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Seraphim
Profile Blog Joined March 2006
United States4467 Posts
Last Edited: 2007-06-01 10:51:23
May 31 2007 13:33 GMT
#1
Finally done >.<

http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=8154863444098766491

[url blocked]

Thanks to you, TL, superiorwolf, exalted, and yakii for the VOD :D.

After watching the commentary, I request two things:

1. FLAME, CRITICISM, NIT-PICKY STUFF, all that jazz I really want to improve and help start something big

2. Please suggest VODs that you would like me to do commentary on (preferably includes a protoss in the mu, and preferably a recent game as well)

Thanks so much TL.net!
Hermes | Bisu[Shield] Fighting~!
mikeymoo
Profile Blog Joined October 2006
Canada7170 Posts
Last Edited: 2007-05-31 14:02:21
May 31 2007 13:53 GMT
#2
"The file you are trying to access is temporarily unavailable."

EDIT: nvm. mine just finished, so i'm watching it!
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Return
Profile Joined June 2005
Ivory Coast856 Posts
May 31 2007 13:56 GMT
#3
i also get the "unavailable " thingy
Diiiscoo-oh, thats where the happy people go!
ATeddyBear
Profile Blog Joined December 2005
Canada2843 Posts
May 31 2007 14:01 GMT
#4
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mikeymoo
Profile Blog Joined October 2006
Canada7170 Posts
May 31 2007 14:04 GMT
#5
Interesting VOD choice. Mirror matches are usually kinda difficult to do commentary, at least I would think so.
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KizZBG
Profile Blog Joined November 2006
u gotta skate8152 Posts
Last Edited: 2007-05-31 14:06:34
May 31 2007 14:06 GMT
#6
I think it would be much easier to follow if you upload your commentaries on Youtube/Google video.
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mikeymoo
Profile Blog Joined October 2006
Canada7170 Posts
May 31 2007 14:12 GMT
#7
Okay, 8 minutes in, I think I see how things are going.

I like the commentary, pvp being a shitty matchup for me, it's nice for me to gain a little insight. Your voice is very calm, collected, and you don't explain what each unit does (GOOD THING). However, I'd like to see more predictions or a little more insight instead of just relaying what's happening on screen.

I like it though. You definitely have your own style.

(More enthusiasm!) I may as well watch a chess match!
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Coulthard
Profile Joined September 2005
Greece3359 Posts
May 31 2007 14:14 GMT
#8
I can't download from Megaupload
Tetsuo_AKIRA
Profile Joined March 2007
United States38 Posts
May 31 2007 14:17 GMT
#9
YES! An English commentator who is not 12! or explaining scvs! I'll make a list as I watch:

-More confidence in what you're saying, you stutter often. Relax.
-I'm loving the background knowledge
-Good running commentary
-voice is kind of quiet
-No need for "here we see" kind of things, just yell out what is happening! Infact you can drop the We and never use it.
-"and the cannon containment that much has put is not helping very much at all... heh sorry... bad pun... not on purpose" made me laugh
-You go back on your words sometimes
-Good job, I enjoyed it. Good personality.
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Last Romantic
Profile Blog Joined June 2006
United States20661 Posts
Last Edited: 2007-05-31 14:48:20
May 31 2007 14:23 GMT
#10
It's a bit awkward, start/stop/start/stop a lot. Just try to talk normally. It's not like you're being judged or anything.

It is sort of strange to talk into a mic, but just pretend you're conversing with a friend.

Your voice isn't bad though ^^; and the background at the beginning is nice.

I suppose it's hard to have enthusiasm if you know who wins beforehand. Even so, put in more KOREAN STYLE SHOUTING.
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ram
Profile Blog Joined January 2003
Lithuania602 Posts
May 31 2007 15:14 GMT
#11
On May 31 2007 23:23 LastRomantic wrote:
It is sort of strange to talk into a mic, but just pretend you're conversing with a friend.


I just noticed one thing - why nobody does commentary with his friend or smth? If you did it with your partner, wouldn't it be easier to speak? Just like a normal conversation. And you can even do the noob/pro combo, like one asks noob questions and the other answers them.

You just need 2 mics =)

Ok, that was general for all the commentators, downloading your vod right now
alpskomleko
Profile Blog Joined March 2006
Slovenia950 Posts
May 31 2007 18:14 GMT
#12
All slots eternally in use..
players do games, press mens do their things. and fans do make good cheers.
Navane
Profile Blog Joined February 2007
Netherlands2748 Posts
May 31 2007 20:17 GMT
#13
i hate the overenthausiastic shouting which superiorwolf sometimes uses. Everybody here seems te encourage faster and louder talking at exciting moments, but it doenst work if you fake it. Anyone with a little video-gaming history will get the excitement from the game, no need to dance and make large balloons pop and stuff.
Coulthard
Profile Joined September 2005
Greece3359 Posts
May 31 2007 20:19 GMT
#14
Guys be nice and upload somewhere else please !!
mcmascote
Profile Joined September 2004
Brazil1575 Posts
May 31 2007 21:10 GMT
#15
someone upload it to rapidshare please
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mikeymoo
Profile Blog Joined October 2006
Canada7170 Posts
May 31 2007 22:21 GMT
#16
I hit Open instead of Save, as I am running out of room. Sorry.
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Seraphim
Profile Blog Joined March 2006
United States4467 Posts
May 31 2007 23:26 GMT
#17
Would some angel please upload to Youtube or Google?

