I think I've actually managed to make the song worse, which is a feat in itself. Oh well, enjoy the fruits of boredom.
5 o'clock spawn, in Jungle Basin Gonna go rush, gotta be prepared Gotta build probes, gotta mine minerals Chrono-in' everything, the time is goin' Tickin' on and on, Yes I'm rushin' Gotta get down, to his natural. Gotta scout his base, I see a terran.
4 Rines at the front ramp Workers at the Back Door Gotta make my mind up Where should I attack his Base?
It's a 4gate, 4gate Crushing nerds with my 4gate A-Move up the ramp, yeah you should be frightened, frightened. 4gate, 4gate Another nerd crushed with my 4gate This build got me all the way to Diamond.
Forcefield Here, Forcefield There! Forcefield Her, Forcefield There! "F" "F" "F" "F" Good luck trying to defend.
6 minutes in, Snipin' all his Rax's Warpin' in so fast, look at all his d00ds die 1a, 1a, I've won, hooray You know what that means I owned this, don't talk shit Check out my APM, in the replay I got this, you suck, got it? Now you know it
First I build my first gate, first gate. Then I build my second gate, second gate. "E" "B" "G" and "Z E" Now that's "GG" My death ball's incoming today.
So then I build the third gate, my fourth gate, comes afterwards. AND LAWL UP THE LADDER I ASCEND
1 A, Incoming Attack So pushin' at the front ramp (At the front ramp) At the Back Door (Back Door) I’m ballin', bruisin' (Yeah, yeah) Mass Pain, Droppin' Mains. Wit’ some G-Shields on'a side (Woo!) (C’mon) Passin’ by is a floating factory But this noob's got nothing else to see Just my style, it’s 4gate, it’s beastin' We gonna have fun, c’mon, c’mon, y’all!
Forcefield Here, Forcefield There! Forcefield Here, Forcefield There! "F" "F" "F" "F" Good luck trying to defend.
It's a 4gate, 4gate Crushing nerds with my 4gate A-Move up the ramp, yeah you should be frightened, frightened. 4gate, 4gate Another nerd crushed with my 4gate This build got me all the way to Diamond.
EDIT: So yeah, syllables don't match up beat for beat, you have to squint your perceptions a little (Speed up, slow down) Hopefully I'll be able to illustrate my intentions when I record.
On March 20 2011 15:28 Wolf wrote: Most variations of the four warpgate rush do not involve very many sentries.
He understands the most important thing about a four warpgate rush though. His second gate comes after his first, he makes a third and then a fourth afterwards. He's good to go.
100x better than the original. It is pathetic that so much attention, money, and fame can be given to a person that embodies the shit that is american popular culture.
-You can make the Fs in the chorus FUs, unless the F is just a placeholder for the f word. -forcefield here, forcefield there would flow better than with the 'and' (lol, it changes halfway through) -'where should I hit his base' might flow better than attack his base -Another nerd crushed by 4gate would flow better Hopefully this is helpful. Back to my weed paper.
switching 'attack' with 'hit' in 'where should i attack his base' would make the syllables line up better, wouldn't it? in any event this is incredible; you should send it to ms RB and see if she'd do a cover of her own song ><
I think pyoro's right, the syllables could stand some improvement to match the beat and the song, but the concept and the progression are totally perfect for this song. Combined with how arguably mindless a 4gate is, this has real potential to fit the theme of the original song. Let's make the adjustments and get this set to music pronto =)
On March 20 2011 15:46 Excalibur_Z wrote: I think pyoro's right, the syllables could stand some improvement to match the beat and the song, but the concept and the progression are totally perfect for this song. Combined with how arguably mindless a 4gate is, this has real potential to fit the theme of the original song. Let's make the adjustments and get this set to music pronto =)
I've gone over a few different iterations, and I still end up emphasizing it the same way, regardless of the syllables. The writer's terrible style of "Screw it, we'll cram that line in somewhere" has corrupted me.
I'll go over it again though, seeing if there's anything that can be tuned a little better.
On March 20 2011 15:46 happyness wrote: Wow. You just made a parody with lyrics 100x better than the original. And I'm not saying that because I like starcraft.
