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Lots of things to improve on, do you got an idea what I could do to make this sketch look better?
Also, mouthwork and tongues are the silliest thing I've trained before when it comes to drawing.

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Caumen
Denmark42 Posts
March 11 2012 00:36 GMT
#10161
![]() Lots of things to improve on, do you got an idea what I could do to make this sketch look better? Also, mouthwork and tongues are the silliest thing I've trained before when it comes to drawing. ![]() | ||
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Whitewing
United States7483 Posts
March 11 2012 00:49 GMT
#10162
On March 11 2012 07:58 diverzee wrote: Show nested quote + On March 11 2012 07:39 bloodynoob wrote: On March 11 2012 07:18 Whitewing wrote: + Show Spoiler + Wait, Twilight said she thought she saw something in the Horsehead Nebula.... oh shit Twilight spotted the Reapers. Holly ..... i didnt even notice this, wow possible refrence ? + Show Spoiler + Well, there is an actual Horse head nebula so the creators probably just thought it an appropriate area for her to spot something in. Edit: Forgot the spoiler tag! + Show Spoiler + In the same episode when they reference Cerberus? Just a couple days after the game came out? TOO MUCH COINCIDENCE! | ||
Saurabhinator
Australia347 Posts
March 11 2012 01:36 GMT
#10163
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Frigo
Hungary1023 Posts
March 11 2012 01:37 GMT
#10164
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BioSC
United States636 Posts
March 11 2012 01:48 GMT
#10165
Subject of Breakdown: Episode 2-20 (+ Show Spoiler + It's About Time Standard disclaimer: Wall of text incoming. The following is all my personal interpretation, taken from personal head-canon and thoughts as I watch the episode. Take it as such. + Show Spoiler + Back by popular demand, (AKA: Me wanting to practice masochism in writing form) is my breakdown of season 2 episodes. Last weeks premier was spurred on by the dislike for the episode, which I felt was misplaced, but I digress, this Breakdown is about today's episode, which I am happy to note was received much better. I also want to address the writer issue once again before we get started, as this episode was written by (and again, I had to look this up) M. A. Larson, who wrote the 2-Part season premiere, Luna Eclipsed, and Secret of my Excess this season. While many people would agree that those episodes were exemplary, It's just as bad to go into an episode thinking that "Oh, Larson wrote this episode, it MUST be good!" positive preconceptions about episodes can affect your thoughts just as much as negative ones, and like I said last Breakdown, should be avoided. That said: it's ponies - it's hard to go in without preconceptions! Getting to the episode: Opening up with a dream sequence! Wat? If you, like me, played ME3, then you would know my current opinion on dream sequences. Luckily, there is only a small bit of comedy and Rarity x Spike Crushshipping in this scene, setting up the premise for the episode. TWILIGHT OCD! It's nice to know that even through character building episodes(aka: TS's OCD and scheduling issues from Lesson Zero) problems like that don't just go away, and need to be worked on. I would like to draw attention to the amazing animation the studio is pulling out, even for such a small scene as this intro. TS's teleport magic received much love, sprinkling stars as the magic fades is a wonderful touch, which contrasts the twinkling stars as TS maintains her magic. Also they seem to be experimenting with positioning for the "camera" as seen in the scene right before spike notes what time it is. This is a wonderful shot, showing off their creative use of perspective, and not just using a ground level, eye to eye shot. Little things like this help separate this show from other animation, and I love it. Que up some OCD scheduling issues, and this episode would have been a repeat of Lesson Zero (read: not a good thing) I am so glad for the twist shown after the first break. ![]() Oh man, at this point, I knew the episode would be good! And suddenly - 2 Twilights. Man oh man, did I enjoy this scene. Twilight, after initial shock immediately goes into super over-the-top adorkable wanting to "study" this new and unforeseen circumstance, causing "Big Boss" Twilight to waste time and not get her whole message out. It's CLASSIC time loop scenario, and as many people in IRC noted - Even though we all knew where the story was going as soon as Future TS showed up, the journey was by far the most entertaining part. It should be noted that, alas, we are NOT the targeted audience, and a time travel episode in this show has to be simple enough for kids to understand/follow. Time Travel is confusing as it is guys xD. Also: The music when TS is talking to FTS is some of the most amazing I've heard in the series to date... Seriously, go watch that scene again, it's that good. I'll wait. Back? Ok, good! Now that Time Travel magic is canon, I foresee many fics involving Time Travel to pop up, even with such a short duration on the spell. ![]() The face of a Champion™ Insert a short freakout session to herself, then to the town, TS rallies