Let me know what you guys think! I should have enough time to make changes before we present.
(one last note, the snowboarder is of course shaun white)
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ZaplinG
United States3818 Posts
Let me know what you guys think! I should have enough time to make changes before we present. (one last note, the snowboarder is of course shaun white) | ||
Terranlisk
Singapore1404 Posts
Doesn't really tell me anything about the resort itself. | ||
SanguineToss
Canada815 Posts
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ZeroCartin
Costa Rica2390 Posts
The general idea of it is ok. I do feel the compositions are way too planar, with only one layer of depth. The first 7 sketches are ok, but Id recommend rethinking the composition for number 4 so we can see all the characters *maybe a 3/4 frontal shot a lot closer, cut by waists?* EDIT: Actually this shot helps establish they are on top of the cliff, so adding another shot would be the way to go. Then, on number 8 and 9 I didnt know it was some sort of cliff because of the point of view of the camera. I would also include a small quick closeup of the main character as he prepares for the jump. On the 12th shot, you really need a bit more dramatic ending shot, to make the character look really cool, instead of just a third person kind of view. The last 2 shots are ok. Hope this input proves to be helpful. Keep up the good work! | ||
ZaplinG
United States3818 Posts
also, wow, thanks a ton, zerocartin. i really do appreciate it ^^ | ||
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