No, your lyrics are infinitely better
This. You took one of the worst things and the universe and made it good
On March 20 2011 15:28 Wolf wrote: Most variations of the four warpgate rush do not involve very many sentries.
u ever seen a bronzer 4 gating? wait what am i saying if he's doing any variation he's at least gold, anyways yea they love 4 gating with sentries, it helps them feel as though they're macroing properly by keeping their gas low
I think there needs to be a reference to the banelings song on one of the fridays. Banelings and friday are both 2 syllables, and the pitch relation between the syllables is the same in both songs!
Holy shit this is awesome! TotalBiscuit to record like he did Fear of the Grack? Yes please :D Good work with this. Oh, and nothing can make it worse. Parody "My Jeans" now? :D
On March 20 2011 15:04 Dr. ROCKZO wrote: (After about 4 different tries, I just gave up on the rap. I thought the flow of the verse was bad, but this thing is just on a whole new level of awful)
I-A, Incoming Attack So chillin' at the front ramp (at the front ramp) At the back door (at the back door) I'm minin', warpin' (Yeah, yeah) Attack paths, switchin' paths Wit' pylons up on my side (Woo!) (C'mon) In my ear "need additional pylons" something something...wanna scream
Yeah I think with a few alterations to make the syllables line up better would make this really good. That's my only criticism, great work on writing this!
Hah pretty good, though it seemed to lose flow at some points... maybe it was me but some parts seemed off. The basic idea was pretty damn good and I liked how explaining that you build 4 warpgates for a 4 gate sounded as stupid as her explaining the days of the week.
Let's hope Husky modifies this a bit and makes a song!
On March 20 2011 15:04 Dr. ROCKZO wrote: (After about 4 different tries, I just gave up on the rap. I thought the flow of the verse was bad, but this thing is just on a whole new level of awful)
I-A, Incoming Attack So chillin' at the front ramp (at the front ramp) At the back door (at the back door) I'm minin', warpin' (Yeah, yeah) Attack paths, switchin' paths Wit' pylons up on my side (Woo!) (C'mon) In my ear "need additional pylons" something something...wanna scream
Screw it, you were right. This is hard.
Nice work man!
How about for the rap part:
"in your base some more pylons (in your main) warp in warp in, you wanna scream 4 gate its a real strat, its gonna work, come on come on"
(replaces Cmon In my ear "need additional pylons")
On March 20 2011 15:04 Dr. ROCKZO wrote: (After about 4 different tries, I just gave up on the rap. I thought the flow of the verse was bad, but this thing is just on a whole new level of awful)
I-A, Incoming Attack So chillin' at the front ramp (at the front ramp) At the back door (at the back door) I'm minin', warpin' (Yeah, yeah) Attack paths, switchin' paths Wit' pylons up on my side (Woo!) (C'mon) In my ear "need additional pylons" something something...wanna scream
Screw it, you were right. This is hard.
Nice work man!
How about for the rap part:
"in your base some more pylons (in your main) warp in warp in, you wanna scream 4 gate its a real strat, its gonna work, come on come on"
(replaces Cmon In my ear "need additional pylons")
:O That was my favourite line! I do like this though!
1 A, Incoming Attack So pushin' at the front ramp (At the front ramp) At the Back Door (Back Door) I’m ballin', bruisin' (Yeah, yeah) Mass Pain, Droppin' Mains. Wit’ some G-Shields on'a side (Woo!) (C’mon) Passin’ by is a floating factory But this noob's got nothing else to see Just my style, it’s 4gate, it’s beastin' We gonna have fun, c’mon, c’mon, y’all
How about that? Original credit goes to Blarghgh.
(Also again, rhythm doesn't quite match up, (not that this rapper'll mind, he doesn't seem to have any at all) So you'll have to slow it down to stay in time at the 'nothing else to see')
Just when i thought it was all over UGH that forsaken song is forever stuck in my head... Speaking of that awful song i suggest you look up the dubstep version of that song... it is such an improvement, just the fact that she isn't singing through all of it makes it better =O
-You can make the Fs in the chorus FUs, unless the F is just a placeholder for the f word. -forcefield here, forcefield there would flow better than with the 'and' (lol, it changes halfway through) -'where should I hit his base' might flow better than attack his base -Another nerd crushed by 4gate would flow better Hopefully this is helpful. Back to my weed paper.
