Was feeling quite inspired yesterday and I composed something really tiny!
Hope you like! There is a tiny mess up haha (which is funny seeing how I can't play the music I wrote)

http://soundcloud.com/evanthebouncy/fugue-1-1/s-ivX78

Now I have a account there I think i will be composing more full musics so stay tuned!! :D

review, comments please

Froadac

United States6733 Posts

January 03 2011 02:15 GMT

I'm getting a page saying it's not available

Kimaker

United States2131 Posts

January 03 2011 02:19 GMT

On January 03 2011 11:15 Froadac wrote:
I'm getting a page saying it's not available

ditto

evanthebouncy!

United States12816 Posts

January 03 2011 02:21 GMT

Ah shit how do I make it public, gimme a few mins!!
I'll pm u all when it goes up

edit: fixed!

Superiorwolf

United States5509 Posts

January 03 2011 02:24 GMT

really good! :D

evanthebouncy!

United States12816 Posts

January 03 2011 02:26 GMT

Conan how come you can find all my blogs hahaha

Froadac

United States6733 Posts

January 03 2011 02:29 GMT

very nice! Do you go to UCB by chance?

evanthebouncy!

United States12816 Posts

January 03 2011 02:37 GMT

I do go to berkeley, I study math and computer science (not guitar unfortunately)

iGrok

United States5142 Posts

January 03 2011 02:38 GMT

pretty good! feels like you're rushing some of the notes tho

Froadac

United States6733 Posts

January 03 2011 02:42 GMT

#10

On January 03 2011 11:37 evanthebouncy! wrote:
I do go to berkeley, I study math and computer science (not guitar unfortunately)

gogo berkeley.

gogo compsci

I'm still listening to it. Amazing stu ff.

evanthebouncy!

United States12816 Posts

January 03 2011 02:52 GMT

#11

On January 03 2011 11:38 iGrok wrote:
pretty good! feels like you're rushing some of the notes tho

Mmm if you're talking about the measure I want it to be a 4/4 that looks like
x--x--x--xx
kind of shape for a bar xD

Kimaker

United States2131 Posts

January 03 2011 04:01 GMT

#12

Has alot of potential. Clean it up a bit, and it'll sound so damn cool! I liked it alot btw.

Superiorwolf

United States5509 Posts

January 03 2011 06:07 GMT

#13

On January 03 2011 11:26 evanthebouncy! wrote:
Conan how come you can find all my blogs hahaha

"from the shadows, i come ^^" - protoss stalker

although i guess i'd probably be like a changeling . . . "bhuieahraekfahbdkflha!!"

Khenra

Netherlands885 Posts

January 03 2011 06:23 GMT

#14

Not to be a bitch, but doesn't a fugue have four interlacing melody lines?

It sounds nice, you should take the idea and extend it to like a two-minute song you can play to others

evanthebouncy!

United States12816 Posts

January 03 2011 06:55 GMT

#15

^ yeah i said it myself that it's not really a fugue hahaha but it kinda has 2 lines. I'll see if it is expandable. mm thanks!

Powerpill

United States1693 Posts

January 03 2011 11:33 GMT

#16

I like the dissonance and the sort of Spanish feel this has. As others have said, clean it up a bit, and possibly add a few more parts/progressions, could even add some vox if you're feeling saucy

evanthebouncy!

United States12816 Posts

January 03 2011 12:13 GMT

#17

what's vox? O_o

Powerpill

United States1693 Posts

January 03 2011 13:07 GMT

#18

On January 03 2011 21:13 evanthebouncy! wrote:
what's vox? O_o

Sorry, is short for Vocals

Starparty

Sweden1963 Posts

January 03 2011 13:45 GMT

#19

unless you are super worried about someone stealing your work you could set the tracks to public rather than private. Then you wont have to share that secret link everytime, and people can find the music without it