On January 13 2015 19:01 LoneMeow wrote:Show nested quote +On January 13 2015 11:21 LightningStrike wrote:
Also all the coaches here any advice for me?
Besides what advice I already gave you, I'd recommend trying to make your posts easier to read.
You tend to use very long and complicated sentences, which when combined with some grammar mistakes can make them quite tedious to read for a non-native English speaker.
Take this for an example:
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2. Half the Sky: Town: She made some silly posts at the start yes but everyone over analyzed them but not unusual from her type of entrance since she did similar entrances in Student Mafia IV and Carol of the Bells Mafia and she been asking some good questions towards The Shining and been following through her questioning and also defended her posts in a manor I feel townie from her.
What I think this means is:
Half the Sky is town because she made some silly posts at start which were overanalyzed. It's not unusual for her to do this as town (see Student Mafia IV and Carol of the Bells Mafia). She has been asking some good questions from The Shining and following through on them. She also defended her posts in a manner I feel is town.
Much easier to read this way to me at least.
As general advice to everyone,
quote what you reply to!Makes it much easier to get context when reading your filter. It also avoids the problem where someone else manages to post between the question and reply and you have to start guessing which post the reply was for.