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Finally done >.<
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=8154863444098766491
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Thanks to you, TL, superiorwolf, exalted, and yakii for the VOD :D.
After watching the commentary, I request two things:
1. FLAME, CRITICISM, NIT-PICKY STUFF, all that jazz I really want to improve and help start something big
2. Please suggest VODs that you would like me to do commentary on (preferably includes a protoss in the mu, and preferably a recent game as well)
Thanks so much TL.net!
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Canada7170 Posts
"The file you are trying to access is temporarily unavailable."
EDIT: nvm. mine just finished, so i'm watching it!
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i also get the "unavailable " thingy
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Canada7170 Posts
Interesting VOD choice. Mirror matches are usually kinda difficult to do commentary, at least I would think so.
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u gotta skate8152 Posts
I think it would be much easier to follow if you upload your commentaries on Youtube/Google video.
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Canada7170 Posts
Okay, 8 minutes in, I think I see how things are going.
I like the commentary, pvp being a shitty matchup for me, it's nice for me to gain a little insight. Your voice is very calm, collected, and you don't explain what each unit does (GOOD THING). However, I'd like to see more predictions or a little more insight instead of just relaying what's happening on screen.
I like it though. You definitely have your own style.
(More enthusiasm!) I may as well watch a chess match!
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I can't download from Megaupload
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YES! An English commentator who is not 12! or explaining scvs! I'll make a list as I watch:
-More confidence in what you're saying, you stutter often. Relax. -I'm loving the background knowledge -Good running commentary -voice is kind of quiet -No need for "here we see" kind of things, just yell out what is happening! Infact you can drop the We and never use it. -"and the cannon containment that much has put is not helping very much at all... heh sorry... bad pun... not on purpose" made me laugh -You go back on your words sometimes -Good job, I enjoyed it. Good personality.
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United States20661 Posts
It's a bit awkward, start/stop/start/stop a lot. Just try to talk normally. It's not like you're being judged or anything.
It is sort of strange to talk into a mic, but just pretend you're conversing with a friend.
Your voice isn't bad though ^^; and the background at the beginning is nice.
I suppose it's hard to have enthusiasm if you know who wins beforehand. Even so, put in more KOREAN STYLE SHOUTING.
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On May 31 2007 23:23 LastRomantic wrote: It is sort of strange to talk into a mic, but just pretend you're conversing with a friend.
I just noticed one thing - why nobody does commentary with his friend or smth? If you did it with your partner, wouldn't it be easier to speak? Just like a normal conversation. And you can even do the noob/pro combo, like one asks noob questions and the other answers them.
You just need 2 mics =)
Ok, that was general for all the commentators, downloading your vod right now
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All slots eternally in use..
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i hate the overenthausiastic shouting which superiorwolf sometimes uses. Everybody here seems te encourage faster and louder talking at exciting moments, but it doenst work if you fake it. Anyone with a little video-gaming history will get the excitement from the game, no need to dance and make large balloons pop and stuff.
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Guys be nice and upload somewhere else please !!
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someone upload it to rapidshare please
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Canada7170 Posts
I hit Open instead of Save, as I am running out of room. Sorry.
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Would some angel please upload to Youtube or Google?
I dunno why, but both COMPLETELY failed for me!
I tried Youtube 8 times. The progress bar was 100%, but it wouldn't do anything afterwards. >.<.
As for google, i wait 2 HOURS for it to upload and when it was done, it said "Sorry, errors happened during your upload, please try again .
Me: 
Anyway, megaupload was basically my last option >.<
Anyway guys, I'm loving your feedback and am definitely looking foward to making more 
Thanks so much, but the only thing i'm lacking is recommendations for VODs 
Thanks again, TL!
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Nice overall, yeah your voice was very quiet but you'll get better. People who live close to each other or friends should do a double of trio commentating thing like the real progaming
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what program did you do for doing voice overs?
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United States20661 Posts
On June 01 2007 00:14 ram wrote:Show nested quote +On May 31 2007 23:23 LastRomantic wrote: It is sort of strange to talk into a mic, but just pretend you're conversing with a friend.
I just noticed one thing - why nobody does commentary with his friend or smth? If you did it with your partner, wouldn't it be easier to speak? Just like a normal conversation. And you can even do the noob/pro combo, like one asks noob questions and the other answers them. You just need 2 mics =) Ok, that was general for all the commentators, downloading your vod right now
The Plott brothers may do that. I hope they do.
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On June 01 2007 08:26 Seraphim wrote:As for google, i wait 2 HOURS for it to upload and when it was done, it said "Sorry, errors happened during your upload, please try again  .
I get this error a lot too, but my files are still uploaded so you should check to see if your files are actually uploaded! Just go to "my account" and find the "my uploaded videos" or something of the sorts and see if it is there. Generally the problem occurs during the "processing" phase that happens after the uploading phase so the file is actually already uploaded but awaits further processing.
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On June 01 2007 11:25 DeadVessel wrote: what program did you do for doing voice overs?
Audacity
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Any recommendations for games, anyone?
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Thanks DeadVessel, I'll look into it ^^
edit: File not there
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hm pm haji or sonuvbob they most likely have both of those if you really want to do it.
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map isn't geometry, it's nemesis o.O
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On June 01 2007 20:40 SpiritoftheTuna wrote: map isn't geometry, it's nemesis o.O
hahaha first thing i noticed as well 
anyway, pretty good stuff, but you sound too nervous
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Also, you need to amp up the excitement, like I've heard people sound more interested about Russian literature
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Hard to complain about someone trying to actually put some effort into the community, nice work
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