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Calgary25998 Posts
Hello!
What is this?
Coagulation and I have been making a card game for almost the past 3 years. We recently got our website up (and functioning properly) so you can see the FAQ at http://www.manaspirits.com/faq
Mailing List & Beta Testers
We had a great response from people interested in beta testing - Thank you! We are working very hard to get a full beta testing package out by May 1st.
If you are interested, please sign up here.
Instructions for Review
A big thank you to Trozz for all his help with editing these instructions. He's been a massive help thus far on this project. Thanks dude!
I'm still pretty nervous to put this out publicly. I have been living inside these instructions for the past couple months, and am finally ready to share them.
![[image loading]](http://i.imgur.com/m27RgQm.jpg) Mana Spirits Beta Instructions
Overall, I am really happy with the instructions so far, but once you've worked on something for so long you start to lose vision it. That's why I'm asking for feedback  . Please, don't hold back with any feedback. I've been on the internet for decades and can take some criticism.
Some thoughts:
- The text either needs a border or background, tieing everything together.
- Titles need a background or some stylizing.
- We will redo all the images. They are all placeholders for now.
- Empty space will be filled with Coagulation's art. Seriously, he has probably 1000 "hey I made this maybe you can use it" pieces of artwork.
- Pages 11 - 14 are seriously heavy. I need to find some space to get some pictures in there.
Creative Writers
I haven't written a story since grade 4... so I guess 21 years ago? The lore I've written is bad, but at least I know it's bad. If anyone with a passion for creative writing would be able to take a look at it and give me some major feedback, I'd really appreciate it. I'm not ready to share the lore publicly, so I'll send you a private link via PM.
Calgarians?
This is a long shot.... Are there any people from Calgary willing to give playing this a shot? Up until now, I've only ever played with people where I've explained the rules. Now that we have a solid set of instructions, I'd like to just give it to a group and say "go" and see how it goes.
If you are of legal drinking age, I'll provide all drinks for the testing and food.
On Design
I've never made a game before, and I guess since this is still just in progress, I've technically never even made a game! So I can't provide any huge statements about design. But I will say it's very satisfying finding a solution to a year-long problem.
This game has always had a problem with comebacks. Players that level up quickly, get more Mana, allowing more actions, allowing them level up more quickly, etc. You can snowball pretty quickly. This is somewhat tempered by luck - opponents can always draw a lucky card to change the game. But I don't like games being so luck dependent, so there are't too many game changing cards. It's also tempered by collusion - opponents can see who is most powerful and simply gang up on them. I like this solution, and it works, but it doesn't work well in a 2 or 3 player game.
That's why I'm pretty satisfied with this rule. It's something I've been searching for about a year.
I like this because even if you are in last place, you still have meaningful impact on the game. And it can be countered if the winning player simply does not level up. But now they have strategically chosen not to snowball and simply to hold their lead, which was the original goal. I like that it has been accomplished by a player's conscious decision and not a strict comeback rule. It also opens up the opportunity for someone to purposefully fall into last place so they can stack the deck when they level up. I'm not sure if that's even practical... needs testing!
These Events have been the bane of designing this game for about six months, so I'm really happy where they are now.
Art
Coagulation has been sweeping through all the cards, "finalizing" the artwork. I use quotations because he never stops working on something, he just keeps going through and making it better and better even if I say it's good enough lol.
I asked him for his favourite pieces and he linked one -_-... so here are my favourite recent updates!
![[image loading]](http://i.imgur.com/0pWyyS4.jpg)
The new Pirate (Swine) - a Hero
![[image loading]](http://i.imgur.com/hd6ucV5.png)
The new Berserker (Drengaar) - a Hero
![[image loading]](http://i.imgur.com/j9kugJl.png)
And his accompanying Ultimate. Hero cards are two-sided, so you flip them over to the more powerful side when you level up enough.
![[image loading]](http://i.imgur.com/WPI1PEp.png)
Undead Citadel - a Battlefield
![[image loading]](http://i.imgur.com/MXoasiH.jpg)
Thunder Flats - a Battlefield
![[image loading]](http://i.imgur.com/iVTTx90.png)
Iron Summit - a Battlefield
![[image loading]](http://i.imgur.com/6WdpXiq.jpg)
Restrain - an Order, and probably the most brutal card art in the game
![[image loading]](http://i.imgur.com/9QvD1Xl.png)
We believe this will become the lore book cover
 
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Katowice25012 Posts
This art is shaping up really nicely, Coag is doing an awesome job with that. Glad to hear the game is coming along, it looks pretty sweet.
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I can offer one consenting Calgarian above the legal drinking age (me) if you are interested.
Unfortunately thats about all I can offer but if you are interested, let me know.
