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RyuChus
Canada442 Posts
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plated.rawr
Norway1676 Posts
On October 26 2010 10:34 RyuChus wrote: Explain what the story is about. I'm pretty sure tons of people will help you. Seconded. Add a quick bit about the first ten or so pages you want done and what characters should be present, and I might see if I get some ideas. A basic storyboard would help as well, unless you haven't really got any structure set yet. | ||
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hoborg
United States430 Posts
The only critique I have is that most of the poses seem off-balance. The first one seems like he's falling over to the left side a bit, the second one is the best but still seems a bit off balance to the left (maybe because the arm on the right side seems too small?). The third one seems like he's falling forward a bit (maybe more light on his front thigh to make it seem like its coming forward more) and the last one seems like his weight is all on his toes and he would fall backward. | ||
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
On October 26 2010 11:06 hoborg wrote: That's a cool style, really nice textures. The only critique I have is that most of the poses seem off-balance. The first one seems like he's falling over to the left side a bit, the second one is the best but still seems a bit off balance to the left (maybe because the arm on the right side seems too small?). The third one seems like he's falling forward a bit (maybe more light on his front thigh to make it seem like its coming forward more) and the last one seems like his weight is all on his toes and he would fall backward. I think they look off balance because I was trying to make it as a capture in time while they are moving. | ||
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emperorchampion
Canada9496 Posts
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
you guys wanna see more pics?? or i can write some more and we can make fun of my poor grasp of the written English language. | ||
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
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emperorchampion
Canada9496 Posts
On October 26 2010 12:56 Coagulation wrote: cool i shot you a pm with details you guys wanna see more pics?? or i can write some more and we can make fun of my poor grasp of the written English language. Yeah, I'd be really really interested in working on some project. Have you ever approached Tadzio? The guy has a mad knowledge of comics, I think he did some sort of thesis for college in regards to comics. Cool pictures btw :D | ||
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
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iDoMiNaTe2.0
288 Posts
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
On October 26 2010 14:02 iDoMiNaTe2.0 wrote: HEY NICE DRAWINGS MAN U HAVE SOME GIFT FOR DRAWING ON PHOTOSHOP I WOULD LIKE TO BUY U A DRINK ON FACEBOOK WILL U WRITE MAI STORIEZ?? I WANT IT ALL IN CAPS. | ||
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iDoMiNaTe2.0
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
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CharlieMurphy
United States22895 Posts
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
where do you see blurry at ?? as for context.. i dunno what kind of context your looking like backgrounds to the pictures? or like a written description of the pictures?? | ||
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