Third Times a Charm

MrBGJM

Australia124 Posts

October 05 2010 16:50 GMT

The comments on my last entry where...less than positive, but i have had some offer their help and advice, so not all was bad.

I honestly thought 4 games a day would help me get better, but after some feedback i have raised it to about 10 a day and it feels better already.

Todays final tally, Out of 9 games, 5 victories!
Feel alot better now, +65 to score, but alas, still in bronze.

For those who wished/wish to help me out via replay analysis i have 2 replays from today, a ZvT and a ZvP. Note: that im more confident in a match up against terran than protoss and absolutely mortified of facing another zerg opponent, seriously.

Without further delay here are the links;

These are both games i won and are the 2 most recent games from today. Constructive criticism is welcomed. Please note that only today have i really been able to keep my minerals this low (and its still very high). There is something i feel im missing in my play, something that lacks that keeps me in the bronze league, help me find this thing so i can fix it?

I also would like to openly apologize to any and all that i may have upset with my last post.

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On October 06 2010 03:35 a176 wrote:
What is this? You are obviously not bronze level and I'm not sure why you're asking for criticism for a league you obviously don't belong in.

Im unsure if this is a compliment but ill take it as one.
If you view my sc2 rank (http://www.sc2ranks.com/sea/188198/Void) on the graph you will notice i was placed in bronze, went to silver, then back to bronze, and not on purpose in case you are wondering.

I watch endless amounts of sc2 videos on micro, macro, strats, pro games, i have 100's of replays of pro zerg, and of course the day9 daily, i currently aim to move as far in rank as i can and always looking for improvement, so i did ask for people to point out my flaws and how to overcome them.

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On October 06 2010 04:36 Too_MuchZerg wrote:
Nice you did win some games... now post losing replays instead so all weaknesses can be taken out.

Will do, these games where just the latest 2, and it was 4am so i got kinda lazy.

So by request here are two games in which i lost;

Well thanks guys, just a note about the ZvT, thats the second game in a few hours in which i versed that player on the ladder so he just rushed me

what really kills me is that i had a roach warren (i think) and didnt have roaches.

Anyway, a 4hour nap isnt enough to keep me functioning well, so im going back to bed, my brain is dragging me off, so...thanks again to any and all that will/have helped

GL, HF, Peace