EPT[PL] Wemade It Happen - Page 2
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oBlade
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OpticalShot
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MuffinDude
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Khan will beast it in the second half. GOGOGO! | ||
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I8PP
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chongu
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pangshai
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On October 24 2009 10:19 Shikyo wrote: Otherwise an excellent read, but I think that you might drag the sentences on a bit too much with continuous dots instead of periods. yes you're very right about the dots/commas instead of periods. this is a remnant of highschool english lessons in which constructing the longest, grammatically correct sentence ever is the way to score "language" points for essays. i will definitely try my best to include more periods in future, but unfortunately, cannot guarantee any results, since this is basically the way i've been trained to, and have been writing, my entire life. | ||
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hyst.eric.al
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...need...ktf...players... | ||
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Pufftrees
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Cheers! | ||
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BookTwo
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Ideas
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Plexa
Aotearoa39261 Posts
On October 24 2009 15:28 Ideas wrote: At least he's being non-S class opponents, which is more than you can say for Bisu meh with flash this happens every time when the individual leagues aren't running. He goes a long time without facing any S-class players and just completely stomps the weaker players and "looks invincible." Once the individual leagues get going and he has to face some really tough opponents he'll be back to getting eliminated too early from starleagues again.  | ||
Hot_Bid
Braavos36375 Posts
Please Savior beat Flash... I know there's like a 5% chance of this happening. | ||
pachi
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pripple
Finland1714 Posts
so many good games coming up this week, most of them probably tomorrow, too bad i can't catch them live. loved the writeup, especially the statisfaction, im such a statsjunkie ;p nice to see some of the TL staff doing well in fpl! | ||
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Pyrthas
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On October 24 2009 12:46 pangshai wrote: yes you're very right about the dots/commas instead of periods. this is a remnant of highschool english lessons in which constructing the longest, grammatically correct sentence ever is the way to score "language" points for essays. i will definitely try my best to include more periods in future, but unfortunately, cannot guarantee any results, since this is basically the way i've been trained to, and have been writing, my entire life. Pretend you're Hemingway. Parentheticals? Who needs them. Adverbs? Gone. Short, punchy sentences will get you where you need to be! (I'm a fan of punchy academic writing, too, and always try to get my students to stop being flowery without reason. I guess I'm fighting highschool English teachers on that one.) Edit: stupid typos. | ||
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Mobius
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