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Ok so its my senior year of college. Ive had hard times, But Times have blown up =)
Serious. Ok anyway I freestyle all the time for the last year and for the last 3 months have gotten praise
I just freestyle at friends A LOT, parties A LOT and yea JUST A LOT.
So I dissed my friend john like you wouldnt believe, in rap, and he doesn’t freestyle.
2 days later He Said
Were having an intervention you cant freestyle for a month ( he might have said forever)and he said i sucked and didnt have progress and then passed me the green greens
ME
Fuck Yea a month I wont freestyle for a month and then Ill battle you in a month and kill you in a battle again
He Said
Yea.
Thats the gist of it.
Now Im getting mad ready to beat him.
I want to start writing, and anyway TL is a good place to do it  .
So Lets get going
Im listening to a GUnit Files Right now
COMPETITION
COMPETITION
COMPETITION
Free style battle.
Write as much as you want.
If you stop writing you can leave it or erase it
I tap computers and can get all your zergs
Ill Start
Tuesday Night One Time
Intermission
-Having a Cigarette-
Lights Off
5
Sick taste in my mouth type fast as I can lotta easier than talking
Very slow cannot believe you wouldnt have seen how much thinking
I can get into this scene
My bro, he just told me go slow. Then you can think of any type of flow
I gave a couple lines in public, had to stop cuz im winnin that bet like a know that I should
Hood? No good, yo
Hook
Write now im hittin the beat listenin to this rap ass bein a bitch
He tell me I got nothing like somebody he knows
But he hasn’t heard a word of any of my flows
Start again lets go that’s whats good about
Im about to kill this rapper, I can’t type fast enough
Changed the song damn I gotta get this typing shit
Alrite 50 cent has a better flow, yo that’s how I work ya kno
Chorus forever I can bring it to anything and no one is talking about bling
A thing that I will attest is knowledge and the yo yo yo I lost my train a thought
Like a runaway train not bein fraught. Listen sometimes you gotta backpace and get into place
Or the place hey material world is encompassing decompassing keep frystylin even if im bored to it sober as a board when
I want tell me if you want more I got a Casella Store
So anyway, Wow typing is pretty difficult maybe I'll put an instrumental beat on my music next time
I think this piece has good qualities.
PS
Why Can't I Use Apostrophe's? And I had to take out the quotes erghh  I did use old Word and copied pastied 
That New post button is hard to find
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not really feeling but who knows maybe im reading it wrong 
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needs moar actuall rhymes yes?
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Coffee Shop Spoken Poetry Night?
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OK here goes
2nd try and im going again. Slowin down again gotta go faster pretend
listen im not preachin exactly the word or how anyone should do it if you haven't heard
I'm not thinking about quantifying rhymes measures or metrics
Im spitten off the page like that black guy and whats his name said it sean connery
o so its more like a story please dont bore me I have too much time to read internet
yes thats how i was raised to assume that if everyone consumes the same product
they will give the same energy, pardon me? no sir I will not do that
Hit yourself with a bat, fuckin do it right now and your head would go splat
damn fuck its just stream of consciousness with a little twist and that is word play so i gotta work on that more
My rhymes kinda sound intellectual, but they go in all different directions\
perfection is what my mind wants sex too pleasure centers aroused i can split up in the air to the clouds
this doesnt have to make sense to you, but reading it will clue you in to what im thinking, or maybe not. take it as you wish and you won't get brought to here on this internet forum, where no real rhyme could go on, lets go on skype and someone will beatbox.
Ok ill try just writing one real quick
You shouldn't be the person who stands out in the crowd
the reason i am sayin this, is because man you ain't loud
I wouldnt want to hear what your sayin or be seeing you
but everytime i dont want you there you show up.
listen any intentional tension that im giving off
fires screaming sentiments and bitch im proud
im a new writer in this place
the words im used to watching them flow from face to face
its a bit harder but you get used to it
and i know that after people write there rhymes they go do it
couplings such things coupling morning coupling
heres a rhyme as i note it, its got TL recognition you can quote it.
That sounds like a fucking dr suess thing
man i never write.
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though one takes into account that usually rhymes are heard and then maybe after read by the average public.
so much depends on tonal inflection, body language, blah blah blah.
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Ok, these are premeditated rhymes here. They are not considered freestyle.
Oh yea , you suck. So On October 24 2007 17:38 RedTail wrote:
Hit yourself with a bat, fuckin do it right now and your head would go splat
PS- The New topic button is hard to find specifically for shitty threads like this.
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meh, hard to say anything without without hearing your flow. even i can write rhymes ;/
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kids trying to rap hard to some gunit beats
kid runs when he hears the gun like a track meet
you're soft son and don't ever forget it
talk hard about thugs a blunts all you ever split
and you sit here talking about you know how to freestyle
the skill difference between me and you is your dick compared to a mile
now sit there and think hard about that you smoked out wannabe
you're guilty of being garbage now go to the prosecution and beg for a plea
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please stop this shit you can't even rhyme
kid lives with his mom gangsters don't have a bedtime
only a month off just make it forever
too good to spit this in your face ill just send you a letter
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Australia3818 Posts
Prout, prout, prout que je t'aime
Viens ici mon petit ami
J'ai un secret à te dire dans l'oreille
Que je t'aimerai toujours à la folie
Youpi!
