Hey Zealously! First, thank you for all your contributions and articles--I am a big fan. However, I must say, this was not your best piece. You may or may not agree, but it was difficult to read. Some of it could be simple writing or editing mistakes, which happen to all of us, but it felt very negative in the first few sections and seemed to tangent into unrelated, short, choppy sentences. I hope this does not seem ungrateful or extremely pointed. As a fellow writer, I often am tired or rushed or just not on my game. If I can make a few suggestions, I would intersperse negativity with positivity and create hype where it's due (which is usually one my favorite things about your write-ups). Also, I don't know the budget for team liquid.net, but if you don't have an editor for all posted articles, I would volunteer in order to contribute or I would recommend that you find an editor (perhaps even just a college student who needs a resume point). Thank you again for all your great work!

I have:

Soulkey > Maru
Classic > Paralyze
Soulkey > Classic
Maru > Paralyze
Maru > Classic

EnumaAvalon

Philippines3613 Posts

June 11 2014 02:10 GMT

#26

On June 11 2014 11:00 nickbradvica wrote:
I have:

Soulkey > Maru
Classic > Paralyze
Soulkey > Classic
Maru > Paralyze
Maru > Classic

It's the round of 8 dude

They're BO5s

DuduSC

Afghanistan193 Posts

June 11 2014 02:17 GMT

#27

On June 11 2014 11:00 nickbradvica wrote:
Hey Zealously! First, thank you for all your contributions and articles--I am a big fan. However, I must say, this was not your best piece. You may or may not agree, but it was difficult to read. Some of it could be simple writing or editing mistakes, which happen to all of us, but it felt very negative in the first few sections and seemed to tangent into unrelated, short, choppy sentences. I hope this does not seem ungrateful or extremely pointed. As a fellow writer, I often am tired or rushed or just not on my game. If I can make a few suggestions, I would intersperse negativity with positivity and create hype where it's due (which is usually one my favorite things about your write-ups). Also, I don't know the budget for team liquid.net, but if you don't have an editor for all posted articles, I would volunteer in order to contribute or I would recommend that you find an editor (perhaps even just a college student who needs a resume point). Thank you again for all your great work!

I have:

Soulkey > Maru
Classic > Paralyze
Soulkey > Classic
Maru > Paralyze
Maru > Classic

(laughs) (laughs)

Zashi

Canada17 Posts

June 11 2014 04:12 GMT

#28

Afro vs Chin, only one will be left standing

aZealot

New Zealand5447 Posts

June 11 2014 04:59 GMT

#29

Die Maru! Die! Mwahahahahaha!

jaebigdong

87 Posts

June 11 2014 05:11 GMT

#30

Soulkey > Maru 3-1

but here is the real kicker....

Paralyze > Classic 3-0!

dyDrawer

Canada438 Posts

June 11 2014 05:47 GMT

#31

Soulkey: my fans, please don't get any hopes up. I will try my best to win, but the game balance is too bad. Terran is too imba, I don't think I can win.

I am paraphrasing, but he did say that in an interview. Looks like a lack of confidence is plaguing him.

So... Soulkey 3-1 Maru?

Foxxan

Sweden3427 Posts

June 11 2014 05:50 GMT

#32

I found an error.

ensuring that he plays Maru in the ro8. For Soulkey nothing can be better than this.Yes, everything

Between This.Yes a space is missing.
Its in the Soulkey section right under the innovation name

randomsaint

42 Posts

June 11 2014 06:53 GMT

#33

Hate to be an ass, but was this actually edited at all? It's full of tons of minor mistakes, not to mention very strangely worded sentences and then just outright crazy stuff like "Vortix can just win WCS EU."