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http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/285616
Changes since last time:
Messed around with the drums. Tried to make them a little more standout / powerful. Did some work with the kick / snare especially.
Messed around with the bass EQ. Made a cut around the high lows to remove some of the muddiness / boom.
No opinions on the riff / songwriting / playing needed. Opinions and feedback on the mix / sounds / tones desired.
If you want to be ESPECIALLY helpful compare this tone to bands such as: Unearth, Killswitch Engage, and As I Lay Dying because that's the sound I'm going for in a nutshell.
Thank you!
 
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I like it a lot. Unfortunately I have like the Jaedong of headaches right now so I can't give my full in-depth opinion. (headache has nothing to do with your music)
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Vatican City State1872 Posts
are you the dude who reached a sublime status merely by posting a yawn smiley after everything anyone wrote?
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I think you hit the sound your going for very nicely. It sounds very nice. It reminds me of those bands you listed in fact... (imo that's a bad thing, whahahahahahhaahhahaah)
seriously though, good work for post 666
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No that was Mydnyte CrownRoyal.
Haha thanks Motiva, this isn't my song  . It's a tune from my old old band's album that never came to pass, but will now come to pass :D
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needs more work on the drums
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it sounded good but
On November 05 2009 13:37 Last.Midnight wrote:
Unearth, Killswitch Engage, and As I Lay Dying because that's the sound I'm going for in a nutshell.
:C
 i really should learn mixing and production and stuff but im really lazy + i play a classical guitar
good job though man
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Very nice, sounds great. Loved Genie in a Bottle as well! :-D
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I really like the way the bass kicks sound now. They sound a lot fuller and less clicky. However, the mix overall sounds very bass heavy. The guitars seem kind of pushed into the background.
I do like how you can actually differentiate the bass from the guitars very easily, though.
I think the snare is a bit too loud as well.
Otherwise, it sounds good.
Keep 'em coming! (:
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On November 05 2009 15:02 Bill Murray wrote:
needs more work on the drums
specifics appreciated.
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Might just turn the guitars up. That will address all the problems you've pointed out I think PH haha. Hopefully it's that simple, will update with a new mix soon!
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Ok turned the guitars up a fraction and cut some more low end from the guitars so I didn't turn up the "boominess" along with the "attack". Turned the snare top mic down a hair also.
Album Tone Test #3:
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/285808
Also thanks for all the feedback guys! You've all been very helpful (even the "it sounds awesome" comments are helpful to keep me going :D)
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Yeah, that sounds a lot better. It sounds a lot more balanced, now. In particular, I think turning down the snare really made a big difference.
God, I really need to finish working on my paper...-_-
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haha thanks for taking time off your paper to critique my mixes thanks for the feedback.
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ph was right, 3rd definitely sounds better than 2nd.
The beginning with the.. one guitar being more in the background (is there a better way to call that?)
really sounds pretty KSEish. One thing that's certainly different is the easily distuingishable bass which is a good thing imo.
Other than that it doesn't sound quite as "rich" and "fat" like those bands but I can't imagine that's possible without a professional studio. (never listened to unearth though) If it is I'm not gonna pretend to know how ^^
good job as always
On November 05 2009 15:05 JohnColtrane wrote:it sounded good but Show nested quote +On November 05 2009 13:37 Last.Midnight wrote:
Unearth, Killswitch Engage, and As I Lay Dying because that's the sound I'm going for in a nutshell. :C i really should learn mixing and production and stuff but im really lazy + i play a classical guitar good job though man
Ha same thing here... whenever I record something I just press the record button, maybe add some effects and thats it ^^
I really need to play me e-guitar more often instead of my acoustic, I think it feels neglected
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it sounds awfully similar to the warriors "aggra-vader"
did you base it off that?
btw links dont work anymore, only heard the first one when u just posted it
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ERROR – No Audio Portal submission exists with ID "285616". It may have been deleted, or possibly never existed at all.
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