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Laptop & Desktop Combo! Possible SC erotic fiction

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ShaperofDreams
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
Canada2492 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-05-22 07:55:57
May 22 2010 07:55 GMT
#1
So I have come to a decision concerning my gaming/writing/browsing/note-taking needs. That is to play SC2 on a desktop. I simply cannot ABIDE laptop keyboards and I bet the screen would piss me off as well.

to handle all other needs I will have a laptop.

I'll have work for the summer and will be able to save up 1,000$ hopefully. With this cash I intend to purchase either a Netbook or a Lenovo since I've read great things about both in the 20 laptop threads I've just read.

I don't need to spend all the money. really, by 1000$ I mean everything but my kitchen sink, and I don't have a kitchen sink.

My laptop needs are this:

- Decent battery life (8 hours would be good)

- No crazy overheating problems

- Decent weight

- MOST IMPORTANTLY: Durability, I would LOVE if this could last 4+ years.

So TL, which one? Netbook or Lenovo, a specific type/edition would be ideal. I know very little about laptops except that there are plenty of bullshit ones and a few good brands.

What will I do in return for TL's most gracious assistance?

Poll: What should I write for TL?

SC2 EROTIC Fan-fiction (44)
 
94%

SC2 Fan-fiction (3)
 
6%

47 total votes

Your vote: What should I write for TL?

(Vote): SC2 Fan-fiction
(Vote): SC2 EROTIC Fan-fiction




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Bitches don't know about my overlord. FUCK OFF ALDARIS I HAVE ENOUGH PYLONS. My Balls are as smooth as Eggs.
ShaperofDreams
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
Canada2492 Posts
May 22 2010 07:58 GMT
#2
Man my name is way too long it covers the title of any OP i post
Bitches don't know about my overlord. FUCK OFF ALDARIS I HAVE ENOUGH PYLONS. My Balls are as smooth as Eggs.
538
Profile Blog Joined November 2008
Hungary3932 Posts
May 22 2010 08:00 GMT
#3
I'm not sure "Laptop & Desktop Combo! Possible SC erotic fiction" would fit fully besides any name...
oh, speaking of which:

WTF
BW fighting!
GTR
Profile Blog Joined September 2004
51503 Posts
May 22 2010 08:13 GMT
#4
i'd prefer a k-pop erotic fan fiction tbh.
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shindigs
Profile Blog Joined May 2009
United States4795 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-05-22 09:21:41
May 22 2010 09:15 GMT
#5
Here's something to inspire you:

+ Show Spoiler +
Click click, tap tap.

A familiar noise of frantic micro whispered through the halls of the Hwaseung house. The monitor emitting a cool blue flickering over the young face of Jae Dong, his eyes in focus and frustration as he madly clicks and taps away at his screen. His slender hands grasping the mice in sheer aggression with his fingers moving madly at an unreal speed.

“DAMNIT!” cried Jae Dong as he smashed his keyboards with her hands.

A quivering but comforting voice arose from the darkness, “Jae Dong…”
It was Ju Heung.

Jae Dong’s persona changed instantly, trying to keep a cool and controlled image. “Oh, hello Ju Heung. I didn’t notice you…did you see everything? I’m just a bit stressed that’s all.”

Ju Heung put his worried hands on Jae Dong’s shoulder, “It’ll be over soon Jae Dong. This Free Agency business is causing you too much worry. You’re the best player in the world right now, who wouldn’t want to sign you?”

Again, Jae Dong’s mood instantly change, “What about every single team in South Korea?! I can’t even negotiate with Hwaseung! Don’t you understand anything?!”

Ju Heung jolted back, “I’m...I’m…I’m sorry Jae Dong…” and with a whimpering tone he said “I just know you’ll do great.”

Jae Dong, realizing that his hyper aggression got the best of him, apologized, “I’m sorry Ju Heung…it’s just that I don’t know if I can ever play the same again if I can’t be around the people I love…especially the boy that I love.”

Ju Heung blushed.

“I just can’t stand the thought of leaving this house, and especially the thought of being away from you,” Jae Dong continued, “You’ve inspired me to be the player I am today.”