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where is everyone on this lol
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freestyling doesnt include writing your shit out beforehand
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lol
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lmao nickisonfire just raped the OP.
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On October 25 2007 16:58 Nickisonfire wrote:
please stop this shit you can't even rhyme
kid lives with his mom gangsters don't have a bedtime
only a month off just make it forever
too good to spit this in your face ill just send you a letter
every time you rap you make no sense
i can tell you what you should give up for Lent
and why you're at it you should probably give up on life
when i get your letter i'll respond back with a knife.
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yeah i should probably go and get another life
that way you're nerd ass can come and try to kill me twice
talking about coming and trying to stab me
i'd take it serious but you're 13 and i'm 20
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u gotta skate8152 Posts
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dancefaye that made me crack up. but nickisonfire is clearly the better freestyler (stylist?)
i'd throw down but i'm not gangster enough
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
Your rap fucking sucks
Mine sucks too.
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On October 26 2007 16:52 Meta wrote:
dancefaye that made me crack up. but nickisonfire is clearly the better freestyler (stylist?)
i'd throw down but i'm not gangster enough
freestyler maybe.. but it';s trite to the point it isnt even worth my effort to seriously respond to. i figured he'd call me a 13 year old nerd. i guess being clever doesn't have a place in this battle :/
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Australia3818 Posts
http://download.yousendit.com/66AF79C548343E96
Your rhymes are shit, yeah fucking absurd,
They're the worst fucking rhymes that I've ever heard,
You come to teamliquid with your freestyle,
It's the worst piece of shit that I've heard in a while,
Fix your flow, yeah make it snappy,
Or I'll kick yo ass so hard you'll need to wear a fucking nappy,
'Cause you can't control ya bowels like a kid with downs syndrome,
Fuck it's 20 minutes already that I've been home,
I've already seen your epic fail,
I'll tell you what you can do with the fucking red tail,
Shove it up your ass and then set sail,
On a search for the motherfucking Holy Grail,
You won't find it,
But you'll be gone,
Then Teamliquid will party all night long,
And post long threads about help with girls,
large IQ's,
And how far their dick unfurls,
Then they'll abstain from masturbation,
And then make a thread about this crude operation,
They'll have to occupy their minds with playstation,
No wonder they suffer from alienation,
But then as soon as they see a female,
They post in the thread 'hey man i failed',
'Cause they just couldn't hold out fo a day,
I'm leaving that thread 'cause it's motherfucking gay,
Word up
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intrigue
Washington, D.C9934 Posts
On October 26 2007 15:57 YoUr_KiLLeR wrote:
lmao nickisonfire just raped the OP.
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On October 24 2007 21:43 AmorVincitOmnia wrote:
meh, hard to say anything without without hearing your flow. even i can write rhymes ;/
This is exactly whats wrong with the radio rap bullshit. All they want is a decent voice and the lyrics can be what any jackass can write.
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lol@smurg. Incontrol is phat
you kinda sorta almost sound like Zaire Black
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every single fucking time i see one of you computer kids freestylers that do actually take this shit seriously the ONLY thing that comes to my mind is THIS
In case you DO look like this and DO NOT understand what I'm saying... it means that you are not very intelligent
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lol i am preppy.. besides it's more like a play on words.. when you talk intelligently do you have to look like this?
lol it's not about either of us being wrong.. stereotyping usually is right i agree.. but i don't look anything like a 15 year old with my birthday money from my parents of 125$ and some knifes from qvc on my wall
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On October 27 2007 08:25 Nickisonfire wrote:lol i am preppy.. besides it's more like a play on words.. when you talk intelligently do you have to look like this? lol it's not about either of us being wrong.. stereotyping usually is right i agree.. but i don't look anything like a 15 year old with my birthday money from my parents of 125$ and some knifes from qvc on my wall
yo you forgot the 'lil homies' poster
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yeah teamliquid you don't know shit about us
think we're science nerds but we like to fuck and cuss
kids talking hard through these internet memes
till i come right back and 4chan his mom and my peepee
kids talking hard i don't give a shit if you pick terran
i'll shoot you're wraiths up like i'm the red baron
and other forums don't have our iqs of 130 +
you other kids are dumb i bet yours mom shopped at retards r us
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i'm really stoned  sorry lol i tried to do something tl related
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hahaha hilarious,
keep em coming ;D
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when u do this ur supposed to put slashes between lines so people can get the flow
ie. this kid is joke, you know what i mean / thinks he can write rhymes from behind the screen/ well here's a psa so listen up good/ you aren't ghetto and you aint from the hood/ you cant write rhymes and neither can your boy/ so let the dream go you shouldn't pursue it/ you're like a forty year old virgin, tries to but cant do it
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