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UPDATE - 25/04/09! NEW COMIC!
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ZeroCartin
Costa Rica2390 Posts
What do you think? ![]() UPDATE - 25/04/09! NEW COMIC! Preview: ![]() LINK: http://www.comicnoobs.com ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | ||
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Tensai176
Canada2061 Posts
Overall I really enjoyed it, keep it up. | ||
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micronesia
United States24741 Posts
Other than that it was kinda meh imo. Brings back memories of killing kakaru though... | ||
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Clasic
Bosnia-Herzegovina1437 Posts
On April 27 2009 03:19 micronesia wrote: I love how the characterize the players as being inside specific units. Other than that it was kinda meh imo. Brings back memories of killing kakaru though... Same here. I will defiantly be checking up once a week or so :D | ||
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Chef
10810 Posts
I hope you keep trying. The story is definitely getting better from what you've done in the past, you just need to make it even better. Maybe consider talking with some other people to help bounce ideas and get that think tank running. | ||
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ZeroCartin
Costa Rica2390 Posts
On April 27 2009 04:05 Chef wrote: The drawings are really, really good, but you need to come up with better ideas. Try just brainstorming as many things as you can think of together, and then find the cream of the crop and develop those ideas. Right now it's just so weird to see such a developed art technique, and such underdeveloped writing and storyline. I hope you keep trying. The story is definitely getting better from what you've done in the past, you just need to make it even better. Maybe consider talking with some other people to help bounce ideas and get that think tank running. thanks man! Yeah, we're trying that, and will show to more people before uploading! XD | ||
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LaughingTulkas
United States1107 Posts
On April 27 2009 04:05 Chef wrote: The drawings are really, really good, but you need to come up with better ideas. Try just brainstorming as many things as you can think of together, and then find the cream of the crop and develop those ideas. Right now it's just so weird to see such a developed art technique, and such underdeveloped writing and storyline. I hope you keep trying. The story is definitely getting better from what you've done in the past, you just need to make it even better. Maybe consider talking with some other people to help bounce ideas and get that think tank running. ^^agree, the art is sweet and I'm pretty sure I love the desktop backgrounds, but when someone asks me about them, I wish I could say they were from a comic they would like to read a little bit more. Keep at it, you guys got a TON of potential! | ||
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Carnivorous Sheep
Baa?21244 Posts
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andiCR
Costa Rica2273 Posts
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a-game
Canada5085 Posts
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ZeroCartin
Costa Rica2390 Posts
Oh, and today is Leo's birthday, see if any1 cares, lol | ||
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