EPTOn August 30 2007 13:18 SpiritoftheTuna wrote:
You mean, severely?
You mean, severely?
yeah fuck, i kept typoing it.
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lastshadow
United States1372 Posts
yeah fuck, i kept typoing it. | ||
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Infundibulum
United States2552 Posts
"The Terran race means more to me than anything else in this game." -- this one is fine. "They arehuman, they are perfect." -- semicolon, not comma, and a typo. "Every aspect of the terran is that we can't be stopped." -- 'we' should be 'they'. "The perfect player would have to choose terran." -- grammatically correct, although this statement is not backed up. "Our stall aspects, along with our mechanics and gameplay functionabilty is amongst that of the unknown." -- awkward phrases (amongst that of the unknown?), functionality is the word you're looking for. "The Terran race, is the race that can not be stopped if played correct, almost "imbalanced" as you will." -- unnecessary first comma. 'correctly' (it is an adverb). this is also a run on sentence because of the last segment, which should be a seperate sentence. "if you will," not "as." "But the speeds needed in order to obtain this level is too great." -- 'is' should be 'are'. Honestly though, writing mistakes like these are pretty common, especially amongst teenagers (I am one). But don't pretend you have some above average writing ability, and then when people call you out say that you don't care because it's tlnet (i know you didnt say this exactly). in fact to improve as a writer i would worry less about grammar mistakes and more about word choice and the phrasing of your sentences. you can always work on the mechanics later (unlike in bw) | ||
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lastshadow
United States1372 Posts
On August 30 2007 13:27 iNfuNdiBuLuM wrote: Anyway, I will help you with your first paragraph. "The Terran race means more to me than anything else in this game." -- this one is fine. "They arehuman, they are perfect." -- semicolon, not comma, and a typo. "Every aspect of the terran is that we can't be stopped." -- 'we' should be 'they'. "The perfect player would have to choose terran." -- grammatically correct, although this statement is not backed up. "Our stall aspects, along with our mechanics and gameplay functionabilty is amongst that of the unknown." -- awkward phrases (amongst that of the unknown?), functionality is the word you're looking for. "The Terran race, is the race that can not be stopped if played correct, almost "imbalanced" as you will." -- unnecessary first comma. 'correctly' (it is an adverb). this is also a run on sentence because of the last segment, which should be a seperate sentence. "if you will," not "as." "But the speeds needed in order to obtain this level is too great." -- 'is' should be 'are'. Honestly though, writing mistakes like these are pretty common, especially amongst teenagers (I am one). But don't pretend you have some above average writing ability, and then when people call you out say that you don't care because it's tlnet (i know you didnt say this exactly). in fact to improve as a writer i would worry less about grammar mistakes and more about word choice and the phrasing of your sentences. you can always work on the mechanics later (unlike in bw) ty  | ||
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HwarranG
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OneOther
United States10774 Posts
No, its called having an severly above average vocabulary, look up the words. And all the quotes were related to the topic. And these and direction was directed adequatly --- regardless of typos or not, that is definitely NOT English yo. I can't comprehend what you are even trying to say with your last sentence lol. It's just hilarious how you claim it's having a above average vocabulary yet you say "SEVER(E)LY above average vocabulary." I LOL'ed. I would highly recommend not telling anyone to look up the words.. nevertheless, good effort. | ||
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ShaLLoW[baY]
Canada12499 Posts
qft = quoted for truth | ||
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Game[xT]
United States140 Posts
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Wizard
Poland5055 Posts
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Flaccid
8917 Posts
by flaccid Cause they're a bunch of faggots who just sit in their base until they reach 200/200 with +3 weapons and armor. When did that become fun? Plus they're commonly used by a subset of jackasses who think they're cool cause they're failing miserably at something they once 'saw Boxer do'. Ask not what your country can do for you - ask what you can do for your country. -Morgan Freeman | ||
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HwarranG
66 Posts
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merz
Sweden2760 Posts
On August 30 2007 13:55 HwarranG wrote: i feel you threw around the word 'perfect' way too much, humans are a highly flawed race. Which is why it requires perfection. Kinda makes sense. :p | ||
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boongee
United States967 Posts
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Hittegods
Stockholm4641 Posts
On August 30 2007 22:36 Flaccid wrote: Why I Don't Play Human by flaccid Cause they're a bunch of faggots who just sit in their base until they reach 200/200 with +3 weapons and armor. When did that become fun? Plus they're commonly used by a subset of jackasses who think they're cool cause they're failing miserably at something they once 'saw Boxer do'. Ask not what your country can do for you - ask what you can do for your country. -Morgan Freeman Winnar! | ||
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Wizard
Poland5055 Posts
On August 30 2007 22:36 Flaccid wrote: Why I Don't Play Human by flaccid Cause they're a bunch of faggots who just sit in their base until they reach 200/200 with +3 weapons and armor. When did that become fun? Plus they're commonly used by a subset of jackasses who think they're cool cause they're failing miserably at something they once 'saw Boxer do'. Ask not what your country can do for you - ask what you can do for your country. -Morgan Freeman | ||
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iNcontroL
USA29055 Posts
That was the most concentrated hate I have ever seen. | ||
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Jyvblamo
Canada13788 Posts
On August 31 2007 01:46 Wizard[pl] wrote: Don't be stupid, just because that's the stereotypical image of terran, it get's old. But besides, even if that was the case, my 200/200 terran army will own your 200/200 protoss army, and I will win. I find my fun in winning. I find it amusing that you chose to object to his portrayal of Terran players as homosexual turtlers, and all the while you missed the obvious giveaway in the JFK quote being attributed to Freeman. I laugh at you. | ||
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QuanticHawk
United States32157 Posts
On August 30 2007 22:36 Flaccid wrote: Why I Don't Play Human by flaccid Cause they're a bunch of faggots who just sit in their base until they reach 200/200 with +3 weapons and armor. When did that become fun? Plus they're commonly used by a subset of jackasses who think they're cool cause they're failing miserably at something they once 'saw Boxer do'. Ask not what your country can do for you - ask what you can do for your country. -Morgan Freeman I cant decide which is better: how pitiful lastshadows Op was (or he e-gf or his drama with his crush) or this retort hahah. fucking classic. | ||
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Stegosaur
Netherlands1231 Posts
Laugh. The blood & guts, needy greedy, cigarsmoking Terran army -Samwise Didier will wipe that smirk right off your ugly face. Right before I launch it into orbit from one of the shouldercannons of my Thor. | ||
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ShaLLoW[baY]
Canada12499 Posts
On August 30 2007 22:36 Flaccid wrote: Why I Don't Play Human by flaccid Cause they're a bunch of faggots who just sit in their base until they reach 200/200 with +3 weapons and armor. When did that become fun? Plus they're commonly used by a subset of jackasses who think they're cool cause they're failing miserably at something they once 'saw Boxer do'. Ask not what your country can do for you - ask what you can do for your country. -Morgan Freeman Ahahahahahahahah GG. | ||
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MeOwTheMinXi
Australia59 Posts
On August 31 2007 04:10 Stegosaur wrote: Yeah laugh. Laugh. The blood & guts, needy greedy, cigarsmoking Terran army -Samwise Didier will wipe that smirk right off your ugly face. Right before I launch it into orbit from one of the shouldercannons of my Thor. Proof that Terran players...are Class A (A for ACUTE) NERDS... | ||
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