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Garbage to my left
Garbage to my right
Garbage all around me
No clean place in sight
The school I go to is shitty
The campus is pretty small
We have seven janitors
Each day they do fuck all
There's garbage on the roof
There's garbage on the stairs
There's garbage in the toilet
garbage fucking EVERYWHERE
They janitors they drive around in golf carts
All fucking day
They jacked them from the golf course
And then they drove away
On ladder I'm top bronze
With iNcontroL I had a quarrel
In science class we watched
The Day After Tomorrow
Honestly I could go on
but I'll leave it at that for now
I didn't write this for your enjoyment
So please just fuck off now
Dedicated to my favorite blog:
Everyone is Stupid
 
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Hahahahaha brilliant. Gave me a good chuckle. 
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What is this trash?
+ Show Spoiler +Loooooool. This makes me see the humor in our occasional terribad blogs.
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Australia8532 Posts
It looks like you went for the ABCB rhyming pattern.
But the rhymed now with... now?
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Lol, at first I thought you were talking about the U of A. :p
Blogs so funny today, hahahahaha.
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I think we have a new TL meme. And to think some angsty kid could have inspired so many laughs.
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Me being an unofficial poem critic, I have to say... fucking garbage flow.
Try a hexameter next time.
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I actually read it as more of a rap than a poem, haha. Just imagine this kid standing outside of his trash school and riding on the backs of the golf carts as he sings. :D
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Yeah i pictured it as a rap too, fit the angry tone more
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The first four stansas were good, then you trailed off and rhymed now with now, and I did not enjoy it.
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5/5
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Heh nice ! Like it more than the other Golbat tribute. 
Edit: Whoopsie daisy. 2k post, I guess I'll just pretend my Hiya thing was for 2k. B)
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Absolutely golden.
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What, no verse about your incredible SAT scores? Tsk-tsk.
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The first bit sounds like Ackrite by Dr dre haha.
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On December 02 2011 10:20 Bibbit wrote:Heh nice ! Like it more than the other Golbat tribute. Edit: Whoopsie daisy. 2k post, I guess I'll just pretend my Hiya thing was for 2k. B)
Wanna go? >:O
edit: As for the actual OP I liked it but only the comments made me laugh  . Part of it may have been that I was expecting this to come lol. (Was actually thinking of making this same basic thing myself on the same topic)
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The janitor part gets me everytime.
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On December 02 2011 09:54 bkrow wrote:
It looks like you went for the ABCB rhyming pattern.
But the rhymed now with... now?
Ah fuck...
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oh wow 2 funny blogs in a day. I love you lol.
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Australia8532 Posts
On December 02 2011 12:20 Chairman Ray wrote:Show nested quote +On December 02 2011 09:54 bkrow wrote:
It looks like you went for the ABCB rhyming pattern.
But the rhymed now with... now? Ah fuck...
Laughs as Charman Ray scrambles to fix his error :p
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On December 02 2011 09:45 Chairman Ray wrote:Garbage to my left Garbage to my right Garbage all around me No clean place in sight The school I go to is shitty The campus is pretty small We have seven janitors Each day they do fuck all There's garbage on the roof There's garbage on the stairs There's garbage in the toilet garbage fucking EVERYWHERE They janitors they drive around in golf carts All fucking day They jacked them from the golf course And then they drove away On ladder I'm top bronze With iNcontroL I had a quarrel In science class we watched The Day After Tomorrow Honestly I could go on but I'll leave it at that for now I didn't write this for your enjoyment So please just fuck off now Dedicated to my favorite blog:Everyone is Stupid
Quoted to keep the unedited version . *Laughs with bkrow while Chairman Ray scrambles to fix his error*
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^ What? Why would anyone possibly care that Chairman Ray messed up a rhyme and then fixed it. Ye I'm sure he's real embarassed ... -_-
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Ain't gonna fix it. It is what it is. I wrote the poem in 10 minutes right before an exam, so didn't have time to read it over.
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Russian Federation3631 Posts
Garbage all around me
No clean place in sight
![[image loading]](http://i.imgur.com/iwTsz.png)
I suppose this is a correct observation.
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On December 02 2011 14:29 Chairman Ray wrote:
Ain't gonna fix it. It is what it is. I wrote the poem in 10 minutes right before an exam, so didn't have time to read it over.
Good man
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lol very nice. good luck with the exam xD
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Is it suppose to sound like "The Charge of the Light Brigade"?
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On December 02 2011 14:34 419 wrote:I suppose this is a correct observation.
Yes, yes it is. Not that there are any golf cart blogs yet though. So, I think the fact we don't see janitors means there is some working... right?
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Hilarious, should have posted that as well in the original thread.
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Need a stanza for being more intelligent than the teacher, as well as the rest of the class...
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EPT
