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Jane Eyre: The Beginning of the End

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DreaM)XeRO
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
Korea (South)4667 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-04-13 19:48:51
April 06 2010 21:12 GMT
#1

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thoughts, criticisms
its for my senior term paper

*
cw)minsean(ru
FiBsTeR
Profile Blog Joined February 2008
United States415 Posts
April 06 2010 21:15 GMT
#2
I remember reading this in high school. It made me cry... because it was so painful to read. But yeah I'm sure it was an important landmark piece of literature, etc., etc..
DreaM)XeRO
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
Korea (South)4667 Posts
April 06 2010 21:16 GMT
#3
On April 07 2010 06:15 FiBsTeR wrote:
I remember reading this in high school. It made me cry... because it was so painful to read. But yeah I'm sure it was an important landmark piece of literature, etc., etc..

no. not at all the sentiments i am feeling
im a second semester senior and this is the ONLY thing stopping me from getting PLASTERED all over the school walls every day. -_-

i need to pull at least a 65 to pass the course and graduate
its like pulling toenails from the roots man.

i have no inspiration no muse
cw)minsean(ru
Tom Phoenix
Profile Blog Joined January 2009
1114 Posts
April 06 2010 21:49 GMT
#4
I thought Antigone qualified as the first great heroine?
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Liquid`Jinro
Profile Blog Joined September 2002
Sweden33719 Posts
April 06 2010 21:52 GMT
#5
Among rare instances in which the female takes over the role as the main character/ the heroine, Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte stands the tallest.

Among the*
?

I think.
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DreaM)XeRO
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
Korea (South)4667 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-04-06 22:01:07
April 06 2010 22:00 GMT
#6
On April 07 2010 06:49 Tom Phoenix wrote:
I thought Antigone qualified as the first great heroine?

good call. but im really just trying to grease up my essay

On April 07 2010 06:52 FrozenArbiter wrote:
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Among rare instances in which the female takes over the role as the main character/ the heroine, Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte stands the tallest.

Among the*
?

I think.

oo thank you
cw)minsean(ru
Masamune
Profile Joined January 2007
Canada3401 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-04-06 22:29:56
April 06 2010 22:26 GMT
#7
Two words: Sparks Notes.

I tried reading the book in grade 12 English but gave up and still raped the course. I actually did better than people who had read the whole book because I would read the significance of passages, thoroughly understand the different themes and elements etc.--which were all included online--and thus had more substance to my papers.

With that said, I probably couldn't tell you much detail about the book! It has been way too long, it's not that my method was inefficient (aside from my cramming lol).

As for criticisms, I would probably reword your thesis to make it sound less extravagant. I'm probably the last person to ask about literature, but there were probably other significant works involving strong women. One that comes to mind is Cleopatra... wasn't there a work by someone involving her and Mark Anthony?
micronesia
Profile Blog Joined July 2006
United States24637 Posts
April 06 2010 22:42 GMT
#8
There are tons of cases of women being the glorified hero and all that in fiction... you might want to qualify your statement that men are glorified/emphasized more somehow...
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MoltkeWarding
Profile Joined November 2003
5195 Posts
April 06 2010 23:09 GMT
#9
If it's high school you can probably get away with it. Your thesis is vague enough that you can back it up with a load of vague qualifiers to somehow make the point that Jane Eyre was a sexual milestone in literature.
Muirhead
Profile Blog Joined October 2007
United States556 Posts
April 06 2010 23:24 GMT
#10
I would change it to the following
Just some suggestions. In the parenthesis I put some reasons for changes.

Throughout history, art and literature have been dominated by the masculine figure. From Homer’s Iliad to the modern day Harry Potter, countless epics, novels, and stories have set male figures as their main focus (before you made it sound like the Iliad was a male figure). The feminine figure, however, has been cast as the accomplice, the side kick, or the silent force driving the male. From Odysseus' Penelope to Harry Potter's Hermione, the female figure has never been as glorified as the male hero. Among those rare novels in which a female heroine takes the lead as the main character, Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte stands the tallest. Its heroine, Jane Eyre, overcomes many difficulties on the road to a better life: a life filled with love, religion, and happiness. Charlotte Bronte, by showing that women could be independent, hardworking, and, in Jane’s case, stubborn, created the beginning of the end of female exclusion from the literary world.

Still not perfect but I think its a lot better while still leaving most of your wording intact. What do you think?
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DreaM)XeRO
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
Korea (South)4667 Posts
April 06 2010 23:43 GMT
#11
omfg. thank you so much
ahah <3
cw)minsean(ru
XinRan
Profile Blog Joined August 2008
United States530 Posts
April 07 2010 02:19 GMT
#12
You might want to share what class this is for, and what the requirements of the paper are. That way people can give thoughts and criticisms appropriate for your requirements.
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