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holdthephone
United States523 Posts
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Cyx.
Canada806 Posts
As for the second person, in game reviews I don't think it's awful at all. I agree with you when you say it feels really natural - especially in this kind of writing I wouldn't worry about it at all. Your writing lends itself really well to the second person. | ||
FreshNoThyme
United States356 Posts
It is just a mental game of sorts that you learn to avoid early on when studying English extensively. If the "you" comments are indeed based completely in fact (i.e. "You and your companion do x and y"), then it is completely fine. In this case, the writer is not making assumptions. That is an appropriate usage; it would read awkwardly any other way. | ||
Sablar
Sweden880 Posts
I wouldn't mind first person for the latter in a review. But I'm no writer. | ||
holdthephone
United States523 Posts
@Cyx I have posted this article on other sites, would be cool if you saw it elsewhere. | ||
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