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Scaramanga
Australia8090 Posts
 but thats pretty goodbetter than i could ever do | ||
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genwar
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MrHoon
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SO HUEG yeah I know anime emphasizes on the eyes but the eyes are too big  But keep on goin at it! Looks good! | ||
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Terranlisk
Singapore1404 Posts
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wo0py
Netherlands922 Posts
disclaimer, i don't draw myself so good but when i compare this with official manga then i think that would be the easiest thing to make it look much better | ||
alffla
Hong Kong20321 Posts
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DeSu
Australia91 Posts
On October 03 2009 21:59 MyHeroNoob wrote: are you using MSpaint? no Photoshop and Manga Studios. The gray parts are actually screentones, but they didn't render properly when I saved it because I forgot to choose a higher resolution. | ||
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alffla
Hong Kong20321 Posts
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Zozma
United States1626 Posts
Other than that, there's nothing in particular, but the proportions just seem messed up. I'd say that you should work on drawing the structure. Maybe you could practice a bit by doing some life-drawing. | ||
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ryuu_
United States1266 Posts
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Pyrrhuloxia
United States6700 Posts
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Terranlisk
Singapore1404 Posts
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Terranlisk
Singapore1404 Posts
He has lots of videos teaching you how to draw manga. | ||
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da_head
Canada3350 Posts
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Harem
United States11390 Posts
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saritenite
Singapore1680 Posts
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DamageControL
United States4222 Posts
The eyes are too large but it's not that important. edit: the eyes aren't really too large. They feel like they are to some, but I agree they are distinctive. | ||
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ramen247
United States1256 Posts
you really should practice body structure and basic body parts first. btw the eyes are... too large. | ||
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Arnic
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xmShake
United States1100 Posts
There's no depth in the left pigtail. It should be drawn further back. (It's symmetric with the other one currently, when her head is slightly turned to the right, and therefore her right pigtail should be deeper.) Other than those things, the general design is fine. Like the person above me suggested, learn some basic proportions. | ||
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