On March 20 2011 17:02 Potthead wrote: Holy shit this is awesome! TotalBiscuit to record like he did Fear of the Grack? Yes please :D Good work with this. Oh, and nothing can make it worse. Parody "My Jeans" now? :D
All the casting gold in the world could not convince me to do this
On March 20 2011 17:02 Potthead wrote: Holy shit this is awesome! TotalBiscuit to record like he did Fear of the Grack? Yes please :D Good work with this. Oh, and nothing can make it worse. Parody "My Jeans" now? :D
All the casting gold in the world could not convince me to do this
Haha... I have to agree with you. Why would anyone want to be associated with such a terrible/ ear splitting record?
On March 20 2011 15:04 Dr. ROCKZO wrote: I think I've actually managed to make the song worse, which is a feat in itself. Oh well, enjoy the fruits of boredom.
5 o'clock spawn, in Jungle Basin Gonna go rush, gotta be prepared Gotta build my probes, gotta mine minerals Chrono-in' everything, the time is goin' Tickin' on and on, Yes I'mdefinitely rushin' Gotta get down, to his naturalmain choke. Gotta scout his base, I see a terran.
4 Rines at the front ramp Workers at the Back Door Gotta make my mind up Where should I attackto hit his Base?
It's a 4gate, 4gate Crushing nerds with my 4gate A-Move up the ramp, yeah you should be frightened, frightened. 4gate, 4gate Another nerd crushed with my 4gate This build got me all the way to Diamond.
6 minutes in, Snipin' all his Rax's Warpin' in so fast, look at all his d00ds die 1a, 1a, I've won, hooray You know what that means I owned this, don't talk shit Check out my APM, in the replayheyyy (not enough syllables even though this lyric is really good, maybe a good singer can mash it correctly) I got this, you suck, gotblew it Now you know it
(Missing second lead-in and chorus here so maybe something like this) Killin your SC-Vs Blowin up your CC Now to just insult, I Cast Hallucinaaaate
It's 4gate, 4gate Crushing nerds with my 4gate A-Move up the ramp, yeah you should be frightened, frightened. 4gate, 4gate Another nerd crushed with my 4gate This build got me all the way to Diamond.
First I build my first gate, first gate. Then I build my secondnext gate, secondnext gate. "E" "B" "G" and then "Z E" Now that's "GG" My death ball's incoming today.
So then I build the third gate, my fourth gate, comes afterwards. AND LAWL UP THE LADDER I ASCEND
1 A, Incoming Attack So pushin' at the front ramp (At the front ramp) At the Back Door (Back Door) I’m ballin', bruisin' (Yeah, yeah) Mass Pain, Droppin' Mains. Wit’ some G-Shields on'a side (Woo!) (C’mon) Passin’ by is a floating factory But this noob's got nothing else to see Just my style, it’s 4gate, it’s beastin' We gonna have fun, c’mon, c’mon, y’all!
It's a 4gate, 4gate Crushing nerds with my 4gate A-Move up the ramp, yeah you should be frightened, frightened. 4gate, 4gate Another nerd crushed with my 4gate This build got me all the way to Diamond.
It's a 4gate, 4gate Crushing nerds with my 4gate A-Move up the ramp, yeah you should be frightened, frightened. 4gate, 4gate Another nerd crushed with my 4gate This build got me all the way to Diamond.
EDIT: So yeah, syllables don't match up beat for beat, you have to squint your perceptions a little (Speed up, slow down) Hopefully I'll be able to illustrate my intentions when I record.
I also invite you to come up with your own raps.
Made some edits so it flows a little better. That rap is pretty hard so I just left it as Bla did.
On March 20 2011 15:04 Dr. ROCKZO wrote: I think I've actually managed to make the song worse, which is a feat in itself. Oh well, enjoy the fruits of boredom.
