EPTfeel free to critic THA DRAWINGS NOT ZE GRAMMARS AND SPELINGS OKAY
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
feel free to critic THA DRAWINGS NOT ZE GRAMMARS AND SPELINGS OKAY | ||
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SpicyCrab
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Edit: Never mind, Missed when you said that you were. But, what kind of crit are you looking for? | ||
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
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TitleRug
United States651 Posts
edit: On October 26 2010 09:16 seRapH wrote: "a lot" but it doesn't bother me alot how long do these take? nice  | ||
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emperorchampion
Canada9496 Posts
gratz :D | ||
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JadeFist
United States1225 Posts
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Binky1842
United States2599 Posts
+ Show Spoiler + On October 26 2010 09:04 JadeFist wrote: 5 brownie points to whoever can find the grammatical error in the title. a lot* SHIP IT, BABY | ||
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Thereisnosaurus
Australia1822 Posts
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seRapH
United States9716 Posts
On October 26 2010 09:04 JadeFist wrote: 5 brownie points to whoever can find the grammatical error in the title. "a lot" but it doesn't bother me alot how long do these take? | ||
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
all painted in photoshop takes about 12-16 hours per pic the bottom one im still working on and is about 8 hours in | ||
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Coagulation
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Chrispy
Canada5878 Posts
Besiiiides that they look pretty bad ass. | ||
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mcgriddle
United States253 Posts
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Coagulation
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LSB
United States5171 Posts
On October 26 2010 09:29 Coagulation wrote: Btw still looking for a writer to collaborate on a graphic novel. Make a graphic novel on one of the mafia games! Plenty of people would help you. | ||
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aike
United States1629 Posts
 A lot is 2 words yes, but in common usage people use it as 1 so it's not a big deal. Nice art work there  A bit dark, maybe more light? | ||
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
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aike
United States1629 Posts
On October 26 2010 09:54 Coagulation wrote: well i already have the concept/story setup but as you can see from my awesome thread title im not good at writing only good at drawing soldiers with blackened legs. Who needs a good story when you have awesome soldiers with blackened legs?! Just draw lots of explosions and stuff ;D | ||
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Guilford
Australia290 Posts
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
On October 26 2010 10:06 Guilford wrote: maybe you can draw a few panels of your concept and people who are interested will provide more input into your concept and you can collaborate from there i dont need input so much as i need a script. im so terrible at dialog plus my idea is so awesome im afraid everyone at tl.net would see my idea and make there own graphic novel with my story and get rich while i would be left behind with just a blog post with terrible grammar. | ||
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RyuChus
Canada442 Posts
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plated.rawr
Norway1676 Posts
On October 26 2010 10:34 RyuChus wrote: Explain what the story is about. I'm pretty sure tons of people will help you. Seconded. Add a quick bit about the first ten or so pages you want done and what characters should be present, and I might see if I get some ideas. A basic storyboard would help as well, unless you haven't really got any structure set yet. | ||
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hoborg
United States430 Posts
The only critique I have is that most of the poses seem off-balance. The first one seems like he's falling over to the left side a bit, the second one is the best but still seems a bit off balance to the left (maybe because the arm on the right side seems too small?). The third one seems like he's falling forward a bit (maybe more light on his front thigh to make it seem like its coming forward more) and the last one seems like his weight is all on his toes and he would fall backward. | ||
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
On October 26 2010 11:06 hoborg wrote: That's a cool style, really nice textures. The only critique I have is that most of the poses seem off-balance. The first one seems like he's falling over to the left side a bit, the second one is the best but still seems a bit off balance to the left (maybe because the arm on the right side seems too small?). The third one seems like he's falling forward a bit (maybe more light on his front thigh to make it seem like its coming forward more) and the last one seems like his weight is all on his toes and he would fall backward. I think they look off balance because I was trying to make it as a capture in time while they are moving. | ||
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emperorchampion
Canada9496 Posts
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
you guys wanna see more pics?? or i can write some more and we can make fun of my poor grasp of the written English language. | ||
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Coagulation
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emperorchampion
Canada9496 Posts
On October 26 2010 12:56 Coagulation wrote: cool i shot you a pm with details you guys wanna see more pics?? or i can write some more and we can make fun of my poor grasp of the written English language. Yeah, I'd be really really interested in working on some project. Have you ever approached Tadzio? The guy has a mad knowledge of comics, I think he did some sort of thesis for college in regards to comics. Cool pictures btw :D | ||
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
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iDoMiNaTe2.0
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
On October 26 2010 14:02 iDoMiNaTe2.0 wrote: HEY NICE DRAWINGS MAN U HAVE SOME GIFT FOR DRAWING ON PHOTOSHOP I WOULD LIKE TO BUY U A DRINK ON FACEBOOK WILL U WRITE MAI STORIEZ?? I WANT IT ALL IN CAPS. | ||
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iDoMiNaTe2.0
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
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CharlieMurphy
United States22895 Posts
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
where do you see blurry at ?? as for context.. i dunno what kind of context your looking like backgrounds to the pictures? or like a written description of the pictures?? | ||
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