last night. Was thinking about someone


...was it me?

It had to have been me, I was up all night thinking about her! If it wasnt about me i might actually have been offended and demanded all that lost sleep back.

The day carried on as usual. Smile still plastered to my face. I had told Tommy all about last night, all the talking we did, the date i had on Tuesday. Just amazing.

Sunday rolled around. Did absolutely nothing but sit and text her.

Another night of little sleep. Oh well.

Monday rolls around. Valentines day. Oh joy.

I had usually hated this holiday with a burning passion. Mostly because everyone else was happy and i was alone and bitter most of the time. Regardless i was upbeat and happy. As per usual i sent her the "Goodmorning text" Which she seemed to love.

"Good morning beautiful, be my valentine "

She had replied with

"Ill think about it ;]"

My day was made. I tore through the days work with time to spare. I was inspired now. I wanted to paint something, make something, do something amazing. Damn it all. I was crushing so hard on her. Our big date is tomorrow though so i tried not to get my hopes up too much. Didnt work too well.

That night i spent talking to Jay. I had never felt this way before. This woman had taken over my feelings, thoughts, phone inbox. EVERYTHING

And i liked it

I fell asleep holding that pillow again. Didnt care.

Tuesday morning - The big day.

The day dragged on at a snails pace. Work was slow as well so there was nothing to work away the time. I frustratedly watched the clock...

All

Day

Long


To spare a long and boring tangent for you guys im going to skip ahead to the end of the day

6 PM

I booked it out of the shop, hopped in my S-10, Threw it in first gear and floored it. I burned my tires flying out of the parking lot and took off on the short drive home, doing well over the speed limit.

I pulled into the driveway, left the keys in the ignition, kicked down the front door and ran for the shower. I frantically peeled off my clothes and jumped in completely ignoring that it was only cold water. I had a short Day[9] moment there but powered through the cold and washed myself. Hopped out, shaved, dried, clean. Good to go

I sat down and checked my Facebook.

"Going out with Princess Ashley tonight. bbl"

Ah... alright... Time to get dressed.

I tore through my dresser. Found some decent looking pants. Awesome. As for a shirt... i didnt have quite as much luck.

T shirt, Tank top, sleeveless, T shirt

Do i honestly not have any damn shirts with sleeves?!

I dug a bit deeper and found one that looked sort of nice. Clean socks, shirt, pants, touch of cologne.

And i am completely ready.

Date is at 8 Pm and its only...

6:27

...Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck

I took the chance to clean out my truck, shine my shoes, do a load of laundry. Anything to take my mind off of how incredibly nervous i was. I had never been this nervous in my life ever. Eventually i had managed to kill time until 7:30 then i finally had texted her that ive been ready since 6:30. Lets get this show on the road. She was ready too so i did one last look over of myself to make sure i was dressed to impress and took off into the night.

So there i was. I stepped out of my truck. My stomach had completely turned over. Maybe dinner wasnt such a good idea... Phew...

Palms started sweating. Pulse quickened. Throat became dry. I began my walk up the driveway. Her parents had come home from vacation in Florida and were at her house sorting out bills and whatnot while they watched Logan. She wanted me to meet them. First date. Oh god.

Legs dont give out on me now

I climbed the wooden steps and stopped at the door...

Phew...

One...

Two...

Three...

I knocked 3 times.

Gotta resist the urge to throw up. Come on Josh... shake it out, deep breaths.

Alright i got this.

She opened the door.

Alright i dont got this

She gave me another warm smile and invited me in. Her mother and stepdad were sitting at the dining room table sorting out bills and whatnot after coming back from a nice 2 week long Florida vacation. I slipped off my shoes and she greeted me with a hug. I melted completely. I quickly composed myself and approached her parents. I shook her stepdads hand.

"Mr. Grove" he shook back. A man of few words he was. Either way he had been a longtime customer so it wasnt so much of a meeting than a "hey nice to see you again"

I turned to her mom who was engrossed in the calculator and she shook my hand. The resemblance between the two were uncanny.

"Nice to meet you both" I bowed my head a bit. They both mumbled agreements.

I turned to Ashley. God she was even more beautiful up close. I wasnt quite as nervous but it was still there.

"So, princess, shall we go?" She smiled and put on her shoes and we were off!

We had gotten into my truck and took off for Applebees which we had previously agreed on a day ago. (fuck yeah Applebees!)