5 o'clock spawn, in Jungle Basin Gonna go rush, gotta be prepared Gotta build my probes, gotta mine minerals Chrono-in' everything, the time is goin' Tickin' on and on, Yes I'mdefinitely rushin' Gotta get down, to his naturalmain choke. Gotta scout his base, I see a terran.
4 Rines at the front ramp Workers at the Back Door Gotta make my mind up Where should I attackto hit his Base?
It's a 4gate, 4gate Crushing nerds with my 4gate A-Move up the ramp, yeah you should be frightened, frightened. 4gate, 4gate Another nerd crushed with my 4gate This build got me all the way to Diamond.
6 minutes in, Snipin' all his Rax's Warpin' in so fast, look at all his d00ds die 1a, 1a, I've won, hooray You know what that means I owned this, don't talk shit Check out my APM, in the replayheyyy (not enough syllables even though this lyric is really good, maybe a good singer can mash it correctly) I got this, you suck, gotblew it Now you know it
(Missing second lead-in and chorus here so maybe something like this) Killin your SC-Vs Blowin up your CC Now to just insult, I Cast Hallucinaaaate
It's 4gate, 4gate Crushing nerds with my 4gate A-Move up the ramp, yeah you should be frightened, frightened. 4gate, 4gate Another nerd crushed with my 4gate This build got me all the way to Diamond.
First I build my first gate, first gate. Then I build my secondnext gate, secondnext gate. "E" "B" "G" and then "Z E" Now that's "GG" My death ball's incoming today.
So then I build the third gate, my fourth gate, comes afterwards. AND LAWL UP THE LADDER I ASCEND
1 A, Incoming Attack So pushin' at the front ramp (At the front ramp) At the Back Door (Back Door) I’m ballin', bruisin' (Yeah, yeah) Mass Pain, Droppin' Mains. Wit’ some G-Shields on'a side (Woo!) (C’mon) Passin’ by is a floating factory But this noob's got nothing else to see Just my style, it’s 4gate, it’s beastin' We gonna have fun, c’mon, c’mon, y’all!
It's a 4gate, 4gate Crushing nerds with my 4gate A-Move up the ramp, yeah you should be frightened, frightened. 4gate, 4gate Another nerd crushed with my 4gate This build got me all the way to Diamond.
It's a 4gate, 4gate Crushing nerds with my 4gate A-Move up the ramp, yeah you should be frightened, frightened. 4gate, 4gate Another nerd crushed with my 4gate This build got me all the way to Diamond.
EDIT: So yeah, syllables don't match up beat for beat, you have to squint your perceptions a little (Speed up, slow down) Hopefully I'll be able to illustrate my intentions when I record.
I also invite you to come up with your own raps.
Made some edits so it flows a little better. That rap is pretty hard so I just left it as Bla did.
Can't wait for someone to do this (hopefully). It will probably destroy the internet once it is uploaded though.
On March 20 2011 15:04 Dr. ROCKZO wrote: I think I've actually managed to make the song worse, which is a feat in itself. Oh well, enjoy the fruits of boredom.
5 o'clock spawn, in Jungle Basin Gonna go rush, gotta be prepared Gotta build my probes, gotta mine minerals Chrono-in' everything, the time is goin' Tickin' on and on, Yes I'mdefinitely rushin' Gotta get down, to his naturalmain choke. Gotta scout his base, I see a terran.
4 Rines at the front ramp Workers at the Back Door Gotta make my mind up Where should I attackto hit his Base?
It's a 4gate, 4gate Crushing nerds with my 4gate A-Move up the ramp, yeah you should be frightened, frightened. 4gate, 4gate Another nerd crushed with my 4gate This build got me all the way to Diamond.
6 minutes in, Snipin' all his Rax's Warpin' in so fast, look at all his d00ds die 1a, 1a, I've won, hooray You know what that means I owned this, don't talk shit Check out my APM, in the replayheyyy (not enough syllables even though this lyric is really good, maybe a good singer can mash it correctly) I got this, you suck, gotblew it Now you know it
(Missing second lead-in and chorus here so maybe something like this) Killin your SC-Vs Blowin up your CC Now to just insult, I Cast Hallucinaaaate
It's 4gate, 4gate Crushing nerds with my 4gate A-Move up the ramp, yeah you should be frightened, frightened. 4gate, 4gate Another nerd crushed with my 4gate This build got me all the way to Diamond.
