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Aux1

United States780 Posts

July 06 2008 02:20 GMT

I said a while back that I would try to do this, and I finally got around to it today, since this is my first commentary there is obviously room for improvement, any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is appreciated. The game is a proleague match between boxer and shuttle(yoonjoong) hopefully you guys enjoy it!

SayaSP

Laos5494 Posts

July 06 2008 02:28 GMT

Something about your voice, I like it. Is that weird?

Ryot

Canada316 Posts

July 06 2008 02:37 GMT

Well I liked them, and I too like listening to your voice. Also your game knowledge seems really good comparatively (to the other commentators in english I hear).

FragKrag

United States11552 Posts

July 06 2008 02:46 GMT

You should probably talk a bit louder. Otherwise, it's a really good commentary in terms of general knowledge of the game.

For me, I like it when the commentator gets excited, when they notice something.

JWD

United States12607 Posts

July 06 2008 02:47 GMT

I think the best thing about your style is that you spend most of your time talking about interesting game dynamics rather than what happens to be going on at the moment. During a huge attack it's expected that the commentators focus on what exactly is transpiring in the game, but when players are just macroing it's much more interesting to hear commentary on style, builds, and strategy than "look, boxer's planting some mines".

You have a pretty good "radio" voice but one thing I'd like to see is more...enthusiasm...when a big attack goes down? The thing that's great about the Korean commentators is that they're so into the game that just hearing their yelling makes me feel excited as well. The best commentators sound really passionate.

Good job, though! This was a good game to commentate for sure.

Ryot

Canada316 Posts

July 06 2008 03:51 GMT

Yeah agreed with jwd, most people at TL don't need play-by-play like the other commentators do (not that it's a bad thing, it depends a lot on the background of your audience). I much prefer hearing about the strategic/build order analysis and even stuff about the player while I watch the action myself.

littlechava

United States7218 Posts

July 06 2008 06:28 GMT

you ever gonna make more fpvods? the more the merrier! seems like everyone who was making them (chill/merz) has stopped recently.

Aux1

United States780 Posts

July 06 2008 07:51 GMT

i might littlechava i don't know, i prefer commentating on the pro matches rather then the fpvods, but maybe ill throw some in here or there, also just FYI guys, since it takes so long for me to upload these (almost 2 hours =[ ) you can probably expect one ever 2-3 days

MrRammstein

Poland339 Posts

July 06 2008 09:45 GMT

OK so I'm posting after 5 minutes of the 1st part and my big advice:
Hear your recordings before the final version, like using preview option because I already can tell it's good and getting better but you are to quiet and sometimes try to say things too fast (I'm loving Tasteless but he did the same thing in at least 1 game so

)

Aux1

United States780 Posts

July 06 2008 09:56 GMT

#10

On July 06 2008 18:45 MrRammstein wrote:
OK so I'm posting after 5 minutes of the 1st part and my big advice:
Hear your recordings before the final version, like using preview option because I already can tell it's good and getting better but you are to quiet and sometimes try to say things too fast (I'm loving Tasteless but he did the same thing in at least 1 game so

)

yeah i thought that i had the video volume low enough, (1) but in the first part of the cideo i forgot to turn down my speaker, so its actually the loudest part, but the other parts should be btter

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