"So..." i had turned to her, while driving through the subdivision "You... nervous at all?"

"eheh... a tiny bit" her cheeks turned a bit red. The ride to the restaraunt was pretty silent. We really didnt know what to say. Neither of us had been on a date in forever.

Idle chitchat made the drive there less awkward but neither of us really made any headway into learning about the other.

We arrived, i left my truck in second and shut it off, locked the doors and followed her in. Opened the door for her and walked in. We were seated shortly after in a corner booth next to a big glass window on the far side. A nice quiet remote corner for the two of us.

Our waiter came up, took our drink order, and took off.

Just us two.

I looked into her eyes. She looked into mine. We were face to face with the object of each others affection. My heart started racing and i started talking. We talked while sipping our drinks a bit more in depth about what we wanted in a relationship. When it came down to it. We really just wanted someone to love. Someone to come home to at night. Someone who wouldnt fuck the other over.

As the night progressed the nervousness subsided a tiny bit. We both became more comfortable, our dinner had arrived, we still talked. joked back and forth, sometimes with mouthfuls of food. Sure not the most eloquent first date but we were having fun dammit. Thats all that matters right?

Dinner had been finished and we continued talking. On and on and on about personal beliefs, people you hate at work, favorite colors. Everything

We had completely lost track of time. The waited who had taken the bill had actually come up to the table and asked us to leave because they were going to start cleaning up for closing time. We both looked at each other and laughed and left giggling.

On the way out i had tried to put my arm around her only to miss and almost fall on my face.

No matter. We got into the truck and check the time. We were there for almost 3 hours... wow. Time flies.

Deciding to try and draw out this amazing night just a tiny bit longer we took the scenic route home. Lightly talking back and forth.

We had come to the last stretch before her house. A short drive next to a lake with the moon shining on it.

I had to say something. Now or never. Do or die

"So... Ashley... Tonight was great" She nodded and i could see her blush from the moonlight reflecting off her beautiful face. "A-anyways i was uh... wondering if maybe youd like to... do this again?"

"Yes. Id like that alot..." She was very visibly blushing now. I had set my hand down on the seat and felt her hand inch closer and closer. We hit a bump and our hands collided. Both of us drew back as if we had just touched a cactus. Heart racing. Mind in a flurry. Butterflies in my stomach. I had to take this chance. She set her hand down on the seat again.

I placed mine on top of hers. And our fingers locked together.

"Ashley..." I said softly. She turned her head slightly, still blushing. "...Be my girlfriend"

She let out another warm smile

"Yes."

We had pulled up in front of her house.

"Would you like me to escort you to your door, princess?"
I got out in a hurry and straightened my nervous self out to walk her up her driveway. I reached for her hand and missed.

Dammit, learn to aim dumbass!

Instead i offered her my arm. She wrapped hers around it and we walked together up the wooden stairs to her door

"Joshua. I had a wonderful time tonight. Thank you" We had met in a warm embrace which seemed to last an eternity.

"Heh... sorry i was so nervous tonight... We both were i guess" She was gazing into my eyes.

The moon reflected off her beautiful skin, we stood there in the embrace staring into each others eyes. Her warm smile met mine and our lips came together in a long sweet kiss

Our first kiss

To be continued

****
Sleight
Profile Blog Joined May 2009
2471 Posts
March 03 2011 04:13 GMT
#2
Jesus christ, WRITE A BOOK MAN.

I CAN"T TAKE THESE SEGMENTS. I need more all at once!

Goddamn suspense.
One Love
-KarmA
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
United States353 Posts
March 03 2011 04:16 GMT
#3
Wait about a week and ill have most of them out for ya
AyeH
Profile Blog Joined March 2010
United States534 Posts
March 03 2011 04:41 GMT
#4
you should never ask a girl if she wants you to walk her to the door! just do it! u were nervous anyway.
Is it in you?
-KarmA
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
United States353 Posts
March 03 2011 04:42 GMT
#5
Extremely. Wasnt thinking right. i know :/
EPO
Profile Joined August 2009
Canada341 Posts
March 03 2011 04:45 GMT
#6
I have a hard time believing the restaurant let you chill at the table for 3 hours. but I guess maybe they weren't busy??