Ju Heung couldn’t speak; his words were lost in Jae Dong’s soothing voice and comforting tone.
Noticing Ju Heung’s offbeat posture, Jae Dong asked, “What’s wrong Ju Heung? Did I say something wrong?”

“No, not at all...” Ju Heung replied, “It’s just…you’re really cute when you’re compassionate.”
“Ju Heung…”

The two boys stood there in silence, their eyes gazing upon their lover’s tender face. The moon now casted a dim glow over both of the boy’s faces, illuminating the loving innocence that encompassed both their longing gaze.

“Well, I’d better get back to bed,” said Ju Heung, “I just came in to check on you. I know how late you like to stay up practicing.”

With that Ju Heung turned around and attempted to walk away, until Jae Dong swiftly grabbed his hand.”

“Ju Heung…wait…there’s something I need to…”

“…Jae Dong?”

The two boys moved closer to one another, continually gazing into each other’s loving face. Jae Dong’s lips were trembling, they moved closer towards Ju Heung’s gentle lips.

“Jae Dong…I’m not sure if…”

“Shhh…”

“I love you…Jae Dong”

And with that, their lips embraced.

What started out as a tender and innocent kiss quickly turned into a passionate and rough expression of burning love and exploding lust as the tongues of both of the boys invaded each other’s mouths, running up and down the seeping orifice.

Ju Heung then proceeded to work his curious lips down Jae Dong's long smooth neck, with Jae Dong's supple skin driving Ju Heung's taste buds into pure ecstasy.

Jae Dong moaned tenderly as he slid his slender fingers down the familiar body of his lover, making his way down to Ju Heung’s slender waist and creeping his fingers over Ju Heung’s tight butt.

“Wait…Jae Dong you’re moving too fast…”

But Jae Dong always ignored his lover’s cry for gentleness, gripping Ju Heung’s innocent butt and shoving his tongue deeper into Ju Heung’s wet mouth.

Ju Heung instantly reacted by gripping the enormous bump protruding from Jae Dong’s skinny jeans, massaging it almost with a sense of revenge in his seduction. Jae Dong aggressively responded by pushing Ju Heung swiftly unto the bed.

Jae Dong violently kissed his lover’s neck and body over and over, mixing his saliva with the sweat dripping from Ju Heung’s steaming body. Ju Heung was struggling for control, but could do nothing but succumb to the pleasure overwhelming his entire body.

Jae Dong proceeds to work his wet mouth down to Ju Heung's now intensely pulsating manhood and proceeds to unzip the skinny jeans that turns him on every second of the day.

“Ju Heung...why is your manhood so hard? Are you thinking dirty thoughts?”

“Jae Dong...don't say that..it's embarrassing.”

“Ju Heung, you're so hard, what do you want me to do down here.”

“Jae Dong...no...it's too embarssing, don't stare.”

“Ju Heung pulls Jae Dong up back to his eye level Jae Dong...please, make love to me...”
Their lips embrace, at first, tenderly, but their passion soon sparks into a raging bonfire or hormones saliva falling out of their mouths and mixing with their sweat, their bodies covered and glistening in the moonlight while embracing one another, true lovers in a passionate kiss.

Jae Dong continues rubbing Ju Heung's manhood as he shoves his tongue once again into Ju Heung's mouth before proceeding to bathe Ju Heung in his saliva as he works down his neck and back down to Ju Heung's chest slowly rising up and down from heavy breathing but with his heart racing from his lover's touch.
“No...Jae Dong...it's dirty down there.”
But known for his hyper-agression, Jae Dong suddenly engulfs Ju Heung's manhood in his mouth rapidly moving his tongue up and down.

“Jae Dong...it feels so good...ugggh”

Jae Dong moves faster embracing Ju Heung's legs and feeling the slender smoothness, is only forced to go faster his head bobbing up and down. Ju Heung is trying to supress his moans of pleasure with his pillow, now soaked in his sweat. Jae Dong can barely make out Ju Heung's cries of love and slowly ends his oral escapade as Ju Heung nears climax.

“I hope you didn't think I would try to finish you off with that harassment"

He winked and moved his way back up so his eyes may gaze upon Ju Heung's wet face covered in saliva and sweat, his hair greased with utter love across his face.

Ju Heung could hardly contain Jae Dong,

"Ju Heung…I want you..."

