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My Remix of Phantom Part 2 (Feedbeek appreciated)

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eatmyshorts5
Profile Blog Joined January 2009
United States1530 Posts
March 16 2010 05:32 GMT
#1
This is my first ever remix, it's of phantom part 2 by justice. I would like some feedback from the community, tell me what you think, or what could be fixed, or just how much it sucked.

Heres the link:


Thanks

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LuDwig-
Profile Blog Joined February 2007
Italy1143 Posts
March 16 2010 05:43 GMT
#2
I don't like the beginning..you could make it more smoother...it is really to "mechanic"
also at 1:30 whene there is only the piano "playing" i don't like the sound:|. however this is just an amazing work if it is your first remix
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sob3k
Profile Blog Joined August 2009
United States7572 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-03-16 05:47:45
March 16 2010 05:46 GMT
#3
dude, I appreciate trying to do something other than a regular 4-4 beat, but the one you use is KILLING me, I juss keep waiting for it to break into something.....even....and it never does

In Hungry Hungry Hippos there are no such constraints—one can constantly attempt to collect marbles with one’s hippo, limited only by one’s hippo-levering capabilities.
1postperday
Profile Blog Joined January 2010
United States45 Posts
March 16 2010 05:54 GMT
#4
Perhaps you could make the drums a little less simple by adding percussion on top of it. Adding variety to the beat would make this remix come alive. You clearly know what you're doing re: the technical aspects of making something like this.
See you tomorrow
sob3k
Profile Blog Joined August 2009
United States7572 Posts
March 16 2010 07:16 GMT
#5
what software did you use for this?
In Hungry Hungry Hippos there are no such constraints—one can constantly attempt to collect marbles with one’s hippo, limited only by one’s hippo-levering capabilities.
chobopeon
Profile Blog Joined May 2003
United States7342 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-03-16 08:14:21
March 16 2010 08:14 GMT
#6
add variety to the drums even if it's just taking a beat out every once in a while - preferably something more substantial though. other than that, it was enjoyable.
:O
madnessman
Profile Blog Joined May 2009
United States1581 Posts
March 16 2010 09:10 GMT
#7
yeah you're beat isn't that great but I really like your synths. there is a bit of dissonance starting at 0:50ish. really good for a first mix!
Manit0u
Profile Blog Joined August 2004
Poland17238 Posts
March 16 2010 10:13 GMT
#8
As an avid techno lover I must say "no" to this one.
A couple of reasons:
1. You could slow it down a bit.
2. It's just boring... You've somehow managed to strip this tune of all epicness (guitars, fat bass etc.)

And a note for future: With your first remixes just try to stick to the techno pyramid scheme (where you begin with one or very few tones, keep building it up and then gradually remove them to revert back to your background stuff which allows for a smooth transition into another song for a DJ).
Time is precious. Waste it wisely.
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