Anyways sounds like you're golden so congrats.. personally all the gushy-sappiness drives me a bit nuts but hey... if it works for you good luck. ^^
CopperLeague
Profile Joined June 2010
154 Posts
March 03 2011 04:49 GMT
#7
The whole time I was reading I felt sure that you were going to get friendzoned, due to the perceived 'neediness.'

Apparently not, though! Just goes to show that there are no absolutes. Great read... you're a good writer. You should think about getting into that kind of thing. And no, I don't mean go to school for journalism.
thezergk
Profile Joined October 2009
United States492 Posts
March 03 2011 04:49 GMT
#8
Great story and writing skills! Can't wait for MOAr
Nada vs. TLO Results: "Nada 1 TLO 1 Bnet 2 KESPA 1"
-KarmA
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
United States353 Posts
March 03 2011 04:50 GMT
#9
Thanks for the well wishes. Yeah it was roughly 3 hours which in retrospect sounds extremely unbelieveable.
Catch]22
Profile Blog Joined July 2009
Sweden2683 Posts
March 03 2011 04:53 GMT
#10
Oh... to be young again
hellokitty[hk]
Profile Joined June 2009
United States1309 Posts
Last Edited: 2011-03-03 05:00:17
March 03 2011 04:59 GMT
#11
Well written; nice use of bold.

I hope you have a good day too! Thanks for brightening mine, i didnt sleep too well last night. Was thinking about someone


...was it me?

Girls are cruel sometimes, even if they don't intend to be.
People are imbeciles, lucky thing god made cats.
ch33psh33p
Profile Blog Joined October 2010
7650 Posts
March 03 2011 05:02 GMT
#12
OH MY GOD.

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL.


MOAR MOAR MOAR.


You have no idea how happy this story makes me.
secret - never again
Deleted User 109835
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
629 Posts
March 03 2011 05:16 GMT
#13
--- Nuked ---
Souma
Profile Blog Joined May 2010
2nd Worst City in CA8938 Posts
Last Edited: 2011-03-03 05:32:46
March 03 2011 05:32 GMT
#14
On March 03 2011 13:45 jungle_BRAT wrote:
I have a hard time believing the restaurant let you chill at the table for 3 hours. but I guess maybe they weren't busy??


I do it all the time with my friends, since we just like to sit and chill for long periods of time. A place like Applebee's usually doesn't mind.

btw, this was the best entry yet. I was actually smiling as I was reading through it.

I am jelly.
Writer
Graham
Profile Blog Joined January 2010
Canada1259 Posts
Last Edited: 2011-03-03 05:42:18
March 03 2011 05:41 GMT
#15
omg this shit is like crack
you definitely need to turn this into a book

MOARRRRRRR hahahaha XD

edit: definitely nice to read a non terrible girl blog, much less FOUR PARTS AND COUNTING OOOMGGGG
Wolf
Profile Blog Joined April 2010
Korea (South)3290 Posts
March 03 2011 05:44 GMT
#16
This isn't a real girl blog. Everything went too well.
Commentatorhttp://twitter.com/proxywolf
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Jonoman92
Profile Blog Joined September 2006
United States9104 Posts
March 03 2011 05:45 GMT
#17
This was the first blog of yours I can remember seeing but man... I enjoyed the read.
Shana
Profile Blog Joined July 2009
Indonesia1814 Posts
March 03 2011 05:53 GMT
#18
Turn this into a book

Seriously
Believing in what lies ahead. | That which we call a rose, by any other name would smell as sweet.
SonuvBob
Profile Blog Joined October 2006
Aiur21549 Posts
Last Edited: 2011-03-03 06:06:35
March 03 2011 06:05 GMT
#19
Great story. Terrible username.

On March 03 2011 14:53 Shana wrote:
Turn this into a book

Seriously

Noooo, there was a guy who was posting an epic story in General a few years ago, then right before the end he signed a book deal and wasn't allowed to post the rest.
Administrator
bLuR
Profile Blog Joined June 2010
Canada625 Posts
March 03 2011 06:09 GMT
#20
Previously on "Applebees Romance" . . . .


Continuing on..


After our first kiss i felt amazing

I went home,

Fapped,

Then wrote our story on teamliquid for all the nerds to read.