I dunno why, but both COMPLETELY failed for me!

I tried Youtube 8 times. The progress bar was 100%, but it wouldn't do anything afterwards. >.<.

As for google, i wait 2 HOURS for it to upload and when it was done, it said "Sorry, errors happened during your upload, please try again .

Me:

Anyway, megaupload was basically my last option >.<


Anyway guys, I'm loving your feedback and am definitely looking foward to making more

Thanks so much, but the only thing i'm lacking is recommendations for VODs

Thanks again, TL!
Hermes | Bisu[Shield] Fighting~!
il0seonpurpose
Profile Blog Joined January 2007
Korea (South)5638 Posts
May 31 2007 23:31 GMT
#18
Nice overall, yeah your voice was very quiet but you'll get better. People who live close to each other or friends should do a double of trio commentating thing like the real progaming
DeadVessel
Profile Blog Joined April 2006
United States6269 Posts
June 01 2007 02:25 GMT
#19
what program did you do for doing voice overs?
Last Romantic
Profile Blog Joined June 2006
United States20661 Posts
June 01 2007 02:28 GMT
#20
On June 01 2007 00:14 ram wrote:
Show nested quote +
On May 31 2007 23:23 LastRomantic wrote:
It is sort of strange to talk into a mic, but just pretend you're conversing with a friend.


I just noticed one thing - why nobody does commentary with his friend or smth? If you did it with your partner, wouldn't it be easier to speak? Just like a normal conversation. And you can even do the noob/pro combo, like one asks noob questions and the other answers them.

You just need 2 mics =)

Ok, that was general for all the commentators, downloading your vod right now


The Plott brothers may do that. I hope they do.
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Sr18
Profile Joined April 2006
Netherlands1141 Posts
June 01 2007 02:29 GMT
#21
On June 01 2007 08:26 Seraphim wrote:
As for google, i wait 2 HOURS for it to upload and when it was done, it said "Sorry, errors happened during your upload, please try again .



I get this error a lot too, but my files are still uploaded so you should check to see if your files are actually uploaded! Just go to "my account" and find the "my uploaded videos" or something of the sorts and see if it is there. Generally the problem occurs during the "processing" phase that happens after the uploading phase so the file is actually already uploaded but awaits further processing.
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Seraphim
Profile Blog Joined March 2006
United States4467 Posts
June 01 2007 04:03 GMT
#22
On June 01 2007 11:25 DeadVessel wrote:
what program did you do for doing voice overs?


Audacity
Hermes | Bisu[Shield] Fighting~!
Seraphim
Profile Blog Joined March 2006
United States4467 Posts
June 01 2007 04:04 GMT
#23
Any recommendations for games, anyone?
Hermes | Bisu[Shield] Fighting~!
DeadVessel
Profile Blog Joined April 2006
United States6269 Posts
Last Edited: 2007-06-01 04:15:53
June 01 2007 04:13 GMT
#24
try doing an older game? i would love to here commentary for that game on RoV (savior vs iloveoov) so much swarm

it was in 100 msl top games btw, should be in yakii's thread.
couldn't find it ><

but the savior vs daezang game is a nice choice too. http://www.teamliquid.net/forum/viewmessage.php?currentpage=6&topic_id=50875#110
Seraphim
Profile Blog Joined March 2006
United States4467 Posts
Last Edited: 2007-06-01 10:49:41
June 01 2007 10:43 GMT
#25
Thanks DeadVessel, I'll look into it ^^

edit: File not there
Hermes | Bisu[Shield] Fighting~!
Seraphim
Profile Blog Joined March 2006
United States4467 Posts
June 01 2007 10:50 GMT
#26
On June 01 2007 11:29 Sr18 wrote:
Show nested quote +
On June 01 2007 08:26 Seraphim wrote:
As for google, i wait 2 HOURS for it to upload and when it was done, it said "Sorry, errors happened during your upload, please try again .



I get this error a lot too, but my files are still uploaded so you should check to see if your files are actually uploaded! Just go to "my account" and find the "my uploaded videos" or something of the sorts and see if it is there. Generally the problem occurs during the "processing" phase that happens after the uploading phase so the file is actually already uploaded but awaits further processing.


Wow, I checked and YOU WERE RIGHT!

<3<3 thanks so much
Hermes | Bisu[Shield] Fighting~!
DeadVessel
Profile Blog Joined April 2006
United States6269 Posts
June 01 2007 11:10 GMT
#27
hm pm haji or sonuvbob they most likely have both of those if you really want to do it.
SpiritoftheTunA
Profile Blog Joined August 2006
United States20903 Posts
June 01 2007 11:40 GMT
#28
map isn't geometry, it's nemesis o.O
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azndsh
Profile Blog Joined August 2006
United States4447 Posts
June 01 2007 11:46 GMT
#29
On June 01 2007 20:40 SpiritoftheTuna wrote:
map isn't geometry, it's nemesis o.O


hahaha first thing i noticed as well

anyway, pretty good stuff, but you sound too nervous
azndsh
Profile Blog Joined August 2006
United States4447 Posts
June 01 2007 11:52 GMT
#30
Also, you need to amp up the excitement, like I've heard people sound more interested about Russian literature
Fate
Profile Joined June 2007
United States10 Posts
June 01 2007 11:55 GMT
#31
Hard to complain about someone trying to actually put some effort into the community, nice work
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