On March 18 2010 06:01 love1another wrote:
Your rhyme, my friend could be more crisp...
Of meter you flash but a wisp...
The wit is there, I'll give you this...
But without form your verse is piss.

I disagree there, my good man.
He writes better than most guys can.
But if it is "piss", as you say,
then you could do it better, nay?

The6357

United States1268 Posts

March 17 2010 22:02 GMT

#22

why not...??

ChaseR

Norway1004 Posts

March 17 2010 22:58 GMT

#23

Give the man a break...it was a better and more ironic poem than what most are able to write.

love1another

United States1844 Posts

March 18 2010 00:40 GMT

#24

On March 18 2010 06:20 Captain Mayhem wrote:

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I disagree there, my good man.
He writes better than most guys can.
But if it is "piss", as you say,
then you could do it better, nay?

Do it better? Why even ask?
Although I am not one to bask
in my own talent, I can say
that I could best it any day!

WaddleD

Canada33 Posts

March 18 2010 01:30 GMT

#25

Then why not put them to the test?
The very words inside your breast,
Lay them down for all to see
Your rhyme, reason, and poetry.

endGame

United States394 Posts

March 18 2010 01:53 GMT

#26

All of you with your clever rhymes,
You flaming, hating, whining slime,
Just stop all of this hullabaloo,
Everyone, STFU.

OpticalShot

Canada6330 Posts

March 18 2010 03:04 GMT

#27

Why hasn't anyone brought up everyone's favourite free-style rap battle starter?

Hey you, you tryin' to rap
It ain't got rhythm, sounds like crap

...
k that was just horrible, but that's what EVERYONE starts with -_-;; I'm so sorry. lol

Klockan3

Sweden2866 Posts

March 18 2010 03:49 GMT

#28

I thought that this would be a WoW guy getting a sc2 beta key and feeling bad for it.

love1another

United States1844 Posts

March 18 2010 04:00 GMT

#29

On March 18 2010 10:53 endGame wrote:
All of you with your clever rhymes,
You flaming, hating, whining slime,
Just stop all of this hullabaloo,
Everyone, STFU.

Wow. What a buzzkill.

exeexe

Denmark937 Posts

March 18 2010 04:02 GMT

#30

soundspeakers are nothing

last day my screen just died and i went through 3 weeks without internet. Now thats T.T

first 3 weeks of no internet then when i finally had internet my screen died LOL-.....