EPTIdea of a webcomic to grow esport scene - Page 3
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Miksu
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SehWho
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High[5]
United States61 Posts
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Technique
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TheSwamp
United States1497 Posts
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Reality-
Denmark20 Posts
but you should really go over the dialog again. You have a ton of grammar mistakes. And you might consider using contractions, don't instead of do not and so on, sounds less forced in speech | ||
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Fairon
Russian Federation80 Posts
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Facultyadjutant
Sweden1876 Posts
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kemihan
Brazil16 Posts
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Facultyadjutant
Sweden1876 Posts
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9-BiT
United States1089 Posts
Might want to fix that. The comic is super cool though, keep it up. | ||
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Nayth
France17 Posts
I understand that this comic is aimed towards teenagers ... but I still have plenty of more 'mature' subject I'd like to incorporate about psychology, competition and all this stuff : ) hopefully I could aim a good balance. I just experimented a lot with this webcomic as it was my first big project ! English is not my mother tongue :C and I hardly ever speak this language at all ... and I'm too shy to ask anyone to correct my text anyway ... My drawing style is still developing a lot ... you should also note that making 70 pages of comic takes a LOT of time. Time that I currently cannot waste for nothing :C I still work on other projects so one day I can live from drawing ... so bare with the low quality :X this apply to drawing as well as starcraft of course ! ![[image loading]](http://full-scratch.net/images/webcomic/tl09.jpg) if there are some byun's fan in the audiance : p ![[image loading]](http://full-scratch.net/images/webcomic/tl08.jpg) | ||
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metric.system
United States20 Posts
I think the art style and quality are perfectly appropriate for this wonderful idea. If anything, get someone to help with the writing; there's a mountain of material to make a esports themed webcomic fly but you can't half ass it with just your average sempiternal tale told through starcraft-tinted glasses. I'm sure there'd be plenty of people willing to help. Best of luck! | ||
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xHadoken
United States171 Posts
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Facultyadjutant
Sweden1876 Posts
Really stoked for next chapter! | ||
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3point14
Germany890 Posts
please make the comic!! hope youre also as talented with storytelling as with drawing. I think you will have no problems making money with it, cause it will get very high traffic and you can run ads from pokersites or whatever! if you include nice parts with Naniwa and Idra the traffic will explode! a arrangement with blizzard should be possible. there was a comic called +EV (poker related) and it was like the only pokercomic available and I guess with ads the guy had a pretty good income over years. it was done in 1pagejoke segments though which is much easier to enjoy during a small break or so Good luck! edit: come on that drawing style is ridicolously good, its gotta be used somewhere. also youre gonna get a lot of respect from the sc2 community  | ||
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Railgan
Switzerland1507 Posts
Keep up the goodwork | ||
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Excludos
Norway8257 Posts
On June 26 2013 09:14 Nayth wrote: English is not my mother tongue :C and I hardly ever speak this language at all ... and I'm too shy to ask anyone to correct my text anyway ... Luckily, you're in a community filled with people who would gladly do this for you  | ||
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