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Story About a Marine.

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Chef
Profile Blog Joined August 2005
10810 Posts
Last Edited: 2009-12-10 05:58:34
December 10 2009 05:56 GMT
#1
Breathe in, breathe out. Suck in, gasp out. Choke in, vomit out. Knees shake uncontrollably. Everyone too worried about maintaining composure to notice. Heh.

Why am I here? Rocking back and forth in this peice of shit dropship? Shift foward. Shift backward. Don't bother to to maintain your balance where there's no one to be impressed. Don't bother to maintain your balance when you're about to die.

Choke in. Vomit out.

I remember the faces of the people I killed. It wasn't my fault, but no one would beleive that. I didn't want to kill them, but no one would believe that. That's why I am here, with the rest of the puke of society. Rapists, thieves, murderers, huh. They really think I belong with them?

Choke in. Vomit out.

The dropship reaches its destination and we're involuntarily shot out. I crash into the ground on a mess of purple shit, but I've already got more important things to think about. "Go! Go! Go!" the captain says. What a twat. A thick, cold needle jabs itself into my heart. "Go! Go! Go!" I echo. Stim packs have a way of making you think you have too much energy. I sprint behind some crystals with the rest of my troop in the hopes of surviving 5 seconds longer. Where'd the dropship go? Heh.

Slimy stupid creatures are replaced with slimy stupid creatures with claws. We fire into them without hesitation. I see the faces of the people I killed. Limbs of the soulless things begin to spray the ground. Breathe in, breathe out. I feel the picture of my closest friend inside my breast pocket. I feel the wet of fear running down my leg. I feel the sharp prick of a thick needle going into my heart again. I feel the thick metal shield encasing my body. I feel the thick metal shield encasing my body crack. I feel the cruel spike of a mindless creature pierce into my foot.

"Go! Go! Go!" they say running toward another objective. Don't say sorry. Don't forget your true colours. Choke in. Vomit out.

****
LEGEND!! LEGEND!!
ZeroCartin
Profile Blog Joined March 2008
Costa Rica2390 Posts
December 10 2009 06:02 GMT
#2
Hah, awesome as always Chef! :D Keep posting theese!
"My sister is on vacation in Costa Rica right now. I hope she stays a while because she's a miserable cunt." -pubbanana
Twilight Templar
Profile Joined April 2009
99 Posts
December 10 2009 06:04 GMT
#3
wow. that was kinda deep, gj tho!
dum dadi do dum dum dee do dee da
ghermination
Profile Blog Joined April 2008
United States2851 Posts
December 10 2009 06:17 GMT
#4
That was really good but i don't like the repetitive Choke in. Vomit out. think, i mean how long can a guy vomit for?
U Gotta Skate.
meeple
Profile Blog Joined April 2009
Canada10211 Posts
December 10 2009 06:19 GMT
#5
On December 10 2009 15:17 ghermination wrote:
That was really good but i don't like the repetitive Choke in. Vomit out. think, i mean how long can a guy vomit for?


You'd be surprised... although eventually it turns into the dry heaves
Always
Profile Blog Joined March 2009
United States376 Posts
December 10 2009 06:23 GMT
#6
lol I'll never let the dropship leave without them again
"Do unto others 20% better than you would expect them to do unto you, to correct for subjective error." - Linus Pauling
alffla
Profile Blog Joined November 2005
Hong Kong20321 Posts
December 10 2009 06:48 GMT
#7
lol

some how reminds me of like chuck palahnuik style of writing

cool though poor marines
Graphicssavior[gm] : What is a “yawn” rape ;; Masumune - It was the year of the pig for those fucking defilers. Chill - A clinic you say? okum: SC without Korean yelling is like porn without sex. konamix: HAPPY BIRTHDAY MOMMY!
Elwinros
Profile Joined December 2009
United States93 Posts
December 10 2009 06:53 GMT
#8
No medics? What kind of drop is this?
Entry level StarCraft players -_-
Hithran
Profile Joined March 2009
Canada57 Posts
December 10 2009 07:11 GMT
#9
On December 10 2009 15:53 Elwinros wrote:
No medics? What kind of drop is this?



pre-broodwar
nttea
Profile Blog Joined July 2008
Sweden4353 Posts
December 10 2009 07:59 GMT
#10
niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
win8282
Profile Blog Joined May 2009
Korea (South)454 Posts
December 10 2009 08:02 GMT
#11
Did they have SV/comsat support? That thick needle piercing the rine's foot sounds like lurker spines to me...hehe

anyways nice read. I wish there were an SC movie with a well integrated storyline
rredtooth
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
5464 Posts
December 10 2009 08:05 GMT
#12
does the marine have a cool name too?
[formerly sponsored by the artist formerly known as Gene]
meegrean
Profile Joined May 2008
Thailand7699 Posts
December 10 2009 08:50 GMT
#13
HAHAHAHAHA so funny!
Brood War loyalist
Impervious
Profile Blog Joined March 2009
Canada4218 Posts
December 11 2009 03:48 GMT
#14
And he's dead in a few seconds.
~ \(ˌ)im-ˈpər-vē-əs\ : not capable of being damaged or harmed.
nbtnbt5
Profile Joined March 2009
232 Posts
December 11 2009 04:36 GMT
#15
On December 10 2009 15:48 alffla wrote:
some how reminds me of like chuck palahnuik style of writing


Reminded me of his style of writing as well.
I think it's the repetition of "Choke in. Vomit out." that especially reminds you of chuck palahuik's style of writing.

Yellow: "Well boxer's kind of a tool like that, wanting to bunker rush me all the time but hiding it behind all that deception."
Osmoses
Profile Blog Joined October 2008
Sweden5302 Posts
December 16 2009 23:09 GMT
#16
Kinda reminds me of Stephen King but wadoino?
Excuse me hun, but what is your name? Vivian? I woke up next to you naked and, uh, did we, um?
evanthebouncy!
Profile Blog Joined June 2006
United States12796 Posts
December 16 2009 23:24 GMT
#17
LURKURRRREE~~

I'll treat my marines more nicely from now on
Life is run, it is dance, it is fast, passionate and BAM!, you dance and sing and booze while you can for now is the time and time is mine. Smile and laugh when still can for now is the time and soon you die!
Crunchums
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
United States11144 Posts
December 17 2009 18:37 GMT
#18
What about the medic?
brood war for life, brood war forever
Methos
Profile Blog Joined January 2009
United States206 Posts
December 28 2009 09:26 GMT
#19
epic but I thought it was going to be longer )=
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