First I build my first gate, first gate. Then I build my secondnext gate, secondnext gate. "E" "B" "G" and then "Z E" Now that's "GG" My death ball's incoming today.
So then I build the third gate, my fourth gate, comes afterwards. AND LAWL UP THE LADDER I ASCEND
1 A, Incoming Attack So pushin' at the front ramp (At the front ramp) At the Back Door (Back Door) I’m ballin', bruisin' (Yeah, yeah) Mass Pain, Droppin' Mains. Wit’ some G-Shields on'a side (Woo!) (C’mon) Passin’ by is a floating factory But this noob's got nothing else to see Just my style, it’s 4gate, it’s beastin' We gonna have fun, c’mon, c’mon, y’all!
It's a 4gate, 4gate Crushing nerds with my 4gate A-Move up the ramp, yeah you should be frightened, frightened. 4gate, 4gate Another nerd crushed with my 4gate This build got me all the way to Diamond.
It's a 4gate, 4gate Crushing nerds with my 4gate A-Move up the ramp, yeah you should be frightened, frightened. 4gate, 4gate Another nerd crushed with my 4gate This build got me all the way to Diamond.
EDIT: So yeah, syllables don't match up beat for beat, you have to squint your perceptions a little (Speed up, slow down) Hopefully I'll be able to illustrate my intentions when I record.
I also invite you to come up with your own raps.
Made some edits so it flows a little better. That rap is pretty hard so I just left it as Bla did.
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Excalibur, you did your edits really well. I'm really looking forward to hearing this when it comes out and sneaking it onto my school's bell music. :D
On March 20 2011 15:12 Whole wrote: where is smix?
Nah, smix can actually sing, if you want to more closely match the song, just get some random person who'll talk through the entire thing and add autotune
First I build my first gate, first gate. Then I build my second gate, second gate. "E" "B" "G" and "Z E" Now that's "GG" My death ball's incoming today.
On March 21 2011 10:41 CheekyDuck wrote: yeah yeah im gonna go bribe suspense, smix is Wayyyy tooo good, and has too much of a sexy voice for this song.
Bribe accepted... I guess I have to do this now huh?
On March 21 2011 10:41 CheekyDuck wrote: yeah yeah im gonna go bribe suspense, smix is Wayyyy tooo good, and has too much of a sexy voice for this song.
Bribe accepted... I guess I have to do this now huh?
On March 21 2011 10:41 CheekyDuck wrote: yeah yeah im gonna go bribe suspense, smix is Wayyyy tooo good, and has too much of a sexy voice for this song.
Bribe accepted... I guess I have to do this now huh?
Give me a few days and I'll make it happen
Ahh hot shit. If my like...three lines of rap make it in I'll be the happiest nerd on TL xD
On March 21 2011 10:41 CheekyDuck wrote: yeah yeah im gonna go bribe suspense, smix is Wayyyy tooo good, and has too much of a sexy voice for this song.
Bribe accepted... I guess I have to do this now huh?
Alright well.. I think I am actually going to do the rap part different from the song's.. because I'm not sure I can purposely be that bad (as the guy did it in the song).. But we will see.. I'll try to keep it as close to the written on here though. Or at least use part of it
On March 20 2011 15:28 Wolf wrote: Most variations of the four warpgate rush do not involve very many sentries.
He understands the most important thing about a four warpgate rush though. His second gate comes after his first, he makes a third and then a fourth afterwards. He's good to go.
On March 20 2011 15:28 Wolf wrote: Most variations of the four warpgate rush do not involve very many sentries.
He understands the most important thing about a four warpgate rush though. His second gate comes after his first, he makes a third and then a fourth afterwards. He's good to go.
This guy, makes complete sense :D
I disagree, 3 before 4? Are you a communist? I don't think so bub.
EPT
Nice one with the lyrics
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