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this is so awesome man! like heyoka said, the arts awesome, i gotta sign up for this to try it.
Also i think i met you in league, we should play again soon!
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Calgary25998 Posts
On April 19 2015 13:30 PanN wrote:
this is so awesome man! like heyoka said, the arts awesome, i gotta sign up for this to try it.
Also i think i met you in league, we should play again soon!
Sure, any time I usually get a game or two in a night.
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Canada11526 Posts
This is probably nitpicky, but the last three sentences of the Disclaimer feel repetitious and I think it's because you ended all three sentences with 'drinking.'
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this coag guy is seriously talented
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Netherlands19138 Posts
Really curious after the rulebook, going to have a look in a bit .
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Calgary25998 Posts
On April 19 2015 17:22 Falling wrote:
This is probably nitpicky, but the last three sentences of the Disclaimer feel repetitious and I think it's because you ended all three sentences with 'drinking.'
I don't think that's nitpicky. I think it's valid and I actually agree and never noticed before.
Thanks!
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its funny how coagulation apprently doesnt like drawing feet! hehe
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Cascadia1754 Posts
I'm from Calgary, and visit it pretty often (every few months). Maybe next time I will PM you?
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Calgary25998 Posts
On April 19 2015 12:53 Sn0_Man wrote:
I can offer one consenting Calgarian above the legal drinking age (me) if you are interested.
Unfortunately thats about all I can offer but if you are interested, let me know.
On April 20 2015 03:08 Tephus wrote:
I'm from Calgary, and visit it pretty often (every few months). Maybe next time I will PM you?
Definitely interested! I think 4 players would be the ideal test. I can play too.
Tephus maybe let us know when you'll be in town next and we can set something up. I have a few friends that haven't played that I can call on too.
Thanks guys
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This looks super cool.
Agree on the part with the repeating "drinking", you also have it on page 4, under Drinks.
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Belgium9950 Posts
Holy shit Coagulation. The art gets better with every blog u make. Really impressed.
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The rules look pretty good, I find they are quite clear! Some of my thoughts:
- Under the events on pg. 12, the last place player third bullet: "... the player that is furthest away, clockwise". Does this mean the person to your right, or the person "across the table"? The wording is a little unclear to me.
- I think that the heros should be introduced earlier, possibly right after the game set up is shown, especially with all of these references to Sera. Maybe then you could put the hero abilities right after you have abilities and spells section. Hero descriptions could be a bit longer.
- I think the rules as a whole should be more well defined, something like: Introduction, Setup, Cards, and Gameplay. As you mentioned, the inclusion of sections/headers will make this much more clear. I found that there was nothing to separate the cards and gameplay aspects in the rules, which was somewhat confusing.
The game looks fun, looking forward to release!! Wish I was still in Cowtown :/
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Awesome art. Hopefully I get in the next beta wave =D
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good luck, hope all the hard work will be worth it, in one way or another
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Awesome to see this moving along! GL
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Calgary25998 Posts
The rule book has had some small quality of life updates to address the feedback we've gotten so far. The same link will take you to the updated version. Thank you to all the reviewers!
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Canada16217 Posts
On April 20 2015 04:50 Chill wrote:Show nested quote +On April 19 2015 12:53 Sn0_Man wrote:
I can offer one consenting Calgarian above the legal drinking age (me) if you are interested.
Unfortunately thats about all I can offer but if you are interested, let me know. Show nested quote +On April 20 2015 03:08 Tephus wrote:
I'm from Calgary, and visit it pretty often (every few months). Maybe next time I will PM you? Definitely interested! I think 4 players would be the ideal test. I can play too. Tephus maybe let us know when you'll be in town next and we can set something up. I have a few friends that haven't played that I can call on too. Thanks guys
Hey I wouldn't mind playing if you want a 4th =]
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Calgary25998 Posts
On April 28 2015 13:09 NovemberstOrm wrote:Show nested quote +On April 20 2015 04:50 Chill wrote:On April 19 2015 12:53 Sn0_Man wrote:
I can offer one consenting Calgarian above the legal drinking age (me) if you are interested.
Unfortunately thats about all I can offer but if you are interested, let me know. On April 20 2015 03:08 Tephus wrote:
I'm from Calgary, and visit it pretty often (every few months). Maybe next time I will PM you? Definitely interested! I think 4 players would be the ideal test. I can play too. Tephus maybe let us know when you'll be in town next and we can set something up. I have a few friends that haven't played that I can call on too. Thanks guys Hey I wouldn't mind playing if you want a 4th =]
For sure. I'll send a PM in the future to set something up.
It was a lot of work to get here...
![[image loading]](http://i.imgur.com/NtTeYFN.jpg)
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That looks pretty professional
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EPT![[image loading]](http://i.imgur.com/cdCgqC0.png)
