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feedback pls. dont be easy on me, I just started doing this kind of stuff, point my mistakes so I can improve
savior drawing attempt
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disciple
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feedback pls. dont be easy on me, I just started doing this kind of stuff, point my mistakes so I can improve | ||
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Sadness
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Spanxxx
United States408 Posts
On October 21 2009 01:36 Sadness wrote: looks like kwanro i agree. looks like ya just traced over a image very roughly. your line is too thick. looks like a cartoon, unless that's what you were going for. | ||
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disciple
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![[image loading]](http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt161/discwalls/blavla.jpg) I want to find my own stuff and develop some sort of a style ![[image loading]](http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt161/discwalls/shhh.jpg) | ||
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Necosarius
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Lemonwalrus
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gumbum8
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Hittegods
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DivinO
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omninmo
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skyhigh's nose and lips. great job otherwise | ||
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freelander
Hungary4707 Posts
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disciple
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caldo149
United States469 Posts
Also I agree that the noses need some work, it would make your drawings look a lot more like Savior and Skyhigh respectively if you fixed them. Savior's seems too wide and Skyhigh's seems not wide enough and also a it might be a bit too low. Lips are too distinct, adds femininity as stated before.Perhaps back off a little on the outline but make the line across the middle (where his mouth would open) more pronounced, bolder. and the shadow on Savior's face makes it look like he got punched. | ||
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zcxvbn
United States257 Posts
On October 21 2009 02:50 freelander wrote: That is go.go without glasses! Was about to post this. Nice drawing nonetheless. | ||
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disciple
9070 Posts
On October 21 2009 02:59 caldo149 wrote: the hair swooshes where the light hits it should go in the actual direction that their hair is going in the real picture, it makes it look different from reality otherwise.Try to make the edges go off in the same direction more or something. Also I agree that the noses need some work, it would make your drawings look a lot more like Savior and Skyhigh respectively if you fixed them. Savior's seems too wide and Skyhigh's seems not wide enough and also a it might be a bit too low. Lips are too distinct, adds femininity as stated before.Perhaps back off a little on the outline but make the line across the middle (where his mouth would open) more pronounced, bolder. and the shadow on Savior's face makes it look like he got punched. thanks a lot ! | ||
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Husky
United States3362 Posts
If so I think its really good. As others suggested I would try making the lips and nose a little less prominent. The outlines are not only black but also pretty thick for the style you're doing. Other than that I think its really good. The next big step is drawing a picture that is in a unique pose that you made :D Keep it up though, I like looking at your work | ||
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ludic123
Norway161 Posts
I suggest trying to look at the drawing through a camera or a mirror. It will most likely help you notice your mistakes. Try it, and see for yourself. =) | ||
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ShoCkeyy
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disciple
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Mortality
United States4790 Posts
On the other hand, I really like your SkyHigh drawing. Ironically, the same shading technique used on SkyHigh works much better, probably because of how much shading there is and where on the body it's located. But I still think you should darken up some of the lines to add definition. | ||
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