pvt replay, i need a review

darmousseh

United States3437 Posts

August 31 2010 18:48 GMT

Here is a replay from a game i just played. I am protoss and I won the game because of my opponent's bad timing, but I am looking for someone to review my build and technique and see what I can do better. I am currently a gold level player.

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Edit:

Here is a replay in which i lost.

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micronesia

United States24637 Posts

August 31 2010 18:59 GMT

I have a very serious suggestion for you: when requesting someone to help you and go over your replay, use a game that you lost... not one that you won... and ESPECIALLY not one that you won because your opponent screwed up a lot.

edit: I don't mean when you got paired with a top player and got destroyed... I mean a loss vs someone of similar ability where the game was at least close for a while.

darmousseh

United States3437 Posts

August 31 2010 19:05 GMT

haha ok, i didn't think it mattered. I will post a loss in a few minutes.

micronesia

United States24637 Posts

August 31 2010 19:07 GMT

The reason why is because we can better understand how to help you in close games where you are pushed to your limits of ability/strategy. If you are winning too easily you are probably just goofing around after a while and not keeping up with certain aspects of your play... if you are losing too hardcore you won't even be given an opportunity to demonstrate your strengths and weaknesses.

Losses are generally better because they show how you fail to deal with situations which is more important to improve than how you successfully deal with situations, I think.

darmousseh

United States3437 Posts

August 31 2010 19:50 GMT

ok i posted a loss replay.

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