IN all serious though you're a good writer, and i read it all the way through hope it works out
avilo
Profile Blog Joined November 2007
United States4100 Posts
March 03 2011 06:12 GMT
#21
Enjoyable reads thank you for sharing
Sup
slipperymess
Profile Joined February 2011
14 Posts
March 03 2011 06:15 GMT
#22
Dang dude, this is some engaging shit. I keep wanting to read the next chapter.
You should definitely look into writing something. You're pretty good

Oh, and good job with the girl
Zim23
Profile Joined August 2010
United States1681 Posts
March 03 2011 06:17 GMT
#23
Haha I can't believe this is about a 2 week old relationship. I keep thinking it'll end with you being happily married for the last 10 years. 2 weeks man! Wow you're excited about this girl.
Do an arranged marriage if she's not completely minging, and don't worry about dancing, get a go-kart, cheers.
Saeko
Profile Joined November 2010
Australia23 Posts
March 03 2011 06:44 GMT
#24
Man this is so awesome! I hate waiting, but I must xD.. Keep it up :D
Sunny #1! ^_^
Ryalnos
Profile Joined July 2010
United States1946 Posts
March 03 2011 06:46 GMT
#25
On March 03 2011 15:05 SonuvBob wrote:
Great story. Terrible username.

Show nested quote +
On March 03 2011 14:53 Shana wrote:
Turn this into a book

Seriously

Noooo, there was a guy who was posting an epic story in General a few years ago, then right before the end he signed a book deal and wasn't allowed to post the rest.


Hmhm anyone provide a link to this thread?

Cute blog btw =).
Lyzon
Profile Blog Joined October 2009
United Kingdom440 Posts
March 03 2011 06:49 GMT
#26
is it just me? i couldnt stop smiling reading this segment.. pure win LOL D: we want MOAR!

i would gladly buy the book if it ended up as one
Xenocide_Knight
Profile Blog Joined January 2008
Korea (South)2625 Posts
March 03 2011 06:50 GMT
#27
On March 03 2011 15:05 SonuvBob wrote:
Great story. Terrible username.

Show nested quote +
On March 03 2011 14:53 Shana wrote:
Turn this into a book

Seriously

Noooo, there was a guy who was posting an epic story in General a few years ago, then right before the end he signed a book deal and wasn't allowed to post the rest.


omg the story by [censored]
I HATED that, was such an epic story, I was so into it then BAM
did that book ever come out?
I'm still convinced it was the greatest troll of all time
Shine[Kal] #1 fan
Lyzon
Profile Blog Joined October 2009
United Kingdom440 Posts
March 03 2011 06:52 GMT
#28
On March 03 2011 15:50 Xenocide_Knight wrote:
Show nested quote +
On March 03 2011 15:05 SonuvBob wrote:
Great story. Terrible username.

On March 03 2011 14:53 Shana wrote:
Turn this into a book

Seriously

Noooo, there was a guy who was posting an epic story in General a few years ago, then right before the end he signed a book deal and wasn't allowed to post the rest.


omg the story by [censored]
I HATED that, was such an epic story, I was so into it then BAM
did that book ever come out?
I'm still convinced it was the greatest troll of all time

can you enlighten us on it? i would like to read another epic story lol
Exteray
Profile Blog Joined June 2007
United States1094 Posts
March 03 2011 07:15 GMT
#29
good read! showed my gf
Noxie
Profile Blog Joined April 2010
United States2227 Posts
March 03 2011 07:17 GMT
#30
really enjoying the story MOAR,

(=
GHOSTCLAW
Profile Blog Joined February 2008
United States17042 Posts
March 03 2011 07:41 GMT
#31
On March 03 2011 15:05 SonuvBob wrote:
Great story. Terrible username.

Show nested quote +
On March 03 2011 14:53 Shana wrote:
Turn this into a book

Seriously

Noooo, there was a guy who was posting an epic story in General a few years ago, then right before the end he signed a book deal and wasn't allowed to post the rest.


I agree with the username thing - change it before you get to 500 posts please ^^

http://www.teamliquid.net/forum/viewmessage.php?topic_id=3398&currentpage=last

Great story though, I'm really enjoying it.
PhotographerLiquipedia. Drop me a pm if you've got questions/need help.
PUPATREE
Profile Joined August 2009
340 Posts
March 03 2011 08:06 GMT
#32
so cheesy lmao
dunno how you call her princess with a straight face
ㅋㄲㅈㅁ
Radiomouse
Profile Joined November 2009
Netherlands209 Posts
March 03 2011 09:52 GMT
#33
great story telling qualities you have there sir!

