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Mr.Bimbles
Iceland457 Posts
But this video truly is a pot of gold! From laughter on the ground I rolled. And went on uncontrolled What a retard he truly is Doupt his genes allow him to create jizz Sry coudn't find something to rhyme Is that such a crime!?! Time to draw this to a close now, So I take my time to bow Like srsly wtf, WOW!    | ||
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Qwyn
United States2779 Posts
What a retard he truly is, a Total lack of the gene for jizz And now I'm out of words to rhyme - A major offense and a capital crime. Would have cut out the third - useless for the most part as you've already effectively closed. | ||
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Kaeru
Sweden552 Posts
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Mr.Bimbles
Iceland457 Posts
On September 06 2012 08:02 Kaeru wrote: Qwyn pro-poet :D I noes, From top to toes! | ||
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ggrrg
Bulgaria2716 Posts
2/5 for the poem (only 1st stanza was any good) 55/5 for the video xD | ||
The_Templar
your Country52797 Posts
When a poem is written, it should be obvious what is meant. Video is ok. | ||
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Epishade
United States2267 Posts
Also when you see the word jizz in the poem, it loses a couple of points. 2/5 | ||
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Roe
Canada6002 Posts
On September 06 2012 07:52 Qwyn wrote: Your flow in the second stanza was a bit convoluted. What a retard he truly is, a Total lack of the gene for jizz And now I'm out of words to rhyme - A major offense and a capital crime. Would have cut out the third - useless for the most part as you've already effectively closed. Qwyn could be one of those rap stars you see everyday on BET | ||
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Qwyn
United States2779 Posts
On September 06 2012 12:30 Roe wrote: Qwyn could be one of those rap stars you see everyday on BET Thank you. I try to make my sarcasm read like a total try-hard. | ||
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Mr.Bimbles
Iceland457 Posts
On September 06 2012 11:06 Epishade wrote: Wtf was that kid doing in that video? Did he hit himself in the head on purpose and then post it on youtube? If that's the case then I'd say your blog title is a fair assessment. Also when you see the word jizz in the poem, it loses a couple of points. 2/5 I coudn't find anything to rhyme. Is that sucha crime? | ||
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Mr.Bimbles
Iceland457 Posts
On September 06 2012 13:50 superbarnie wrote: So you laugh at people who have mental disabilities, and make TL threads to make fun of them? He isn't mentally disabled, it was supposed to be a lame video that would like be fake, but instead he slammed it into his head (accidentally) xD... | ||
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Mr.Bimbles
Iceland457 Posts
On September 06 2012 13:37 Qwyn wrote: Thank you. I try to make my sarcasm read like a total try-hard. LOL. | ||
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