"Jae Dong...".
But before he could say another word Jae Dong grips Ju Heung's hands, weak with pleasure and again forces his lips on to him
"Please...give it to me the way I love it, make me your true lover.”

Jae Dong pushes Ju Heung agianst the wall on his bed. "Wait Jae Dong...you're being too rough...the others might hear us."

"Then let them hear us, let them listen to our love...". Ju Heung almost heard a sense of sorrow in Jae Dong's voice, a sense of emotion from the tyrant. "Ju Heung...I want this to last forever..."
"Jae Dong...we'll be forever...".
Jae Dong's grip weakens “I...can't stand leaving you..."
"Jae Dong...please...I love you... I want to feel your love, MAKE LOVE TO ME"

With that, Jae Dong, shoves his hard pulsating manhood into Ju Heung's tight hole.

Ju Heung let out a loud moan

"ooohhh Jae Dong, yes..."

Jae Dong slowly moving his manhood in and out of Ju Heung's smooth butt.

"Ju Heung...you feel so good inside, I love you so much"
"Jae Dong...please…you can be a bit more rough"

"Ju Heung...I can't control myself around you"

Jae Dong moved faster and faster inside of Ju Heung, causing Ju Heung to cry out in ecstasy and his eyes tightly shut from all the immense pleasure stemming from Jae Dong's throbbing member.

"Ju Heung...oh Ju Heung...Ju Heung..." Jae Dong moans, while moving his hands from Ju Heung's waist and towards caressing Ju Heung's erect nipples.

"oh..be gentle there..."

"oh Ju Heung...i love how sensitive you are"

Rubbing his fast fingers against Ju Heung's nipples causing his mind to rapidly ascend towards pure pleasure.

"Jae Dong, take me, take me please" cried Ju Heung.

Jae Dong abusing his lovers body, pleasure errupting in both the boys. Ju Heung turns his head and begs Jae Dong for a kiss, "Please...I want to feel your tenderness once more" their lips embrace once more, this time their tongues immediately exploring each other's mouths as their bodies continue to grind against one another, their undying love for one another only to be matched by their primal desires for one another as Jae Dong's cock continues to penetrate Ju Heung's anus over and over.

Ju Heung's senses of pleasure overload into tears, "Please don't cry Ju Heung..""I can't...it feels so good, don't ever stop, keep going…"

Jae Dong can't help but continue to pleasure himself with Ju Heung's tender body, his smooth skin
continually coming in contact with his own young body.

Jae Dong continued to pound into Ju Heung, over and over, each thrust driving Ju Heung into pure ecstasy until he couldn’t hold back any longer. He gripped Jae Dong’s hands and forced him to drive his manhood deeper and deeper into him, until Jae Dong’s moans grew louder and louder until the tyrant himself could not hold his inhibitions back any longer.

“Ju Heung…I’m getting close…I’m going to…”

“Jae Dong…me too, keep going…go faster..harder…”

“Ju Heung, I’m going to…ugghh,…I’m going to…”

“Ahhhh Jae Dong…”

The two lovers rapidly approaching their climax glanced at each other once more before the ultimate pleasure possessed both their bodies. Their loud and sensual moan echoed in the moonlight, and Jae Dong’s love juices filled up Ju Heung’s hole, eventually spilling out over Jae Dong’s manhood and dripping down Ju Heung’s slender thighs.

Ju Heung turned around and quickly engulfed Jae Dong’s manhood, wanting to taste the juices of his lover. Jae Dong closed his eyes as Ju Heung now returned the favor from earlier.

After cleaning Jae Dong’s manhood with his tongue, the two boys collapsed on one another. Their glistening sweaty bodies now mixed with love juice embraced, and the two boys gazed at each other’s exhausted but satisfied faces.

“Jae Dong…that was too amazing…I really love you.”

“Ju Heung, I can’t live without you…I’m so scared…”

“It’ll be ok, no matter what happens, we’ll always have each other in the end…I just know we’ll make it.”
“I’ll fight for us Ju Heung, for our love, because now I know what is truly important to me. The negotiations don’t matter to me anymore, all that matters is that I can stay here…with you.”