Thanks for sharing~ ^o^
qwaykee
Profile Joined February 2010
Norway266 Posts
March 03 2011 09:56 GMT
#34
this is so cheesy and sweet. a little bit weird calling her princess and all, but so cute nonetheless. gogogo moree
-KarmA
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
United States353 Posts
March 03 2011 13:20 GMT
#35
On March 03 2011 16:41 GHOSTCLAW wrote:
Show nested quote +
On March 03 2011 15:05 SonuvBob wrote:
Great story. Terrible username.

On March 03 2011 14:53 Shana wrote:
Turn this into a book

Seriously

Noooo, there was a guy who was posting an epic story in General a few years ago, then right before the end he signed a book deal and wasn't allowed to post the rest.


I agree with the username thing - change it before you get to 500 posts please ^^

http://www.teamliquid.net/forum/viewmessage.php?topic_id=3398&currentpage=last

Great story though, I'm really enjoying it.


Ahaha. Is the username really that bad? xD

Any suggestions on something to change it to?
HeavOnEarth
Profile Blog Joined March 2008
United States7087 Posts
March 03 2011 13:34 GMT
#36
On March 03 2011 15:05 SonuvBob wrote:
Great story. Terrible username.

Show nested quote +
On March 03 2011 14:53 Shana wrote:
Turn this into a book

Seriously

Noooo, there was a guy who was posting an epic story in General a few years ago, then right before the end he signed a book deal and wasn't allowed to post the rest.

oh my god i must've checked that thing so many times. never knew that T_T
"come korea next time... FXO house... 10 korean, 10 korean"
Archas
Profile Blog Joined July 2010
United States6531 Posts
March 03 2011 16:37 GMT
#37
I have a Poli-sci exam to study for tomorrow. Instead, I'm reading this blog series. I find it more enjoyable and worth my time.

On March 03 2011 22:20 MOARpylons wrote:
Show nested quote +
On March 03 2011 16:41 GHOSTCLAW wrote:
On March 03 2011 15:05 SonuvBob wrote:
Great story. Terrible username.

On March 03 2011 14:53 Shana wrote:
Turn this into a book

Seriously

Noooo, there was a guy who was posting an epic story in General a few years ago, then right before the end he signed a book deal and wasn't allowed to post the rest.


I agree with the username thing - change it before you get to 500 posts please ^^

http://www.teamliquid.net/forum/viewmessage.php?topic_id=3398&currentpage=last

Great story though, I'm really enjoying it.


Ahaha. Is the username really that bad? xD

Any suggestions on something to change it to?

Slick Willy, imo.
The room is ripe with the stench of bitches!
nosliw
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
United States2716 Posts
March 03 2011 16:44 GMT
#38
On March 03 2011 15:05 SonuvBob wrote:
Great story. Terrible username.

Show nested quote +
On March 03 2011 14:53 Shana wrote:
Turn this into a book

Seriously

Noooo, there was a guy who was posting an epic story in General a few years ago, then right before the end he signed a book deal and wasn't allowed to post the rest.

Link please?
Xenocide_Knight
Profile Blog Joined January 2008
Korea (South)2625 Posts
March 03 2011 17:41 GMT
#39
On March 04 2011 01:44 nosliw wrote:
Show nested quote +
On March 03 2011 15:05 SonuvBob wrote:
Great story. Terrible username.

On March 03 2011 14:53 Shana wrote:
Turn this into a book

Seriously

Noooo, there was a guy who was posting an epic story in General a few years ago, then right before the end he signed a book deal and wasn't allowed to post the rest.

Link please?


You know, the whole point of not naming the person's name or linking it was to spare you poor souls the pain of eternity

here you go
+ Show Spoiler +

search "an unforgettable night"
Shine[Kal] #1 fan
Shana
Profile Blog Joined July 2009
Indonesia1814 Posts
Last Edited: 2011-03-03 22:57:33
March 03 2011 22:48 GMT
#40
Yeah I remember someone posted in general then turn his story into a book.
I take back my words, don't turn this into a book. At least not until you finished the story.

I don't want to feel the pain again

edit:
Fuck. Reminded me of that story again
I guess I'll reread it
Believing in what lies ahead. | That which we call a rose, by any other name would smell as sweet.
-KarmA
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
United States353 Posts
March 03 2011 23:29 GMT
#41
Wow. That story blew mine out of the water :[

How the hell do i compete with that one eh?
Z3kk
Profile Blog Joined December 2009
4099 Posts
March 04 2011 00:30 GMT
#42
On March 04 2011 08:29 MOARpylons wrote:
Wow. That story blew mine out of the water :[

How the hell do i compete with that one eh?


