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[story] Jaedong's Base

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dasanivan
Profile Blog Joined June 2008
United States532 Posts
Last Edited: 2009-07-25 14:01:15
July 24 2009 17:24 GMT
#1
"Just call me CAPTAIN CARGO!" she yelled, as the marines filed into the cabin. He had heard of her eccentricity, but he could never have imagined this. He sighed as he took his seat. One by one, other marines filled the spaces in the dropship's fuselage, exchanging nervous glances.

She's crazy, and we're all going to die.

"I know what you're thinking," a woman's voice sounded on the communicator. James Landings turned his head instinctively and realized the squad's medic was talking to him. "Don't worry about her. They say she can outrun even scourge."

"That good, huh?" He watched "Captain Cargo," who looked about five feet tall, enter the cockpit.

"That's right. It's not the pilot I'm worried about."

James frowned.

"I don't think this is a round trip," she clarified.

Just then, the pilot's voice filled the cabin. "Lady and gentlemen, you are about to embark on your greatest journey yet. Tell me, have you crawled up any Zerg assholes lately?" There was a pause. "Don't worry if you haven't: there are plenty of orifices where we're going!"

The dropship began its ascent. James, who had never been on a ship smaller than a battle cruiser during war time, suddenly felt nauseous. He decided that it must be what impending death feels like.

"We can survive if we stick together," the medic reassured him. She smiled.

The other marines were doing their best to keep their minds off of the danger by making small talk. As the dropship began accelerating, the voices died down.

"I heard this is the part where the scourge start hunting you," a marine said.

"They don't hunt you, dummy, they're told where to go by the overlords. If we're spotted by any, we're fucked."

"Shh, maybe the overlords can detect voices."

At this, the cabin fell silent. The dropship began experiencing turbulance. James' heart felt as though it was about to burst. As the marines swayed within the cabin, the pilot's voice crackled onto the intercom.

"CCCGGGGGHHK... we're experiencing some turbulence, as you can seCCCGGGGGHHK... it appears CCCGGGGGHHK-lords are interfering with some CCCGGHK... our systems."

James and the medic met eyes. Her face had become as white as her suit.

"CCGGGHK... ... there we go." The voice paused, then changed tone. "Ohhhhh shit. Scourge."






Update: Pt. 2 added: http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=98416

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andiCR
Profile Blog Joined March 2008
Costa Rica2273 Posts
July 24 2009 17:30 GMT
#2
haha intense :D 5/5
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ZeroCartin
Profile Blog Joined March 2008
Costa Rica2390 Posts
July 24 2009 17:37 GMT
#3
Awesome little story. Although the ending was quite expected keep it up!
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ghermination
Profile Blog Joined April 2008
United States2851 Posts
July 24 2009 17:41 GMT
#4
Awesome! Finish it please, that was really enjoyable.
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Hot_Bid
Profile Blog Joined October 2003
Braavos36374 Posts
July 24 2009 17:44 GMT
#5
On July 25 2009 02:41 ghermination wrote:
Awesome! Finish it please, that was really enjoyable.

its finished...
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Tehinf
Profile Joined September 2008
United States192 Posts
July 24 2009 18:22 GMT
#6
you should have added that the MnM jumped out as fast as they could and some didn't make it. so they're standing in awe looking at how organized the zerg base is only to be overrun by zerglings
"Good, better, best. Never let it rest until your good is better, and your better is best."
dhe95
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
United States1213 Posts
July 24 2009 20:00 GMT
#7
Do marines throw up in dropships?
RushWifDietCoke
Profile Joined May 2008
United States488 Posts
July 24 2009 20:05 GMT
#8
That was really good. I was getting into it, although I thought there would be some mention about Jaedong in it considering the title of the blog. Like the marine saying we're heading to face the most feared cerebrate of the zerg, known as Lee Jaedong or something . Awesome though, I think you should make more!
Nothing to it but to do it.
Jibba
Profile Blog Joined October 2007
United States22883 Posts
July 24 2009 20:08 GMT
#9
On July 25 2009 02:44 Hot_Bid wrote:
Show nested quote +
On July 25 2009 02:41 ghermination wrote:
Awesome! Finish it please, that was really enjoyable.

its finished...

LOL

I especially like how you know where it's going the entire time. :D
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Fontong
Profile Blog Joined December 2007
United States6454 Posts
July 24 2009 21:55 GMT
#10
Needs more korean commentators imo.

Now we know that MrHoon is deadly -__-
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BanZu
Profile Blog Joined June 2008
United States3329 Posts
July 24 2009 22:08 GMT
#11
I like the idea but I don't like the writing style. :/
Sun Tzu once said, "Defiler becomes useless at the presences of a vessel."
Murlox
Profile Blog Joined March 2008
France1699 Posts
July 24 2009 23:35 GMT
#12
On July 25 2009 07:08 BanZu wrote:
I like the idea but I don't like the writing style. :/


What? Come on, this is a perfectly fluid and light writing style
Resistance ain't futile
CharlieMurphy
Profile Blog Joined March 2006
United States22895 Posts
July 24 2009 23:51 GMT
#13
Horrible ending. Great writing and story premise though. Cmon all that climax build up and then no marines raping drones and microing behind minerals?
..and then I would, ya know, check em'. (Aka SpoR)
Insane Lane
Profile Blog Joined August 2008
United States397 Posts
July 24 2009 23:59 GMT
#14
Well done, I liked the portrayal of the medic <3
GHOSTCLAW
Profile Blog Joined February 2008
United States17042 Posts
July 25 2009 00:06 GMT
#15
On July 25 2009 08:51 CharlieMurphy wrote:
Horrible ending. Great writing and story premise though. Cmon all that climax build up and then no marines raping drones and microing behind minerals?


it was missing what it needed to close out the story imo. I can see why other people love it too - great writing.
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Batibot
Profile Blog Joined August 2008
Philippines348 Posts
July 25 2009 02:25 GMT
#16
Nice writing. Though, you could have added more action. Getting hit by only 1 scourge because a hero marine jumped and killed the incoming.
Jaedong has to be a Bonjwa. Tired of of rooting for July.
dasanivan
Profile Blog Joined June 2008
United States532 Posts
July 25 2009 03:05 GMT
#17
i am planning to continue the story in a new entry. Thanks for the comments, they are all very appreciated.
QuickStriker
Profile Blog Joined January 2009
United States3694 Posts
July 25 2009 18:26 GMT
#18
Hmmm.... this is one interesting story.... but I realized, are they trying to go to Jaedong's base??? wtf, are you serious?? Jaedong would %!()#!*U$*@*@#*! that dropship like no tomorrow...

On July 25 2009 02:44 Hot_Bid wrote:
Show nested quote +
On July 25 2009 02:41 ghermination wrote:
Awesome! Finish it please, that was really enjoyable.

its finished...


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