Ponyville against the unknown "threat". It's interesting to see that TS still commands respect from the town, as this is not the first time that she stood on her soapbox and delivered warnings/caused the town to prepare against some threat to the town. I wonder if its because she is a student of Celestia that the townsponies give her respect, or that she simply commands respect when dealing with crises. In any case, a Balboa Montage of the mane 6 and the town fix up Equestria. It's worth noting that Twilight uses Equestria when describing ponyville and its surrounding cities, which leads me to believe more in the whole "Equestria is a continent, not a planet". ![]() Oh man, ish just got real... After a small slapstick filled montage (including a little Rarijack shipping =P), insert Hasbro's flexing of their DnD muscles. Cerberus, the 3 headed guard dog of Tartarus (essentially hell). WOW I'm starting to really appreciate these subtle references that Hasbro lets them use. FS comes to the rescue again, and TS literally runs to hell and back in a night. And now the classic time loop build up starts. Most of the episode revolves around the message TS got from FTS, and then consequently her vain attempt to thwart the future through various actions. The cut on the left eye for one, was awesome, because through the episode, they show TS in the mirror, and the cut is always on the right cheek. A small detail, but a welcome one from Season 1 with such things as AJ's freckles disappearing every time she runs =D. Small notes on the transition to the Canterlot scene: Gypsy-Pie, an uncanny similarity to our well known Friendship is Witchcraft. Yes, I realize this isn't a direct reference, but hilarious nonetheless. Rainbow Dash's scene with spike was amazing, TS's face during that scene was too cute. As TS slips into more and more worry, she descends into OCD levels of research, a nice little continuity to her Lesson Zero self, nicely toned down from that episode though. In her hysteric state, she decides that the only solution is to stop time. I saw a few people noting that the biggest time "loop" in this episode was how TS knew that the time travel spell was in the StarSwirl section. She actually went there to look for the Time Stop Spell, NOT the Time TRAVEL spell. Also, William Anderson strikes gold with his BGM again during the hectic search for the stop spell. Go back and listen. Yeah, go do it. After learning that there is no "Tragedy" TS finally learns her lesson - To stop worrying about problems that MAY happen, and solve problems as they appear. Finally, Deus Ex Pinkie shows up finding the temporary time travel spell, wrapping up this time loop in a nice pretty bow. Small notes about the "Metal Gear Solid" trip to Canterlot Archives: Ponies in latex xD. That is all. I love the fact that Twilight is completely in her own zone while PP and Spike repeatedly try to tell her that she is, in fact, important enough to access high value research materials at will. The guards ponies themselves are also an interesting thing to note, as it looks that the night guard officially have their own uniform now that Luna is back. I was in doubt way back in Luna Eclipsed, but seeing it again confirms that Celestia enlisted a group of night guard ponies, or at least gave them a new set of armor now that Luna has returned. Speaking of Celestia - The whole "Why doesn't anyone care I'm sneaking around" comes to an amusing finish as Celestia doesn't mind that she sees TS in her locked archive room. All in all, wonderful episode yet again - Well paced, great handling of a tricky subject (Time Travel) lots of comedy, and excellent interaction between PP and TS. I especially love the continuity of Pinkie Sense where TS goes to pinkie to ask directly for help with it. I give this episode FutureTwilight/10 (I hope you guys are catching that I don't like giving an arbitrary numbering system to episodes =D) Once again, if you made it this far, thanks for reading! ♥ you all! Phew, that one took a while, hope you enjoy! | ||
Camail
United States1030 Posts
March 11 2012 04:04 GMT
#10166
[22:01] <+Camail> well [22:01] <+Camail> http://nenuiel.deviantart.com/art/Stained-Glass-Princess-Luna-and-Princess-Celestia-289604602 [22:01] <+Camail> http://noideasfornicknames.deviantart.com/art/The-ponytrix-289603121 [22:01] <+Camail> http://zeeclaw.deviantart.com/art/Show-them-that-you-rock-289690949 [22:01] <+Camail> http://art-anon.deviantart.com/art/Fluffy-Pile-and-Apajack-289600955 [22:01] <+Camail> http://umberjack.deviantart.com/art/the-most-powerful-289601681 [22:01] <+Camail> http://shivanking.deviantart.com/art/BRUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSHIE-289645536 [22:01] <+Camail> http://majorfreddy.deviantart.com/art/Twilight-Plissken-Escape-From-Manehatten-289639065 [22:02] <+Camail> http://gordonfreeguy.deviantart.com/art/You-call-this-Archaeology-289632693 [22:02] <+Camail> http://himanuts.deviantart.com/art/Fortune-for-a-Cupcake-289629080 [22:02] <+Camail> http://himanuts.deviantart.com/art/The-Box-What-about-it-289509820 [22:02] <+Camail> http://jotacepece.deviantart.com/art/Lyra-Heart-Strength-289624829 [22:02] <+Camail> http://mel-the-shadow-lover.deviantart.com/art/Sweetie-Bot-289654460 [22:02] <+Camail> http://empty-10.deviantart.com/art/Solid-Sparkle-is-Found-289651153 [22:02] <+Camail> http://mcsadat.deviantart.com/art/Twililicious-289649978 [22:02] <+Camail> http://hereticofdune.deviantart.com/art/Fluttercarry-289659765 [22:02] <+Camail> http://impending-logic.deviantart.com/art/Contest-Saussurea-289666803 [22:02] <+Camail> http://angelickitty89.deviantart.com/art/Pinkie-Pie-289685110 [22:02] <+Camail> http://nataliadsw.deviantart.com/art/Applejack-289662224 [22:03] <+Camail> http://misterbrony.deviantart.com/art/So-this-is-Friendship-Power-289661124 [22:03] <+Camail> http://p-isfor-plushes.deviantart.com/art/Rainbow-Dash-cutie-mark-Pillow-Plush-289663211 [22:03] <+Camail> http://oceanchan.deviantart.com/art/MLP-FiM-Rainbow-Dash-289674351 [22:03] <+Camail> http://why485.deviantart.com/art/Speed-Screw-Loose-289687761 [22:03] <+Camail> then | ||
Daralii
United States16991 Posts
March 11 2012 06:03 GMT
#10167
![]() I fucking love this show. | ||
Wikt
Poland226 Posts
March 11 2012 09:38 GMT
#10168
+ Show Spoiler + I cared very little for the fact it was a predictable story. It was hilarious! And it was in accordance with Twilight's basic nature, something she shares with many of those who organize things - constantly worrying about every single possibility - I'm sure there are plenty folk more organized than me who could identify with TS' freakout. Favourite moments: "You're not scientifically plausible!" "MONITOR EVERYTHING." Schedule the scheduling with Xzibit Sparkle. Calculus on the board (post above) Twilight "sneaking" through a building and noone giving half a fuck about her presence (including Trollestia, who raises the sun and then just pops over to say hi...) | ||
PharaohAsh
Australia1 Post
March 11 2012 10:42 GMT
#10169
I hope I am not interrupting anything. Just making my little mark in this huge thread. Looking forward to meeting you all with smiles and hugs and all other things nice. (And add a bit of StarCraft II on the side. =) | ||
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mensrea
Canada5062 Posts
March 11 2012 11:03 GMT
#10170
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Frigo
Hungary1023 Posts
March 11 2012 11:54 GMT
#10171
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Daralii
United States16991 Posts
March 11 2012 11:58 GMT
#10172
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Incognoto
France10239 Posts
March 11 2012 12:01 GMT
#10173
On March 11 2012 08:08 erkicman wrote: Show nested quote + On March 11 2012 07:01 Incognoto wrote: + Show Spoiler + Am I the only one who thought of Oblivion (the game) and about stealing an Elder Scroll when Twilight and company go to the Archives? Brilliant episode I seriously never stop getting entertained by these. + Show Spoiler + The final mission of the Thieves Guild line was EXACTLY what I was reminded of when Twi got into the Star Swirl section. Hell, from how the team circled around themselves, it must have been a circular tower as well. So no, you're not alone. Awaiting fanfics/canonical info to reveal what kind of horrible beings and powerful villains are imprisoned in Tartarus. High 5 bro. x) | ||
diverzee
Sweden992 Posts
March 11 2012 13:32 GMT
#10174
On March 11 2012 09:49 Whitewing wrote: Show nested quote + On March 11 2012 07:58 diverzee wrote: On March 11 2012 07:39 bloodynoob wrote: On March 11 2012 07:18 Whitewing wrote: + Show Spoiler + Wait, Twilight said she thought she saw something in the Horsehead Nebula.... oh shit Twilight spotted the Reapers. Holly ..... i didnt even notice this, wow possible refrence ? + Show Spoiler + Well, there is an actual Horse head nebula so the creators probably just thought it an appropriate area for her to spot something in. Edit: Forgot the spoiler tag! + Show Spoiler + In the same episode when they reference Cerberus? Just a couple days after the game came out? TOO MUCH COINCIDENCE! + Show Spoiler + Hah, now that you mention it, perhaps you're right! ![]() Also, where is that image with the mane 6 as delinquent asians from? I laugh just looking at it! :D | ||
fooby
United States52 Posts
March 11 2012 14:48 GMT
#10175
EDIT: and clicking on the link the artist described it as "Coltmartie" so I guess I was right. | ||
Nub4ever
Canada1981 Posts
March 11 2012 16:47 GMT
#10176
On March 11 2012 19:42 PharaohAsh wrote: Um, hello. I hope I am not interrupting anything. Just making my little mark in this huge thread. Looking forward to meeting you all with smiles and hugs and all other things nice. (And add a bit of StarCraft II on the side. =) Hi and welcome! Not interruptin anything at all ![]() | ||
Zona
40426 Posts
March 11 2012 17:11 GMT
#10177
(Plus two pseudo-"morals of the story" that I can get behind, without resorting to blatant letters to Celestia anymore.) | ||
Brutaxilos
United States2622 Posts
March 11 2012 17:14 GMT
#10178
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FnF
Finland200 Posts
March 11 2012 17:40 GMT
#10179
On March 12 2012 02:14 Brutaxilos wrote: Friendship isn't magic... My Little Pony lied to me... ![]() Sure it is. Do you know a unicorn to wield it? | ||
Phant
United States737 Posts
March 11 2012 17:50 GMT
#10180
http://gamrconnect.vgchartz.com/thread.php?id=141117 | ||
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