Don't worry about it man; both your stories are good in different ways--yours has more fidelity too ;D

Each entry gets better haha...first one was just simple honest story, and each entry has more "story-like" formatting (i.e. font changes, line skipping, etc.) that add to the tone Thank you :3
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OpticalShot
Profile Blog Joined October 2009
Canada6330 Posts
March 04 2011 00:49 GMT
#43
On March 03 2011 13:10 MOARpylons wrote:

Alright i got this.

She opened the door.

Alright i dont got this

AHHHH OMG
I think you just spoke for all of us hopeless romanticists there.
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Souma
Profile Blog Joined May 2010
2nd Worst City in CA8938 Posts
March 04 2011 01:12 GMT
#44
On March 04 2011 02:41 Xenocide_Knight wrote:
Show nested quote +
On March 04 2011 01:44 nosliw wrote:
On March 03 2011 15:05 SonuvBob wrote:
Great story. Terrible username.

On March 03 2011 14:53 Shana wrote:
Turn this into a book

Seriously

Noooo, there was a guy who was posting an epic story in General a few years ago, then right before the end he signed a book deal and wasn't allowed to post the rest.

Link please?


You know, the whole point of not naming the person's name or linking it was to spare you poor souls the pain of eternity

here you go
+ Show Spoiler +

search "an unforgettable night"


jeezes christ, why did I read that.

fml.

fml fml fml fml fml fml fml fml fml fml fml fml fml fml fml fml fml fml.
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blahman3344
Profile Blog Joined March 2009
United States2015 Posts
March 04 2011 02:46 GMT
#45
"Ashley..." I said softly. She turned her head slightly, still blushing. "...Be my girlfriend"

She let out another warm smile

"Yes."


I grinned from ear to ear while reading this. You really have a talent for writing, and your story is very inspirational to me. =)
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SonuvBob
Profile Blog Joined October 2006
Aiur21549 Posts
March 04 2011 03:00 GMT
#46
On March 04 2011 08:29 MOARpylons wrote:
Wow. That story blew mine out of the water :[

How the hell do i compete with that one eh?

Well you're not really competing with that one, it's a different kind of story.

You are, however, competing with this one. Good luck.

(and here's part 2 of the one I just linked)
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Ender
Profile Blog Joined October 2003
United States294 Posts
March 04 2011 03:22 GMT
#47
Ashley Hardy?
The beatings will continue until the morale improves.
Fallen33
Profile Blog Joined April 2007
United States596 Posts
March 04 2011 05:06 GMT
#48
god damnit this is cruel and unusual punishment.
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-KarmA
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
United States353 Posts
March 04 2011 05:10 GMT
#49
On March 04 2011 12:00 SonuvBob wrote:
Show nested quote +
On March 04 2011 08:29 MOARpylons wrote:
Wow. That story blew mine out of the water :[

How the hell do i compete with that one eh?

Well you're not really competing with that one, it's a different kind of story.

You are, however, competing with this one. Good luck.

(and here's part 2 of the one I just linked)


Eh give me some time, its only been 2 weeks.

Havent been able to write as much as i want because weve been spending time together constantly.


On March 04 2011 12:22 Ender wrote:
Ashley Hardy?


No
Dhalphir
Profile Blog Joined November 2010
Australia1305 Posts
March 04 2011 06:02 GMT
#50
On March 03 2011 15:05 SonuvBob wrote:
Great story. Terrible username.

Show nested quote +
On March 03 2011 14:53 Shana wrote:
Turn this into a book

Seriously

Noooo, there was a guy who was posting an epic story in General a few years ago, then right before the end he signed a book deal and wasn't allowed to post the rest.

Holy fuck I mean if this happens right now with this, if he is just posting all this and then stops and says "to see the rest, buy my book" I can't be held responsible for what I might do.
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Dhalphir
Profile Blog Joined November 2010
Australia1305 Posts
Last Edited: 2011-03-04 06:04:00
March 04 2011 06:03 GMT
#51
So this is based on something happening to you right now, is she going to be given this to read?

