barracks on 12 and i be scoutin to check// when im terran you best know what to expect// im goin marines, marauders, and a bunch of mech// im headin to your base its gonna get wreck'd//
surprisingly, you decided to attack me though you failed to see tanks on teh ledge and a couple banshees and now you retreat take this time to consider gg
but you still decided to play on and i did wish you luck and to have fun so, wont hate on that cause gas is what i lack expanding again all while I attack
mutalisks tryn to harrass my economy sensor tower and stimpack marines, please dont waste your mutas cause ill wax em with ease thought you knew this aint no silver league
my micro is key, i watch your mutas flee i continue pushin while i macro beautifully rally point set, and im willin to bet youll leave the game once my vikings and your overlords have met
but i beg, dont rage quit, jus cause a couple of hellions wont let your base sit if ya didnt, then consider this a tip get a nydus so you can, try and defend-a little bit
//Chorus//
against toss now so i gotta change the cut scouting your base and seems im just in luck saw a 2 gate, so my depots go up got my reaper on rally but he always gets stuck
harassin till i see a cybernetics core and you know by that time got hellions at your door thinkin about leavin cuz your is economy sore transition into an expo, while im leavin you poor
thats the goal here, do you want more? raven hits the field, youve seen all before turret drop on probes is hardly a chore please dont make me do this, im gettin kind of bored
youve made it to the midgame, find some direction runnin out of options. i got stealth detection, cant go stalkers, defense drone deflection tryin void rays? see my infantry selection
Immortals, temps, and sentries got an issue my cloaked ghosts ready to snipe and emp you and my tanks sieged up with shells ready to rain through even got vikings if colossi come too
so you may ask whats a protoss player to do the answer is evident, you should choose terran too just prepare for all the babies who try to argue cryin all day just denyin what they know is true
Thanks guys.. as far as autotune, its my savior. can't sing for shit; I agree with the vocals SQ -- I was really critical of them and decided to not give a shit and not bother rerecording -=P -- infact the second half was written so much better that I was far too lazy to rewrite the first half. Oh well :D Thanks for the love people.
On August 16 2010 13:44 Allspark wrote: Thanks guys.. as far as autotune, its my savior. can't sing for shit; I agree with the vocals SQ -- I was really critical of them and decided to not give a shit and not bother rerecording -=P -- infact the second half was written so much better that I was far too lazy to rewrite the first half. Oh well :D Thanks for the love people.
Yeah there was a lot more flow in the second part imo. Good work though. Musical contributions are always fun to listen to. :D
On August 16 2010 14:01 sYz-Adrenaline wrote: Throwing in my thoughts i guess, very nice song, better then the Terran OP song at least the style of rap i guess, i despise rap anyways though.
this is also dirty. what a great song. i dont really mind the auto tune as much because the song has some sick flow. i really enjoyed that. you should put up a download link plz :D
It's not as high quality as the Terran OP song but it's still a lot better than most of the gaming music being done. I liked it a lot until the autotune went on overdrive.
I give it my thumbs up, things like this give sparks to the community.
haha yeah agree with all the constructive criticism; though I did enjoy the autotune. Timing was a bit rough as it was a pain to sit there and edit, figured I would worry about it only if the vocals were something I really was passionate about lol. I'll post an mp3 later, thanks for the love folks.
The other guy was a way better rapper. That "Terran's OP"-dude. This is wack, needs to be said. Still, I will applaud the initiative, and there's no other way to improve.
On August 16 2010 23:19 Scope wrote: The other guy was a way better rapper. That "Terran's OP"-dude. This is wack, needs to be said. Still, I will applaud the initiative, and there's no other way to improve.
Agreed, however my vocals are typically much better . I'll post a response to the tsp battle later tonight got caught playing more than I expected last night. I'll portably end up rerecording/rewriting this one as well unf so little time with sc 2 .
On August 16 2010 23:19 Scope wrote: The other guy was a way better rapper. That "Terran's OP"-dude. This is wack, needs to be said. Still, I will applaud the initiative, and there's no other way to improve.
I think the other guy had better production quality (it would be really hard to beat), but the lyrics on this one are just way better. Some pretty ingenious lines in this, as apposed to the "fuck husky, terrans op bitch yeah i said it, throw your hands up" crap.
Although the chorus is kinda painfully off key, not everyone born with perfect pitch though :p
Yea I thought it was pretty good for a fun/parody type of rap. If you're going to use auto-tune you might want to set it to tune your voice to the key the song is in. But over all I love it.
On August 17 2010 13:18 TheConstructed wrote: Yea I thought it was pretty good for a fun/parody type of rap. If you're going to use auto-tune you might want to set it to tune your voice to the key the song is in. But over all I love it.
ah didnt even think about it, new to the autotune settings, looked up a few tutorials but didn't even consider the what the key was, just left it on c major.
This was rather good for a random guy doing a parody; props to you. Too bad you waited to release this until rathe set the professionalism bar for these things ridiculously high.
Your lyrics were also pretty good. If only defenestrate would write lyrics for one of these things, though...
On August 17 2010 16:17 qrs wrote: This was rather good for a random guy doing a parody; props to you. Too bad you waited to release this until rathe set the professionalism bar for these things ridiculously high.
Your lyrics were also pretty good. If only defenestrate would write lyrics for one of these things, though...
*dreams*
haha yea when i saw it i was like damn..... meh might as well post now; though wish I had taken the time to rewrite the first half and slam both verses. Thanks though!
Good work! I completely disagree with the premise but to each their own I guess :D
(Also, just to make sure it is caught, there is a small typo in the lyrics. Listed as "raven hits the field, youve seen all before," it should be "raven hits the field, youve it seen all before". Sorry if I am being that guy, but I figured you'd want to know for posterity's sake.)
This was a pretty nice rap allspark, you definitely have a nice flow and it has good potential. A few of the parts were a little bit rough but it was overall quite enjoyable, i liked it.
On August 18 2010 09:43 Mastermind wrote: Sounds to me like this song is also saying terran is OP.
Maybe, if thats what you take from it. I'm pro-terran -- don't know if I agree with the OP discussion, but could see a few tweaks here and there; thus far my tvp matchup has been somewhat, zerg I could see them using a bit of a buff, but I also think zerg has the most dynamics and is probably the most difficult. Too few are being experimental with zerg when they seem to hold the largest differential.
I'm also not a pro-gamer in sc, and rather not start a crazy ridiculous discussion lol. The song was just made out of the fun taunting the other match-ups.