“Jae Dong…”

With that, the two boys fell asleep in each other’s arms. Their embrace warming both their bodies, the bed soaked with sweat, saliva, and man juice, but love encompassed the two boys, and it kept the two boys together in the most blissful state of slumber for the rest of the night, each dreaming about the other. The moonlight shined on to the two lovers, asleep like angels, now truly unafraid of what may happen the next day, knowing that love will surely keep their bond alive.

Epilogue
http://www.teamliquid.net/forum/viewmessage.php?topic_id=100970
'Tyrant' Jae Dong successfully re-contracted with his original team Hwaseung OZ.

After the first negotiations with Hwaseung Jae Dong declared free agency. However, all 10 gaming teams gave up on bidding for him, and he almost lost his life as a progamer.

However, during the 2nd negotiation period with his original team, Jae Dong and his parents talked a lot and finally succeeded in re-contracting with Hwaseung.

Hwaseung's agent said "After endless attempts to re-contract Jae Dong, we were able to come up with acceptable results for both sides." "I want to thank Jae Dong's parents for negotiating without giving up to the end."

Since Jae Dong succeeded in re-contracting, he will be playing next season as Hwaseung OZplayer.


EDIT: accidently quoted instead of spoilers.
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Navane
Profile Blog Joined February 2007
Netherlands2749 Posts
May 22 2010 09:17 GMT
#6
Or you could hook up your laptop to a screen + keyboard when at home to game.

Some people only travel between 2 or 3 places, you could put screens + keyboard at each place. You could buy one of these, depends on what kind of mobility you need. You have a lot of variety in this market, they can be smaller (= easier to travel) yet give you more comfort if used with screen + keyboard than a laptop. [image loading]

deathgod6
Profile Blog Joined January 2008
United States5064 Posts
May 22 2010 10:45 GMT
#7
On May 22 2010 17:13 GTR wrote:
i'd prefer a k-pop erotic fan fiction tbh.

There are way too many girls to choose from.
4.0 GPA = A rank 5.0 GPA = Olympic --------- Bisu, Best, Fantasy. i ♥ oov. They can get in my BoxeR anyday.
Vin{MBL}
Profile Blog Joined September 2006
5185 Posts
May 22 2010 12:11 GMT
#8
On May 22 2010 18:17 Navane wrote:
Or you could hook up your laptop to a screen + keyboard when at home to game.

Some people only travel between 2 or 3 places, you could put screens + keyboard at each place. You could buy one of these, depends on what kind of mobility you need. You have a lot of variety in this market, they can be smaller (= easier to travel) yet give you more comfort if used with screen + keyboard than a laptop. + Show Spoiler +
[image loading]




whats the model number on this?
madnessman
Profile Blog Joined May 2009
United States1581 Posts
May 22 2010 14:54 GMT
#9
1 person voted against erotic fan fic?!
Myrmidon
Profile Blog Joined December 2004
United States9452 Posts
May 22 2010 16:26 GMT
#10
For a laptop, high battery life, low heat, low weight, and low cost all correspond to low system specs. A high-power machine contains more components that consume more energy and thus generate more heat. Therefore I think you should get some kind of netbook. I know little about reliable netbook brands though.

Some Lenovo laptop keyboards are actually quite usable; others are just decent. Lenovo laptops cost significantly more than laptops by other companies with similar internal CPU/GPU/RAM/screen/etc specs. The reason people like them is because they have higher build quality and might actually last 4 years (my old IBM from right before they were bought by Lenovo lasted that long). The "mobile" versions of Lenovo laptops with the higher battery times and lower weights like you want are even more overpriced IMHO. If you already have a desktop, I wouldn't invest in a mid-high end laptop.
decafchicken
Profile Blog Joined January 2005
United States20078 Posts
May 22 2010 18:49 GMT
#11
I play on my laptop keyboard all the time. sure its not ideal but you get used to it in like a day. I like flat laptop keyboards now more than desktop ones just because i use it more. and the screen isn't bad either depending on what you get. my 15.6 inch is fine

that being said i would totally get a netbook + ~600$ gaming rig
how reasonable is it to eat off wood instead of your tummy?
MrStorkie
Profile Joined April 2010
United Kingdom697 Posts
May 22 2010 20:18 GMT
#12
On May 22 2010 17:13 GTR wrote:
i'd prefer a k-pop erotic fan fiction tbh.


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