Because, and I'm serious here, if you continue in a serious relationship, this is going to score you SERIOUS brownie points.
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-KarmA
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
United States353 Posts
March 04 2011 06:37 GMT
#52
On March 04 2011 15:03 Dhalphir wrote:
So this is based on something happening to you right now, is she going to be given this to read?

Because, and I'm serious here, if you continue in a serious relationship, this is going to score you SERIOUS brownie points.


Thats kind of why im doing it. Mostly as a memoir type thing i can show her and shell be like AWWWWWWWWWW.

Besides that writing has always been a passion of mine. Just didnt have the inspiration for it since high school when they forced inspiration down your throat
GHOSTCLAW
Profile Blog Joined February 2008
United States17042 Posts
March 04 2011 06:41 GMT
#53
On March 03 2011 22:20 MOARpylons wrote:
Show nested quote +
On March 03 2011 16:41 GHOSTCLAW wrote:
On March 03 2011 15:05 SonuvBob wrote:
Great story. Terrible username.

On March 03 2011 14:53 Shana wrote:
Turn this into a book

Seriously

Noooo, there was a guy who was posting an epic story in General a few years ago, then right before the end he signed a book deal and wasn't allowed to post the rest.


I agree with the username thing - change it before you get to 500 posts please ^^

http://www.teamliquid.net/forum/viewmessage.php?topic_id=3398&currentpage=last

Great story though, I'm really enjoying it.


Ahaha. Is the username really that bad? xD

Any suggestions on something to change it to?


it's bad. it's a meme (MOAR) within a meme (you require additional pylons).

Create a blog and ask? you're asking the wrong person for names, I got mine given to me by TL staff
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Souma
Profile Blog Joined May 2010
2nd Worst City in CA8938 Posts
Last Edited: 2011-03-04 07:11:00
March 04 2011 07:00 GMT
#54
MOARprincess

I honestly don't know why you're criticizing his name. As long as it doesn't have weird capitalizations, numbers, and doesn't include the words "azn," "dragon," or "boi" then it's all good imo.

I actually didn't see anything wrong with his name and still don't. I think it's perfectly fine.
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arb
Profile Blog Joined April 2008
Noobville17921 Posts
March 04 2011 09:20 GMT
#55
FUUUUUUUU

DAWWWWW
SO CUTE

5/5
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Lyzon
Profile Blog Joined October 2009
United Kingdom440 Posts
March 04 2011 10:14 GMT
#56
On March 04 2011 02:41 Xenocide_Knight wrote:
Show nested quote +
On March 04 2011 01:44 nosliw wrote:
On March 03 2011 15:05 SonuvBob wrote:
Great story. Terrible username.

On March 03 2011 14:53 Shana wrote:
Turn this into a book

Seriously

Noooo, there was a guy who was posting an epic story in General a few years ago, then right before the end he signed a book deal and wasn't allowed to post the rest.

Link please?


You know, the whole point of not naming the person's name or linking it was to spare you poor souls the pain of eternity

here you go
+ Show Spoiler +

search "an unforgettable night"


why o why did i ask such an epic story with the mother of all cliff hangers fuuuuccckk
-KarmA
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
United States353 Posts
Last Edited: 2011-03-04 13:28:48
March 04 2011 13:26 GMT
#57
On March 04 2011 15:41 GHOSTCLAW wrote:
Show nested quote +
On March 03 2011 22:20 MOARpylons wrote:
On March 03 2011 16:41 GHOSTCLAW wrote:
On March 03 2011 15:05 SonuvBob wrote:
Great story. Terrible username.

On March 03 2011 14:53 Shana wrote:
Turn this into a book

Seriously

Noooo, there was a guy who was posting an epic story in General a few years ago, then right before the end he signed a book deal and wasn't allowed to post the rest.


I agree with the username thing - change it before you get to 500 posts please ^^

http://www.teamliquid.net/forum/viewmessage.php?topic_id=3398&currentpage=last

Great story though, I'm really enjoying it.


Ahaha. Is the username really that bad? xD

Any suggestions on something to change it to?


it's bad. it's a meme (MOAR) within a meme (you require additional pylons).

Create a blog and ask? you're asking the wrong person for names, I got mine given to me by TL staff


Its a meme within a meme within a meme

inception

lol
AzN_DraG0n_Boi53
Profile Joined March 2011
Romania1 Post
March 04 2011 17:21 GMT
#58
On March 04 2011 16:00 Souma wrote:
MOARprincess

I honestly don't know why you're criticizing his name. As long as it doesn't have weird capitalizations, numbers, and doesn't include the words "azn," "dragon," or "boi" then it's all good imo.

