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starcraftian
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sadly enough i would of been dead in a real good player match but im just showing you something i did in bronze not very good stratgy and i dont suggest you doing it but just something i did on my own. have fun and dont forget to try the 2 gateway stargate as seen i belive in this video havent watched video but i found it for you , i tried to make effort before i had to go to school enojoy and suggest anything better i can do for my next blog, would be awesomely helpfull   | ||
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Spekulatius
Germany2413 Posts
What I wanna say is, most of your posts give me headache. I have to read them at least three times to get what you want to say. And that's for some reasons: 1) Your spelling is, sorry to say this, horrendous. I can't point out all of it, and I understand you might have problems with English if it's not your native language, but for the sake of everyone who is willing to read your posts: Improve your English! 2) Structure your thoughts! If it's actually true what you wrote, then you woke up, had this thought that led to this post and then you quickly finished it before going to school. Again, I really wanted to understand what you said but you went from something like "built stargate (i ask myself: for phoenix or voidray?) - lost to queens - then went colossus - he went muta after hydra (is that really all the units you and he built? what's the unit composition?) - you won - you say your strategy is bad cause it will fail against any good opponent - then you post a video that you haven't even watched to explain to others how your strategy should have worked". I mean, if you want to help anyone or if you just want to write something interesting that would make people read it, then structure your thoughts. And again, which leads to this point: 3) Effort please. The thoughts that are had waking up aren't always the best (edit:never). You then decide to write them down before you go to school (which I assume isn't quite the long time) and you finish it with a video that you tell your readers to watch even though you haven't seen it. Just put yourself in the position of one of the forum members: Why should we read a post like this? If you want people to read and discuss your posts, make them good, funny, educational, emotional or somewhat challenging. Your post has, and I'm sorry to say this, neither of those components and it fails on a grammatical level. Take that as the opinion of someone who loves to read everything TL has to offer. But there are limits. And there's a point where I feel it starts wasting my time. + Show Spoiler + And then, don't promise to post better if you aren't intending to. Your post history is quite swell, actually. One random post: On April 07 2011 19:59 starcraftian wrote: kewl post i heard IP is his a clan see them like my freind IpBioOrMech Another random comment: On April 07 2011 11:18 starcraftian wrote: nice blog i rated it bud thanksk for takeing the time and write it, ima be puting more effort in my blogs 2 A blog post of yours, comparable quality to this one: On April 07 2011 11:21 starcraftian wrote: first of all, i just like to say, it scares the shit out of me, ive relized gateway units arnt the best i like to go quick colossus tech and own em but i get vikeing raped. also have u ever been beaten by a toss when your a toss because he went mass immortal 2 base and u went mass blink stalker 4 base, dosent make much sense but i lost he had like 6-7 immortals. just shareing a painfull moment in my bad gameplay. ian signing out :D goodnight everyone And your promise to Empyrean to post better: On April 07 2011 19:46 starcraftian wrote: thanks guys! and thank you for the comment empyrean, ill try to do better. | ||
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starcraftian
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Spekulatius
Germany2413 Posts
On April 07 2011 22:01 starcraftian wrote: I'm sorry to disappoint you, I will try harder and i understand where you are coming from. I'll take what you said into consideration next time I post, I do have a hard time with English also sorry, I went phoenix and he went quick ling hydra I held off with a zealot or 2 and then I tried the harass, it didn't work out so well when he picked off too many of my phoenixes with his queens so I tried colossus tech seeing if I didn't get out a strong ground unit I'd be wrecked because he went hydra and they own gateway units, again thank you, and when I have my new computer i will be commentating again and not using others videos I apologize a lot and thank you very much for the advice friend. Ian And that's just the obvious spelling errors. Use punctuation. Capitalize letters where necessary. Structure your thoughts. Use paragraphs. Also, no need to apologize. But don't tell me you read my post and then go on doing the same mistakes again. Thank you. | ||
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starcraftian
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As for the spelling i cant do much about that im terrible at grammer and spelling | ||
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