A crying writer

3FFA

United States3931 Posts

June 28 2013 20:33 GMT

A crying writer
Against the door
A confused mind
Striking out

Rereading the words you wrote
That undesirable blog
The words you wrote they broke me
They repaired me
They utilized me
I tried to tell your right from wrong
My feelings from reality or nightmare

I juggled the illusion I thought you casted
I went along with my journey
I explored an alternative path
I barely saw your words
Migrated away from that situation
Yet it comes back to haunt my mind
It reminds my mind
It pursues my mind

I'll rewrite my history
Redraft my build
I'll reborn to escape your wrath
I'll establish my own legacy
Be the ruler of my Nexus
So I may dominate this land
Alone for the ride.

Mads2

Denmark21 Posts

June 28 2013 23:27 GMT

Really cool, I liked it a lot. One thing though : When you write blog you sort of puts it into a limited time context (with the internet and all) And I feel like it takes a lot away from the otherwise timeless and beautiful collection of words. Just my 2 Cents.

Thank You

MarklarMarklarr

Fiji226 Posts

June 28 2013 23:45 GMT

nice, what blog did you read

3FFA

United States3931 Posts

June 29 2013 15:52 GMT

On June 29 2013 08:45 MarklarMarklarr wrote:
nice, what blog did you read

If you read through my posting history you'll probably be able to guess. Was a long while ago though. It had a certain bit to it.

On June 29 2013 08:27 Mads2 wrote:
Really cool, I liked it a lot. One thing though : When you write blog you sort of puts it into a limited time context (with the internet and all) And I feel like it takes a lot away from the otherwise timeless and beautiful collection of words. Just my 2 Cents.

Thank You

Interesting view, I never thought of it like that.

I'm glad you both enjoyed it, thanks for reading!

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