I actually didn't see anything wrong with his name and still don't. I think it's perfectly fine.

0_o What?

+ Show Spoiler +
Just wanted to make a joke, please ban this account, or I'll do something with it to get it banned.
Archas
Profile Blog Joined July 2010
United States6531 Posts
March 04 2011 23:11 GMT
#59
Sorry if this is off-topic, but I couldn't help but notice the "Unforgettable Night" posts going on in here.

There's gonna be an update at last. From the "Ask TL Staff Anything" thread:
On March 05 2011 08:08 OneBlueAugust wrote:
Is there a way to get a thread unlocked once it's been locked? I posted a story on here a few years ago, and I'd really like to update it with the finished version.

The thread I'm referring to is: http://www.teamliquid.net/forum/viewmessage.php?topic_id=75976
The room is ripe with the stench of bitches!
Hyren
Profile Blog Joined June 2010
United States817 Posts
Last Edited: 2011-03-04 23:18:39
March 04 2011 23:18 GMT
#60
On March 04 2011 11:46 blahman3344 wrote:
Show nested quote +
"Ashley..." I said softly. She turned her head slightly, still blushing. "...Be my girlfriend"

She let out another warm smile

"Yes."


I grinned from ear to ear while reading this. You really have a talent for writing, and your story is very inspirational to me. =)

My heart melted ;___;
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-KarmA
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
United States353 Posts
March 04 2011 23:21 GMT
#61
Bear with me here. Ill get you guys an update tomorrow afternoon. Been busy as hell
Souma
Profile Blog Joined May 2010
2nd Worst City in CA8938 Posts
March 05 2011 01:01 GMT
#62
You're such a tease...

*subsequently pulls out hair*

And...

On March 05 2011 02:21 AzN_DraG0n_Boi53 wrote:
Show nested quote +
On March 04 2011 16:00 Souma wrote:
MOARprincess

I honestly don't know why you're criticizing his name. As long as it doesn't have weird capitalizations, numbers, and doesn't include the words "azn," "dragon," or "boi" then it's all good imo.

I actually didn't see anything wrong with his name and still don't. I think it's perfectly fine.

0_o What?

+ Show Spoiler +
Just wanted to make a joke, please ban this account, or I'll do something with it to get it banned.


rofl wow...
Writer
Ushio
Profile Blog Joined June 2010
Canada868 Posts
March 05 2011 03:57 GMT
#63
Holy crap... That was incredible!!! You should write a short novel!
http://myanimelist.net/profile/billng
SonuvBob
Profile Blog Joined October 2006
Aiur21549 Posts
March 05 2011 19:33 GMT
#64
On March 04 2011 14:10 MOARpylons wrote:
Show nested quote +
On March 04 2011 12:00 SonuvBob wrote:
On March 04 2011 08:29 MOARpylons wrote:
Wow. That story blew mine out of the water :[

How the hell do i compete with that one eh?

Well you're not really competing with that one, it's a different kind of story.

You are, however, competing with this one. Good luck.

(and here's part 2 of the one I just linked)


Eh give me some time, its only been 2 weeks.

Ah, ok. Well I hope it eventually ends as well as his story did.
Administrator
-KarmA
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
United States353 Posts
March 05 2011 20:34 GMT
#65
I read a good half of it and skimmed the rest. seemed pretty good. Either way Heres hoping i can deliver something reasonably entertaining.

Im gonna go throw in a load of laundry then start clacking away at part 5.

Gruv
Profile Joined October 2009
United Kingdom379 Posts
March 05 2011 20:52 GMT
#66
This is good to read and it really make me happy! Keep it up dude can't wait for the next installment! :D
Well butter my biscuit.
SonuvBob
Profile Blog Joined October 2006
Aiur21549 Posts
March 05 2011 21:43 GMT
#67
On March 06 2011 05:34 MOARpylons wrote:
I read a good half of it and skimmed the rest. seemed pretty good. Either way Heres hoping i can deliver something reasonably entertaining.

Im gonna go throw in a load of laundry then start clacking away at part 5.


I wasn't talking about the entertainment value for us. :p
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-KarmA
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
United States353 Posts
March 05 2011 22:08 GMT
#68
Part 5 is up. Enjoyyyyyyyy
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