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So i assume this is going to take a while. By the time i get most of my thoughts out this blog is gonna be huge so go get yourself a drink, snack, drugs. Whatever it is you enjoy while reading things.
Ill wait.
...welcome back
So lets start with a little backstory. Im 20 years old. I work full time as a mechanic with my father and brother. Been doing this since i was 16.
So as stated earlier this blog is about a girl. I vaguely remember her from high school. Never really knew her that well and didnt really think too much about it. She graduated a year before me so that little bit of of seeing her that did happen, stopped abruptly when i turned senior.
Anyways, flash forward.
I had just graduated and made the leap from working after school to full time. One night i had stayed after at work to tear apart an engine and chat with my best friend Jay. And at the time i had just gotten out of a bad relationship, in which i had been stupid enough to buy her a (used) car and was looking to sell it. So i put it up next to the street with my number and price on it. Little did i know this is where it started.
So i sat there cracking jokes with Jay and my phone began to ring. A number i never seen before, i assumed it was an offer on the car seeing as i had gotten none in the past week. It was a girl. A sweet voice. A refreshing change of pace.
She offered the price on the car and i told her show up right now with the money and its yours.
She had shown up with her stepfather. She was a redhead with a sweet face, nice body, just an overall beauty. She had paid for the car and we signed a few things and that was that. Before she left she gave me the most enchanting smile. It was warm and caring. Something i had never seen before.
So fast forward again a couple years. Here we are now. the week before valentines day, Over the past couple years bad relationships had made me cold and bitter, really just overall sick of of relationships in general.
So back to the girl. She brought her car in for routine maitenance. However that nasty snowstorm that hit the middle US and east coast had hit us exceptionally hard (MI) and we were stuck waiting on a shipment of parts. So seeing as this was going to take a bit i offered her and her son a ride home. and to pick them back up when we finally got hers taken care of.
Did i mention she has a 3 year old son? Eh, doesnt really matter. The blogs about her.
So she loaded up her son Logan into his carseat and we took off for her place. I was nervous for some reason. But i shook it off. I was cool, calm, collected. The whole 5 minute drive to her house i was silent. She kept glancing over at me but didnt say anything. So we made it to her house and she unloaded her son. And even though i seemed like a total cold, distant asshole, she she walked up her front steps she told me "Thank you" and gave me one of those sweet smiles.
My heart completely melted, bringing back memories of when i sold her that car. (Which she had sold a few months prior to this event)She was still beautiful and still had that amazing smile. Damn.
So shortly after lunch we finished her car and i gave her a call asking if she was ready to be picked up. We shot the breeze a bit and hung up, and i sped off to her place to pick her up. My heart was racing for some reason, my mind raced. What the hell was wrong with me?
So i had arrived at her place, she walked out and gave me another one of those heartwarming smiles, all the way down the walkway. My face turned red and i started to panic a bit. Not sure why but i shook it off and we had another silent drive back to the shop. Even after talking so casually on the phone. We had arrived at the shop and i cashed her out. We continued the conversation we had earlier talking about life in general and whatnot. The topic shifted to how a cute girl like her is single, to which she replied people dont like the fact that she has a kid, too much baggage i guess.
Huh... how bout that.
Either way i gave her an extra 10% off the bill, and cashed her out. She thanked me and gave me another amazing smile.
Oh my god it was amazing
...oh my god... im doing it back
I NEVER smile.
To be continued
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Wow, for once a success story that isn't bullshit (*cough cough* DreamXero *cough*). Sounds like you might just maybe get a shot. Who knows? At any rate, here's hoping it goes well, or at least doesn't end in utter disaster.
Actually, at this point, I think every girl blog here should have the title prefaced with the tag "[Girl]", so our resident experts on females can immediately determine where to offer their educated and sound advice.
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On March 01 2011 10:07 MOARpylons wrote: Ahaha. Were dating right now actually. I just needed a break from typing :B Great news. At least one of us nerds has somehow advanced to the courtship stage. =D
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Thanks for the well wishes though. Im sure ive got another 5 or 6 blogs worth of things to type out so keep your eyes peeled.
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this is pretty good i like the writing style and the story being told best part, more installments
^.^ 5/5
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WOAH! Spoiler alert! that totally ruined the next chapter for me! You can't just ruined the next chapter just like that! KAMAN!!!
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I didnt ruin it completely. Just gave a teaser. :D
Stay tuned, theres action, drama, romance, epic gunfights, and explosions.
Alright maybe not. But i can promise the next ones will be better. This is the 3rd time ive typed this thing out and when i hit submit TL had logged me out for some reason. Finally had the amazing idea to type it out in notepad beforehand.
Take that interwebs!
MOAR : 1 Interwebs : 0
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On March 01 2011 10:35 MOARpylons wrote: I didnt ruin it completely. Just gave a teaser. :D
Stay tuned, theres action, drama, romance, epic gunfights, and explosions.
Alright maybe not. But i can promise the next ones will be better. This is the 3rd time ive typed this thing out and when i hit submit TL had logged me out for some reason. Finally had the amazing idea to type it out in notepad beforehand.
Take that interwebs!
MOAR : 1 Interwebs : 0 Will there at least be an adequate gunfight? Maybe a mediocre one? I'm not picky.
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I could imagine one into there if you want
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On March 01 2011 10:04 Aeres wrote: Wow, for once a success story that isn't bullshit (*cough cough* DreamXero *cough*).
Great coincidence that I just happened to read that string of blog posts today. Anyway, best of luck and details are the spice of life (pictures count as details and are even valued more for some :D).
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Yeah next installment is gonna have a bit more detail. like i said, frustrated because i had to retype it 3 times :/
And of course a mediocre or better gunfight for Aeres
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If you had responded to that smile you like so much the first time she showed it to you, you might have gotten in before the baby; if I'm counting my years right.
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as i read that blog... the smile on my face grew bigger and bigger lol, i dunno why but i felt rly happy at the end of it... maybe cos im kinda in a similar situation so i could relate abit XD
and spoiler taht shit up :D still waiting for the next post tho
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You left the story off at an interesting point, but i read the teaser and it kind of ruined the suspense for me. ^^; Oh well, it was a good read nonetheless. Can't wait for the next installment. =D
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On March 01 2011 10:19 apm66 wrote:WOAH! Spoiler alert! that totally ruined the next chapter for me! You can't just ruined the next chapter just like that! KAMAN!!! Exactly. Rating 2 just for that ;(. No spoiler alert at all.... >: (.
+ Show Spoiler +If you ban me from here I'm gonna want a grudge match where you will have to BRING IT ON DONKEY KONG! ;D
edit: also, you sir, are in love .
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Alright alright ill add a spoiler tag. Pretend you guys didnt read that then.
Edit : Deleted the whole post. Carry on
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On March 01 2011 11:23 StorkHwaiting wrote: If you had responded to that smile you like so much the first time she showed it to you, you might have gotten in before the baby; if I'm counting my years right. This makes me sad for OP =(
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Actually no. The first time i saw her was after she had the kid. She was pregnant on her senior year. Sorry for the confusion.
Looking back i wish i did know her before that. Logans biological dad is...
Hmm...
a redneck-y asswipe. if i could say that
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