damn..i thought it was going to say "sister"

but seriously for a second, that was pretty cool, I think you would sound a lot better (and i would be able to judge your voice better) if you changed pitch more often, when up or down some octaves (i don't know what you call it). i don't listen to this type of music though so maybe i just dont know what im talking about, just seems a bit monotoneish

Navane

Netherlands2751 Posts

March 04 2010 11:08 GMT

Your melody lines are to static. Most of the time you take half a measure per sylable, if not 1 or 2 measures per sylable. The rest of the music doesn't suit such melody lines imho, it's not dense enough for that.

Your screams are good though.

Garnet

Vietnam9034 Posts

March 04 2010 11:08 GMT

On March 04 2010 20:06 Xxio wrote:
damn..i thought it was going to say "sister"

Pika Chu

Romania2510 Posts

March 04 2010 11:21 GMT

Pretty good.

7mk

Germany10157 Posts

March 04 2010 12:23 GMT

good stuff, I like it better than the other two songs of your band. Great shouting.

I really dont like this vibrato thingy you got going in the chorus though.
Also there are a few instances where you could have hit the notes a bit better, like at 3:58 the last note.
Still quite good, reminds me of the time when I was really into Soil

United States6173 Posts

March 04 2010 12:32 GMT

Hey you're posting your music here again (:

It's not bad. You have a tendency to go just a biiit off, however. Your screams are really good, though, and overall, it's not bad. Considering you self-produced this (I'm assuming), it's very good.

Kim_Hyun_Han

706 Posts

March 04 2010 12:35 GMT

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[O.O] - hey, not bad
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Slunk

Germany768 Posts

March 04 2010 13:12 GMT

I don't know shit about singing, but this is awesome.

Zurles

United Kingdom1659 Posts

March 04 2010 14:35 GMT

#10

sounds like inflames, it's pretty good.

krndandaman

Mozambique16569 Posts

March 04 2010 14:37 GMT

#11

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Khenra

Netherlands885 Posts

March 04 2010 15:19 GMT

#12

Not my kind of music. I guess you do a pretty good job at whatever genre it is you're singing though

3FFA

United States3931 Posts

March 04 2010 21:13 GMT

#13

On March 04 2010 20:08 Garnet wrote:

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YPang

United States4024 Posts

March 04 2010 21:28 GMT

#14

sounds like your gurgling semen in your throat when you do that weird scream near the end of a stanza. Not only you, but all singers of this genre. Just imo, otherwise it's really good

OMin

United States545 Posts

March 04 2010 21:43 GMT

#15

On March 05 2010 06:28 YPang wrote:
sounds like your gurgling semen in your throat when you do that weird scream near the end of a stanza. Not only you, but all singers of this genre. Just imo, otherwise it's really good

and you listen to what? exclusively rap or something?

YPang

United States4024 Posts

March 04 2010 21:47 GMT

#16

On March 05 2010 06:43 OMin wrote:

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and you listen to what? exclusively rap or something?

eh everything but metal.

FakeSteve[TPR]

Valhalla18444 Posts

March 04 2010 22:44 GMT

#17

tremendous. sounds a little weak during the sustained notes in the chorus but otherwise you're TREMENDOUS & i'm duly impressed

MorningMusume11

United States3490 Posts

March 04 2010 22:52 GMT

#18

Sounds semi-professional, yeah sure I'm a heavy K-Pop / J-Pop listener but I could say I thought I heard that on the radio somewhere.

Then again you're like 100% amateur right? That to me makes it even more impressive, and if you are semi-pro, then it sounds like you are where you should be, at least vocally.